FF: Intoxicated Confessions -Pt25 (LastPart) pg56 - Page 29

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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG!!! I loved it!
Such a graceful exit!!!! I hope this hapens in the serial too but if you think about it if the CV's make Lavanya's character negative then she will create problems in ArShi's life and that will extend the show...
But anywayzz...thanks for the PM!
Update soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago
omg i love it...please add me to ur pm list if u have one
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Posted: 13 years ago
thnx fr nt making lavanya a negative character!!!!
loved it!!!!
pls update nxt part soon!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
plsss add me to ur pm list ur writtings r jst wow...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Aww really nice today's update.
very well done
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Posted: 13 years ago
it was awesome dr... pls add me in your pm list pls...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow yr... it was awesome... now waiting fr the next part... nd pls add me in your pm list pls...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing update👏,Thanks for the PM🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
Please please update soon please
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Posted: 13 years ago

I have decided to chop out Shyam as he is going to be in the real show a lot now...and I have had enough of him, with him I just cant make this right...so here it goes...just want my FF to be a happy one.(few more to go)...with Shyam I just cant do it...there is too much drama anyway going on with him in the picture.


Part 22:


So here it goes...

Arnav, Anjali, Khushi are going towards the car...they are talking...

Anjali: Humme toh vishwas nahi ho raha hai ki lavanya ne itni badi kurbaani dedi...aur khushiji yeh sab aapki waja se hai...poora hi badal daala lavanya ko...aap toh jaadu ki poodiya ho...chote ko bhi badal diya aapne...

Khushi shyly looks at Arnav and Arnav is speechless...they both are feeling very awkward in front of Anjali...Arnav looks at Khushi

Arnav: Khushi..mein tumhe ghar chod deta hoon

Khushi looks at Arnav and then Anjali and feels very uncomfortable

Khushi: nahi hum theek hai...hum khud chale jayenge

Anjali: Arre '.aise kaise...chote aap pehle humme chod deejiye phir Khushiji ko...humme ghar mein kaam hain...

They all sit in the car and Arnav keeps looking at Khushi through his rear mirror...Anjali observes that and has a cute smile on her face...

Anjali: chote agar nazarein road par nahi hai toh gadbad ho jaayegi...

Arnav is shy...

Arnav: di please

Anjali: ok baba...sorry

RM is here and Anjali gets down...Khushi is still behind and Anjali sees that...

Anjali: Khushiji...wahan kya kar rahi hai...aage bhait jaayiye '...

Khushi: smiles and says, Ji

Arnav and Khushi are driving together...back to her home...They are very quiet and not talking to each other...I guess they cant believe what happened with Lavanya and its all over.

They reach Khushi's home...Khushi is about to get out and he holds her hand...

Arnav: Kal mil sakti ho...

Khushi: kahaan...

Arnav: jahaan tum kahogi...

Khushi: humme nahin pataa...koi humme dekh lega toh...

Arnav: mujhe koi farak nhai padta...

Khushi: haan '..aapko nahi padega lekin...hamare ghar waalon ko nahi pataa...

Khushi runs away quickly...Arnav calls...Khushi!

Next morning at RM:

Nani is talking to a pandit...

Everyone is gathered...

Nani: humne ek faisla kiya hai ki ab hum chote ke liye khud ek ladki dhoondenge...

Arnav and Anjali are shocked...

Arnav: Naani, yeh sab kya mazaak hai...

Naani: Mazaak nahi chote...Humne kahaan tha na...agar Ms. Kasyap is ghar ki bahu baneke laayak nahi toh hum aap keliye ek susheel ladki dhoondh ke le aayenge...

Arnav: Naani...mujhe shaadi nahi karni hai...

Anjali intervenes and tells Arnav to go and she will handle it...

Bell rings: Its khushi...

OP comes and tells everyone that its Khushi...

Nani is very delighted to see Khushi...and tells Khushi to explain to Arnav.

Khushi is clueless...Arnav is looking at Khushi...

Nani: Khushi bitiya ab aap hi samjhaayiye chote ko...Ms. Kasyap toh iss ghar se chali gayi hai...toh humne socha hai ki hum chote ke liye apni pasand ki ladki iss ghar mein leke aayenge...yeh dekhiye...ladkiyon ki tasveerien...kitni sunder ladkiyaan hai...

Khushi is shocked...and looking at Arnav...

Khushi: ji '..hum kaise...

Naani: Khushi bitiya...aap hi chote ko samjha sakti hai...

and she hands over all the pictures of the girls to Khushi and nani walks away...

(Comedy rabba ve tune going on)

Khushi looks at the pictures and then looks at Arnav. She comes to Arnav...and has a smirk on her face...

Arnav angrily walks to his room...

Khushi: Arnavji, yeh ladki bahut acchi hai...hai na?

Khushi smiles and Arnav looks at her

Arnav: kya bakwaas kar rahi ho tum...yeh tum keh rahi ho...

he takes the pictures and tears them...and corners Khushi to the wall...and he is very close to her...

Arnav: Theek hai tum jiss ladki se kahogi...mein uss sehi shaadi karoonga...aur suhaagraat ke din mein

Arnav runs his fingers on her face and Khushi has her eyes closed and he runs her fingers on her lips and blows air on her neck and kisses her shoulders...

Arnav: uss ke saath yeh sab karoonga...yehi chahti ho na tum...

Khushi opens her eyes...and nods her head...

Khushi: hum toh mazaak kar rahe the...she hugs him really tight and says... "I love you"...aap sirf hamare hain...

Arnav kisses her on her forehead and says... "I love you too" Phir aisa mazaak kabhi mat karna...

Khushi: Nahi karenge...lekin...naaniji ko kaun samjhaayegaa...

Arnav: woh tum mujhpe chod do...waise bhi naani tumhe bahut pasand karti hai...

Anjali comes in and sees the 2 love birds...and clears her throat...

Arnav and Khushi move away from each other...

Anjali: Chote, Shaayad tumhe ab darwaaza bandh kar dena chahiye...Waise hum khushiji se kuch poochna chahte the...Aap kal kya rahi hain...

Khushi: Kal...hum apne parivaar ke saath mandir...choti si puja rakh hi hai...

Anjali: Puja...kisliye...

Khushi: who kal hamara janam din hai...

Arnav is shocked...

Anjali: Arre wah...toh aapko apne parivaar ke saath rehna chahiya...aapko janam din ki bhaut badaayiyaan.

Anjali walks off...

Arnav pulls Khushi...tum ab keh rahi ho ki kal tumhara birthday hai...agar di ne pooch nahi hota toh mujhe pataa hi nahi hota...

Khushi: sorry...ab toh pataa chal gaya na...ab ghar jaana hai...

Arnav: Kal pooja ke baad...mein tumhe lene aa raha hoon...tayaar rehne...theek 6 baje...

Khushi: lekin amma aur babuji se kya kahenge...

Arnav: woh mujhe nahi pataa...mei aa raha hoon "theek 6 baje" tumhe lene...

Khushi goes and Arnav smiles...




Edited by shybabe - 13 years ago

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