FF: Intoxicated Confessions -Pt25 (LastPart) pg56 - Page 26

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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome...at last lavanya is going to be out of the scene and arhi are going to be together. Thanx for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome chapter. aww lavanya heard :(
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Posted: 13 years ago
I finally caught up!!!!!
i can't wait til the next part
la heard everything!!! but i feel bad for her
please update soon and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely work.
plz add me to ur pm list.
i'm having a little hard time navigating through u'r work.
if it's not tooo much to ask can u plz put up the links or page numbers on the first page.
i read the first page with all chapters n then 20th...don't know where r the rest of em :(
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Posted: 13 years ago
It was a dhamakedar part. First i was also confused abt anjali's behaviour but then i understood. U really potray the relationships nicely. Thanx for pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 21: this is a long one compared to other parts...enjoy😛


Next Morning at RM:

Arnav gets up...and has a smile on his face...He hears some commotion going on in the hall.

Lavanya is screaming at OP because he didn't keep any water in her room...She is yelling like crazy...

Everyone comes out and ask whats going on...

Nani: Ms. Kasyap...kahe ko chilla rahi hai aap...subah...

Lavanya: Naniji...chilaaon nahi toh aur kya karoon...mein iss ghar mein rahti hoon na...toh iss ghar ki mehmaan hoon...wah kya mehmaan navaaji hai...paani tak nahi milta is ghar mein...

Nani: ek din paani nahi peeyengi toh mar nahi jaayengi...

Lavanya: Aap ke bas mein hota toh mujhe toh zeher deke maar hi dalti...

Arnav: Lavanya...yeh kya tamasha ho raha...what the hell is going on...Tum naani se iss tarah baat kyon kar rahi ho...?

Lavanya: Kyon, Nani toh mujhe nichaa dikhaane mein koi kasar nahi chod thi...tab toh tum kuch nahi kehte...aur ab mujhe sikhaare rahe ho...

Arnav is very upset...and frustrated...

Anjali keeps her hand on Lavanya's shoulders and tries to talk to her.

Anjali: Lavanya kya hua tumhe...kyon itna chilaa rahi ho...aap kissise naraaz hai kya...Kya humse koi galti hui hai...

Lavanya just shoves Anjali's hands and by mistake Anjali falls down...

Arnav get very mad and screams at Lavanya...he runs to Anjali and asks her if she is okay...Arnav makes her sit...he turns around and walks towards Lavanya...

Arnav: How dare you...Lavanya...tumne di ke saath aisa bartaav kiya...ab tum ek pal bhi iss ghar mein nahi rahogi...get the hell out of my house...

Lavanya: Mujhe bhi koi shauk nahi iss ghar mein rehna...paagal karke choddiya iss ghar ne mujhe...

Lavanya...walk to her room in anger and is packing her bags...

Anjali comes in and tells her not to do this...chote ki taraf se hum maafi maangte hai...Lavanya doesn't hear a word and walks out of her room and looks at Arnav standing in the hallway and walks out of RM...

Nani: chote dekha aapne...kya nateeja hua...hum kahat rahe ki Ms. Kasyap mein naahi koi sanskaar hai aur nahi koi tameez

Arnav just walks away frustrated...and Anjali looks on...dejected

Arnav calls Khushi...and he explains to her about the whole morning chaos...Khushi cant believe her ears...

Arnav: Tum chahti thi na...ki mein lavanya se baat karoon...ab uski zaroorat nahi padegi...usse ghar se nikaal diya hain meine...

Khushi: Kya...kyon kiya aapne aisa...gusse mein aapka ka dimaag kaam karna hi band kar deta hai...

Arnav: What...usne di ke saath batameezi ki...

Khushi: Humme vishwas nahi hota...Lavanyaji aisa bilkul nahi kar sakti

Arnav: toh kya mein jhoot bol raha...

Khushi: Phir se gussa...

Arnav: Tum Lavanya ka side kyon le rahi ho...

Khushi:..Kyon? Kyon nahi le sakte hai '.hum unhe pasand karte hai...woh acchi hai...hum lavanyaji ke ghar jaa rahe hai...humme unse baat karni hogi...

Arnav: Dekho Khushi...khabardaar uske ghar gayi toh...Khushi tum paagal ho...

Khushi cuts the phone...

Arnav gets mad...tum bahut jiddi ho...

Arnav goes to his sister and tells her that Khushi has gone to Lavanya's house to speak to her...

Anjali: Kya...

Arnav: Di, Pataa nahi waha Lavanya ke ghar mein kya hoga...

Anjali: Chintaa mat karo chote...

Arnav: Di, mein lavanya ke ghar ja raha hoon.

Anjali: Chote...Khushiji samjhdaar hai...woh theek hongi...

Arnav: No di...i have to go...

Anjali: Hum bhi chalte hai tumhare saath...


At Lavanya's house:

Khushi rings the bell...Lavanya opens the door...she looks at Khushi and is shocked...

