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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey sona nice part, keep up the good work!!!
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nice snia.
waiting 4 next part
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nice part sona 😃 , m waitin 4 d surprise sumit is gonna give 2 kk 😉 😛
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IN AFTER NOON
Sumit call kumkum

Kumkum = sumit ka phone hello

Sumit = hi kumkum kiya tum mujhse mil sakte ho shaam ko

Kumkum = sumit kahi aur kumkum na aaie aisa kabhi nahi hoga , kaha milna hai

Sumit = tum tayar rahina main tum ko lena aaio ga

Kumkum = magar kaha chalna hai

Sumit = who surprise hai

Kumkum = sumit aal kal tum bohat surprise dene lagi ho

Sumit = 6:00 pm tak tayar rahina ok by

Kumkum = mere baat to suno

Sumit = shaam ko mile ge LOVE U by

Kumkum = I LOVE U 2 by

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IN EVINING

kumkum is ready & w8ing 4 sumit , sumit calling kumkum main aaraha ho

kumkum = im ready

sumit = to mere w8 karo

kumkum = main wahi to kar rahi ho 6:00 baje kaha tha aur ab 7:00 baj rahi hai

sumit = main bas agya tum bahir aaio

kumkum bahir aate hai aur deekhte hai k sumit smiling & kumkum us k pass jake sumit ko hug karete hai & sumit kisss on her forhead
(miilee apni room ki window k pass kadi the )

sumit kumkum ko red rose gift kar ta hai aur who chale jate hai

miilee is simling & say SIS ko pyara ho gaya hai im happy


IN HOTEL

Sumit kumkum ko hotel k chhat per laki jata hai waha per sumit ne kumkum k liye pora teres sajya tha & sumit ne kumkum ka hath liya aur ring kumkum ko de kaha will u mare me

Kumkum = smiling & say yes

Sumit kumkum ko dance k liya kahita hai & they dance on
TERI BAHON MAIN HUM JEETE MARTE RAHE YONHI HUM TUM SE PIYAR KARTE RAHE
End main kumkum sumit ko hug karte hai & say mujhe chro k kabhi mat jana

Sumit = ye sumit apni kumkum ko chorne k bare main soch hi nahi sakta

Kumkum = ye kumkum bhi sumit k bina kumkum nahi & kumkum kiss on sumits check

Sumit smile & say love u soooooooooo much

Kumkum = me to

TIME IS 9:00

Sumit = dinner k liye chale waha us table per

Kumkum = ok chalet hai

Go & eat dinner

After Dinner
Kumkum aasman ki taraf deekhte hai

Sumit = kiya deekh rahi ho

Kumkum = sitaro ki taraf deekhrahi ho

Kumkum sumit ke shoulder per head rakte hai close her eyes

Sumit = Colddrink

Kumkum = ok

Sumit colddrink lene jatahai suddenly kumkum ne totita tara deekh & wish kiya k main apni sumit se kabhi bhi juda na ho hamsha us k dil k pass raho

Sumit come & say kiya mang rahi ho

Kumkum = wish kabhi kise ko batate nahi warna pore nahi hote

12:00 AM

kumkum = bohat la8 hogaie hai chale

sumit = dil nahi kahita , kash ye pal yahi stop ho jaie

kumkum = chalo

sumit = ok

SK in lift

Suddenly light is off kumkum ko darr lagta hai & sumit ka hath pakar lite hai sumit hug kumkum



Sumit = tum mere hone wale wife ho in aakho main apne liye sirf pyara deekna chata ho darr nahi plzzz give me 1 smile & kumkum smilling

Kumkum sumit sare raat lift main the

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DATE 11 OCT

MORNING

Kumkum open eyes & see k who sumit k shoulder pe sooie the & us per lipstick k nishan hai &
Who us ko mitadete hai sumit open eyes & see time

Sumit = GOOD MRNING KUMKUM

Kumkum = GOOD MRNING sumit kiya kiya kaie lift ab tak band hai

Suddenly lifts door open SK apni gahr pohancne k liye nikalte hai

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GAREWAL MANSION

Komolika enter kumkums room & see k kumkum abtak so rahi hai

Komolika = kumkum utho office k liye deer ho rahi hai

Kumkum = GOOD MRNING mama

Komolika = GOOD MRNING jalde utho deer hoagie hai nasta kar k office jana main neecha tumara w8 karte ho

