Jab bhi do dil Milenge...Kuch to log Kahenge

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey Friends I tried to write a poem from Dr.Ashutiosh's point of view...I guess mixed mine too😆...Hope you will like it ...Do tell what you felt about it😊
Jab Bhi Do Dil Milenge
The sweetness of your face
always attracts me towards you
when i saw you sleeping I felt
Snow white the sleeping beauty
came out from the story
Was that Right to think about you
By me...My conscience said
What i am feeling is wrong
As bars are always between us
She smiled at me,My heart skipped a bit
And asked me"Really are there any bars"
My eyes can read her feelings but
This society cannot read my heart
can love be happen between two
opposite shores of sea
No it cannot ..then why I want to call her
Then Why i want to talk to her
Then why i want to listen to her endless talks
Which makes no sense
She is coming towards me
I should chnge my way
But what if she follows me
Until where I will run away
From my feelings
Why should i think about the world
whenever or hamesa
"Jab Bhi Do Dil Milenge"
Kuch To Log Kahenge ...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow sur...amazing poem👏...great one...it was so cute and sweet one...loved it...u expressed everything so dreamly...loved each and every line and specially the ending...and ur comparisons in the poem were great too...keep making more.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Excellent poem.. dear.. too good!! <3
Pls. keep writing more..
n this was a clincher..
"Jab Bhi Do Dil Milenge"
Kuch To Log Kahenge ...


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: roopalgupta

wow sur...amazing poem👏...great one...it was so cute and sweet one...loved it...u expressed everything so dreamly...loved each and every line and specially the ending...and ur comparisons in the poem were great too...keep making more.

Thanks roopal...😳...They are so adorable together that thoughts themselves make chains...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Armu4eva

Excellent poem.. dear.. too good!! <3

Pls. keep writing more..
n this was a clincher..
"Jab Bhi Do Dil Milenge"
Kuch To Log Kahenge ...


Thanks Tanu...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks dear😊
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Thanks😊

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