Lavanya: Chamkili...kyon aayi ho yahaan...meri training toh khatham ho chuki hai

Khushi: Lavanyaji, kya hua...aap yahaan kyon aa gayi waapas...

Lavanya: Bahut ho gaya...dam ghut tha hai mera uss ghar mein...

Khushi: Lavanyaji...aap kuch chupaa rahi hai...humse...

Lavanya: Nahi chamkili...chali jaaon yahaan se...

Khushi: Nahi hum nahi jaayenge

Lavanya holds Khushi's hands and pulls her towards the door and opens the door and gives her push.

Khushi lands directly on Arnav as he and Anjali arrive there too...

Lavanya looks at Khushi in Arnav's arms...and has tears in her eyes...and turns away...

Arnav: Lavanya...tumhari itni himmat...how dare you do this...

Lavanya: Accha..ASR...takleef ho rahi hai tumhe...aur who bhi Chamkili ke liye...kyon huh! Iss chamkili ke liye tumne aaj mujhe daata...

Khushi intervenes...

Khushi: lavanyaji, aap gussa mat keejiye...dekhiye aap dono jhagda mat keejiye...

Lavanya: Oh God Chamkili...tum aisi nahi manogi...

She raises her hand to slap her...and but Arnav comes in front and holds Lavanya's hand...Arnav has rage in his eyes...

There is silence...everywhere...wind is blowing...and Lavanya has tears her eyes...and khushi is crying tooo

Arnav is holding La's wrist very tight...

Lavanya: Bas...tumhari aankhon mein yehi pyaar dekhna chahti thi apne liye...lekin mujhe yeh bhi nahi mila...

Lavanya turns to Khushi

Lavanya: Tum bahut lucky ho chamkili, ki ASR tumhe pyaar karte hai...

Khushi's, Arnavs, and Anjali's eyes wide open and shocked...Arnav slowly releases his hand...from Lavanya...

Lavanya: Kyon, ASR! Kya nahi kiya meine tumhare liye...aur tumne mujhe is tarah...I loved you...

Arnav: Lavanya...

Lavanya: Jab tum di se baat kar rahe the...kal raat meine sab sun liya tha...isliye meine soch liya tha ki ab mein uss ghar mein nahi reh sakti...isliye meine woh sab naatak kiya tha...taaki tum khud mujhe uss ghar nikaal do...

Chamkili tum bahut acchi ho...aur lucky bhi...ki ASR tumhe itnaa pyaar karte hai...Mein tumse naraaz nahi hoon, lekin dard toh hoga na...mere seene mein bhi toh dil hai...

Khushi: Lavanyaji...hum aap dono ki zindagi se chale jaayenge...aap Arnavji se bahut pyaar kartihain na...

Lavanya giggles...

Lavanya: Paagal ho tum...apni kapdo ki tarah...tum chali jaaogi toh ASR mujhse pyaar karna seekhlenge kya..kya woh jee Paayenge tumhare bina...Pyaar karvaaya nahi jaata Khushi ho jaata, jis tarah tum dono ko hua...

Anjali comes to Lavanya...Lavanya apologizes to Anjali for what she did...

Arnav says he is very sorry for not telling this earlier..he didn't know how to...

Arnav: I am sorry Lavanya...meine tumhe galat samjha...

Lavanya: Its ok ASR...Mujhe toh Khushi ko thanks karna chahiye...train jo kiya hai mujhe...agar tum meri jagah hoti chamkili toh yehi karti na (Khushi is surprised)...toh dekho...tumne toh mujhe badal hi daala...aaj la khushi ban hi gayi...agar puraani Lavanya hoti toh ASR koh kabhi bhi nahi chod thi...

Mere naseeb mein ASR ka pyaar likha hi nahi tha...lekin chamkili...tum ASR ki pyaar ki kadar zaroor karna yeh sirf nassebwaalon ko milta hai

Lavanya wipes her tears and brings Khushi to Arnav and places Khushi's hand on Arnav and says

Lavanya: Mein chahti hoon ki tum dono hamesha Khush raho...

Arnav: lavanya tum...I will be fine ASR . Mein London jaa rahi hoon waapas...ab meri life wahi par hai...shayad...koi aur ASR meri liye wahaan par wait kar raha ho...she smiles

Screen freezes...

Lavanya's graceful exit...(dont you all wish this happens instead of her turning back to negative...i want the track this way...lets see)


Edited by shybabe - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey Shy!!
This was fab hun!!
I loved the way you handled Lavanya's exit. It was so gracefully done!!
I really liked the way Arnav defended Khushi though. It came so naturally to him!!
Thanks for the PM hun!!
😊
Edited by FebruaryFlower - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it..and yeah want a good exit for la..a positive la...not a bad..as now a days she acts nice
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Posted: 13 years ago
waiting for nxt..when u ll do nxt
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Posted: 13 years ago
great end to Lavanya's track. loved it. almost got emotional!

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