Kumkum = bach gaie warna mama ko pata chaljata k main sari raat bahir the

Miilee enter

Miilee = GOOD MRNING sis

Kumkum = GOOD MRNING

Miilee = SIS kal mujhe sab pata chali gaya hai k aap

Kumkum = kiya pata chal gaya hai

Miilee = k U LOVE SUMIT

Kumkum = ye kiya kahi rahi ho tum

Miilee = SIS mujhe se kuch chupa nahi hai

Kumkum = sumit is my life I can't live with out sumit

Miilee = sis mujhe aap ki pasand

Kumkum miilee ko hug karte hai

Miilee = main abhi papa ko batate ho kumkum stop miilee

Kumkum = main papa se khud baat karo gi

Miilee = ok

Kumkum miilee naste k liya neecha aate hai kumkum go office & miilee go collage

Anurag = komolika kumku k liye rohit kisa rahi ga

Komolika = main koch samje nahi

Anurag = main kumkum ke shadi k baat kar raha ho

Komolika = kiya kumkum

Anurag = kumkum ko main samja loga main Piyush ko phone karta ho dinner pe bolaleta ho

Komolika = ok jisa aap theek samje

Anurag call Piyush mujhe aap ke bahi ka rishta manzoor hai

Piyush = ye to aap ne kushi ki news sunaie hai is per party honi chaiye

Anurag = kiyo nahi raat ko aaiye na dinner per

Piyush = ok main aur rohit aajaie ge


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IN OFFICE

Kumkum apni kaam kar rahi the anurag enter

anurag = kiya main aa sakta

kumkum = are papa aap ko ijazat ki zarorat nahi hai

anurag = mujhe tum se zaroori baat kar ni hai

kumkum kahiye

Anurag = tumare shaadi k liye

Kumkum = papa mujhe shaadi ki jaldi bhi kiya hai

Anurag = ladika acha hai aur tum us ko achi tarha se jante ho who14 OCT shaam ko aarahi hai shaam ko who aarahi hai main chalta ho

Kumkum =acha to sumit is surprize ki baat kar raha tha



GAREWAL MANSION

Komolika call veena

Veena = kise ho tum

Komolika =im f9 aur tum

Veena = main theek ho itne dino bad yaad aaie humare

Komolika = acha kal ka dinner aap sab ko yaha krana hai bahije ko bhi aana hoga

Veena = kiyo ?

Komolika = kumkum aur rohit ki engagement ki date fix karne ki liye Piyush aur rohit aarahi hai

Veena = hun zaroor aaie ge rohit bohat acha ladka hai

Komolika = main phone rakte ho by


DATE IS 12 OCT
(u know this is hussian BD)

MORNING


Kumkum sumit ko phone karte hai

Sumit = ha bolo

Kumkum = kiya hum abhi mil sakta hai

Sumit = ha kiyo nahi kaha ho tum

Kumkum = office main

Sumit = w8 karo main abi aaya ok by

Kumkum = by & love u


This is a end of this part I hope u like it ok by take care BY

LOVE & BEST WISHES
& KEEP SMILEING & ENJOY U R LIFE
FROM
SONA
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WADHWA HOUSE

Sumit ready to meet kumkum sumit is very happy isse kushi main who apna BD bhol jata hai

Sumit ye baat soch kar pareshan tha k Sunday ko office main kumkum kiya kar rahi hai

Sumit jate waqt kahi jatahai k mama mujhe aane main deer ho jaie gi

Veena = kiyo kaha jarahi ho

Sumit = mama main bas aane main deer hojaie gi OK BY
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IN OFFICE

Kumkum w8ing 4 sumit
Sumit aajata hai
Kumkum hug sumit & wish sumit

Sumit = ooo MG main to bhol hi gaya tha k aaj mere BD hai wise mere gift

Kumkum = tumara gift ooo main to bhol gaie pher bhi ek gift hai jis se tum kuch ho jaio ge

Sumit = kiya

Kumkum = close u r EYES

Sumit = kiyo

Kumkum = I say close u r EYES

Sumit close EYES & kumkum kisses on check's

Sumit = open EYES

Kumkum = kise lagi

Sumit = once more

Kumkum = no yahi bohat hai & hug sumit

Kumkum sumit ek hotel main lejate hai

Us hotel main koie nahi tha

Sumit = ye kaha laie ho tum

Kumkum = aaj mere sumit ka BD hai aaj main sara din apne sumit k saath ho

Sumit = kumkum I LOVE U

Kumkum = me to

Sumit kumkum ko dance karne k liye kahita hai

& they start DANCE song is
SANSO KO SANSO
MAIN DALNE DO ZARA

Kumkum sumit se kahite hai lets cut the cack

Sumit = no main cack raat ko hi cut karo ga likin sab se pahole tumare haath se hi eat karo ga

