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part 22
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Geet after hearing Maan's voice slept peacefully and was so soothed...
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Chapter 23
Radhe was sat in his room.. so much had gone on in the past month.. his sister, who was his life nearly died, she was hurt, abused, shot and Upset and he couldn't help but blame himself.. If only he had told her all this before but that wouldn't have helped anyway... He was reason she had ended up like this, she needed more security than ever.. he felt bad askin maan to babysit, well look after his little sister but he knew he could count on maan.. and even though maan had a business to run, he felt maan needed time away from the horrible office...

The office wernt to blame, it was only Maan and his brain. His brains fault for thinkin about work, work and more work... Ever since he had known maan he has never been out with anyone since his break up with his 1st girlfriend... The break up was alittle bit emotionally, even for radhe to sit and think about..

Thinking of Girls, Radhe had met the most beautiful girl, and she was well she was his little sister's best friend... How gorgeous she was.. he never got round to thankin her for helpin him calm down after that emtional breakdown in Geet's room.. For her best friend she did look slightly older than geet but hey who was he to judge age...

He got up and walked around his room.. Memories of Geet, Sameer, Rahul And Radhe were roaming around.. as if he could see what happened as they were younger right in front of his eyes... Geet the little baby, playing with her toys, and laughing while she was sitting on radhe lap... he could almost picture her sleeping on him...

Geet was more of a daughter to him than a sister really.. he had brought her up from when she was really young, he and his brothers had been her life line, her support, her mother, father, best friends, brothers and even the sister.. She was All they had, all they needed to keep them all alive and well.. he remembered the day she went to school and on her first day how tormenting it was for her to be there without her brothers..

Flashback...

Geet was 5 when she started school.. At first she was excited, her brother's were going to take her to school.. She just couldn't wait.. She Had missed her brothers when they started school, luckily she wernt left alone when they went to school, Geet had been left with daadima... Daadima spoilt her rotten as did maan's parents... as she was the only girl in the house, yet still without her brothers geet was not enjoying it.. she just missed er brothers too much...

Today Geet went up to her room inkhurana mansion... She got dressed in her uniform and had two little pigtails in... she had a pink lollypop in her mouth with a small backpack on her bed.. she put teddy next to the backpac too.. taking teddy with her to school... she put her shoes on and went down stairs.

she got her school bag and went downstairs with dadima happy as ever as she was finally goin to school with her brothers... As Radhe was the oldest he went to high school... He took the day off as he wanted to be there for his Little sister... her first day at school would be hard for her, especially infron of new people and that too more than 10... Geet was not used to much more than 10 people, Dadima wanted Radhe to Go to school but this was much more important than going school her thought..

He waited at the bottom in the living room with Maan, maan's mother and dadima... Geet was super excited, she came down with vicky, Sameer & Rahul... she had her bag on her back as she held onto her teddy bear... she had a lollypop in one hand and a big smile plastered on her face...Geet had prepared herself, thinking all the time she would be in school...

Flashback Ends (Will Continue this later)

A knock on the door brings Radhe To The present... He gets up and opens the door.. there At the door stood Kajol... she looked abit nervous to be knocking on his door...

"Hey," She Said nervously not lookin directly at him...

" Erm, Hi." He replied back...

"Vo, main Geet ke bari main poochnay aayi thi," she asked...

"Vo Geet, Yaha Nahi Hain." he said...

"Okay, Main baad main aajoage.." she told him before walking away...

Now was the chance He thought to himself... Say it now...

"Vo, mujhe aap se koi baat karni hai," he shot out...

kajol was suprised... a little nervous but once she was about to turn she felt odd but he called her and now she was all nervous again but she don't know why... it was strange, Her heart started thumping a little faster than usual.. she started sweating alittle too .. she wondered what he wanted to talk about... they had nothing apart from well Geet..

She turned around unable to meet his eyes...

Slowly she let her eyes move up slowly scannin his body along the way till they reached his face.. When they reached his face, she slowly moveed them up alittle bit more to reach his eyes...

As soon as he caught her looking into his eyes, there was a small but brief Eyelock... both stared into each others eyes... their eyes were talking but both were unable to read what they were sayin to each other... Kajol Blushed absent mindedly not know the whole reason for the blush... Both Soon Broke out of the eyelock ... Radhe Cleared his throat and looked away quickly..

" I wanted to say thank you," he said quickly...

"Thank You??," said a confused kajol..." Kyun," she asked...

"Vo Mujhe Himmat dena ki liya... Jaab Geet," He left the rest unspoken as Kajol Got The Hint...

" Its okay," she said...

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Geet was sat in Maan's Car... Just her, Maan And The silent Space... "Uf ho Babaji, Yeh Kaise Aadmi hai... Kuch bolta bhi nahi.. aapne usko bolne ki liya zubaan de na?? she asked her babaji quietly making sure maan couldn't hear her... "phir yeh use kyun nahi karta."

Geet looked at maan who was more interested in Driving than talking to her... Suddenly she decided to do somethin... she looked in her bag and checked her phone... she had no signal... she looked at maan and saw his phone on his leg.. The car stopped near a traffic light she slowly reached forward to Get his phone.. she moved her right arm towards his leg, slowly reaching over to get his phone... She stopped and looked at him and saw him looking back at her...

"Kya Kar rahi ho Geet," he asked her..

Geet Was now Freaked out.. What would she say, erm she couldn't thiink of anything...

"Vo maan, Mere Phone Pe vo... Haan Maan Mere phone par network nahi hai, tho maine socha ki main aapka phone use karo... Veerji ko phone karne ke liye," she told him wondering what he was going to say...

" Pouch nahi sakti kya," he said teasing her...

"Vo maan Aap kuch vo, Haan maan aap na kuch bol nahi raha thay aur drive bhi kar raha ho, isiliye maine aapko disturb nahi kiya.. waise bhi Babaji ne aapko zubaan di ha bolne ke liye usse tho use kor," she said now trying to intimidate him...

"Kya kaha tumne," he said suprised she could actually say this...

" Haan Maan Aap na Bilkul boring ho, Pata nahi Aap ko kaise pyaar kar.." she stopped what she was saying and she immediately looked into his eyes... There was so much emotion in them that sometimes it seemed kinda hard to read... But one thing was for sure, He definiately Loved her.. That was for sure...

She leaned over and placed her arms around his neck. She slowly pulled herself closer to him and gently and ever so softly place a small kiss on his lips before whispering " I love you," To him... she then hugged him..

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