Kumkum = lakin ye kise ho sakta hai PARTY main to sab honge aunty net um ko kaha to

Sumit = mama nahi kahi ge

Kumkum = lakin

Sumit = pyara karte hona

Kumkum = apni jaan se bhi ziyada

Sumit = to phere raat ko tayar hona main cack tumare haath se hi eat karo ga

Kumkum = im ready

Sumit kumkum ko titely hug karta hai

TIME IS 5:00

Kumkum = ok ab hum ko chalna chahiye

Sumit = ok PARTY main im w8ing 4 u

Kumkum = main zaroor aaio ge

Dona ghar k liye nikalte hai



GAREWAL MANSION

Komolika = aare tum kaha the

Kumkum = mama main apni friend k saath the

Komolika = ok jalde ready ho jaio hum ko sumit k BD PARTY k liye jana hai

Kumkum = OK mama main tayar hone jate ho

Komolika = agar tum thak gaie ho to tum rest karo

Kumkum = nahi mama im f9 main tayar hoke aate ho

Miilee = didi aap ti FRESH hona thak bhi kise sakte ho

Komolika = ye kiya baat kar rahi hi miilee

Kumkum = mama ye to bas aise hi bol rahi hai

Miilee = mama main bhi tayar hok aate ho

Komolika = ok jalde karma waran tumare papa

Kumkum = mama main aaj papa se bhi phele ready ho jaio gi
(today is sumit BD kumkum la8 kise ho sakte hai samjye na aap miile to samaj gaie )

miilee = didi aap ko to jaldi jana chahiye

kumkum = chup kar miilee ki bachi warna main tum ko maro gi

miilee = mama didi ko pyara ho gaya hi

komolika come

komolika = kis ko kise pyara ho gaya hai

kumkum is confuse

kumkum = mama who ye kise ko nahi

komolika = to pher ye miilee

kumkum = mama isse hi kahi rahi hai

miilee = mama kuch nahi

komolika = tum nahi sudrogi

kumkum = jaieye la8 ho raha hai

TIME IS 7:30




WADHWA HOUSE


Sumit enter in haal

Veena = wish u a very HAPPY BD

Sumit = thanks mama where is my gift

Veena = u r ROOM

Sumit = ok thanks mama & hug to veena

Kul = HAPPY BD TO U HAPPY BD SUMIT HAPPY BD beta

Sumit = thanks papa

Akshat = hey BRO
Congratulation and best wishes on your BIRTHDAY
HAPPY BIRTHDAY
A wish that u will be happy

Sumit = wish se kaam nahi chale ga where is my gift

Akshat = BRO main next BD Ko do ga

Sumit = acha mujhe abhi chaye

Akshat = give gift to sumit

Veena = sumit maine jo dress deya hai wahi PART main pahina

Sumit = ok mama

Sumit apne ROOM main jata hai & ready to PARTY

He wear RED high neck shirt & black panit
&
kumkum wear BLACK trouser shairt

PARTY IS START

GUST aane bhi start ho gaie the

TIME IS 9:00 PM



GAREWAL MANSION


Kumkum is ready 4 party

Kumkum w8 kar rahi hai sab k aane ka

Anurag = aare ye surag kaha se nikla hai k kumkum sab se phale tayar hai

Kumkum = papa

Anurag = u r looking very beautiful

Kumkum = ooo papa we r la8

Anurag = aare kaha hai sab we r la8 come fast

Every body sit in car




WADHWA HOUSE



ALL GAREWAL'S in PARTY


Sumit see kumkum & kumkum ko fly kiss deya

Sumit kumkum dono smile kar rahai hai akshat see this

Akshat = BRO ye kiya ho raha hai

Sumit = kuch nahi

Akshat = jaio dance k liye kumkum bolaio

Sumit = ok main abhi aaya

Sumit ka cell phone baj raha hai

Nandini = hi sumit HAPPY BD

Sumit = aare aap aaie kiyo nahi main aap ka w8 kar raha ho

Nandini = main kuch dino main aarahi ho lakin tumara gift kal tak tumare pass hoga

Sumit = liakin aap to nahi honge na

Nandini = ok main tum se bad main baat karte ho ok by sab ko hi kahina

Sumit = ok by take care

Sumit kumkum k pass jata hai & us ko dance k liye DANCE FLOOR per lata hai & start dance on

TERA CHEHRAA JAB NAZAR AAIE


Sumit cut the cack first sumit veena ko kilata hai & 2nd KUL ko 3rd kumkum ko & kumkum ko cack deta hai kumkum sumit ko kilate hai sumit is very happy


Us k bad sumit kumkum ko baher leaata hai

Sumit = kumkum ur looking veryyyyyyyyyy beautiful & preety
Sumit song start kar deeta hai
Maine jise abhi abhi deekha hai kon hai who anjane who hai pari

Sumit = yes u r look like PARI

Suddenly RAIN start sumit kumkum ko dance k liye kahita hai the song is

CHORI CHORI KUMKUM SUMIT RAIN MAIN MIILEGE TO KHALE GE PERAM GAME

Kumkum hug sumit & sumit kiss on kumkum's EYES & looking kumkum & say

Kumkum tumare check is very beautiful kumkum close EYES & sumit kisses on check's

Sumit = u r lipes like a & kiss on lipes

Kumkum = I LOVE U SUMIT

Sumit = ME TO I CAN"T LIVE WITH OUT U

Kumkum = hug sumit titely

Kumkum ka phone aata hai

Kumkum = miilee kiya hoia hai

Miilee = didi hum ghar jaraha hia

Kumkum = ok main aate ho

Miilee = nahi aap gahr jaieye kiyo k maine mama papa se kaha hai k aap ki tabiyat theek nahi the ise liye aap ghar gaie hai

Kumkum = ok main ghar jate ho ok by & thanks

Miilee = ok by jalde jana

Kumkum = sumit I have to go

Sumit = dil nahi manta

Kumkum = kal hum mile ge na

Sumit = kal ye waqt ye barsaat humare saath nahi honge

Kumkum = lakin hum dona to honge na to barsaat ya kise aur ki zaroorat nahi hai hum dona ka saath hi sab kuch hai

Sumit = ok BY LOVE U & KISS ON forhead

Kumkum = BY KUMKUM KISS ON SUMIT'S CHECK'S I miss u sooo muchhh

Sumit = me to

Kumkum jaldi ghar jate hai

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GAREWAL MANSION

KUMKUM apne ROOM main hai komolika come

Komolika = kumkum tum theek to ho na

Kumkum = yes mama im f9

Komolika = to PARTY se jalde kiyo aagaie

Kumkum = bas aasi hi mama dil nahi lag raha tha aaram karooge to theek hoojaio gee

Komolika = acha ab neta aap aaram karoo main chalet hoo GOOD NIGHT

Kumkum = GOOD NIGHT MAMA




WADHWA HOUSE

Sumit is very HAPPY

Sumit kumkum ko yaad kata hai

Song on background

CHAND JISA MUKRA TERA JAB BHI NAZAR AAIE
JAB BHI NAZAR AAIE
NEEND MERE UR JAIE CHAIN MERE KHO JAIE
DARD BARTA JAIE DARD BARTA JAIE




MORNING

WADHWA HOUSE

Sumit ready to go OFFICE

Sumit = mama raat DIDI ka phone aaya tha

Veena = avha kab aarahi hai

Sumit = jaldi aarahi hai ok mama I have to go

Veena = ok by beta aare main to batana hi bhol gaie

Sumit = kiya mama

Veena = aal hum ko komolika ne Dinner k liye bolaya hai

Sumit = kiyo koie kash baat

Veena = who

Sumit = mama maine aap se ek baat chupaie hai

Veena = kon se beta

Sumit = mama main kumkum se pyara karta ho

Veena = kiya

Sumit = mama plzzz aap anurag uncle se baat kar na

Veena = ye nahi ho sakta

Sumit = kiyo mama

Veena = kiya kumkum bhi tum se pyara karte hai

Sumit = yes mom she also love me & we cnt live each other

Veena is shocked

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GAREWAL MANSION

Kumkum = GOOD MORNING MAMA PAPA

Anurag = GOOD MRNING BETA aap ko yaad hai na k aaj aap ko shaam ko jalde aana hai

Kumkum = yes papa mujhe yaad hai

Anurag = chale

Kumkum = papa mujhe kaam hai aap chalye main aate ho

Anurag = OK BY every 1

Kumkum = files ko deekh rahi hai

AUR ……………………………………….


This is END of this part I hope k u like this part mujhe bataye ga k aap ko ye part kisa laga im w8 4 u r reply

Ok BY TAKE CARE

LOVE & BEST WISHES
FROM
SONA (HUJU KI DEEWANI )

ENJOY U R LIFE & KEEP SMILING

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