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Posted: 14 years ago
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"main tumse pyar nahi karta " these words are echoing in the ear of a girl who is going to marry a man . but she is like a lifless body who doesn't understand what is happening around it's surrounding . and the girl is none other then nupur .


another girl enters in the room and she is nupur's younger sister gunjan .she is also in tears . wo apni behen ki aise halat nahi dekh sakti thi she can't see her like that and for that she hate one man who is cause of nupur's condition and that man is none other than mayank sharma . wo us din ko yad karti hai .
"gunjan tujhe pata hai mera rajkumar safed ghode par aayega aur wo jab aayega na to sab ladkiya sirf usi ko dekhenge but wo sirf aur sirf nupur ka hoga . main khub sarmaungi khub blush karungi apni sangeet par mehndi par ." par aaj wo bilkul udash hai kunki uski sadi kisi aur ke sath hone jaa rahi hai "sammer malhotra " who is nupur class fellow .

di chalo niche tumhe bulaya jaa raha hai .
nupur stands up and start walking but she remains silent and doesn't understand what is happening around her .

sooner sammer and nupur is sitting in the mandap and rituals are going .

but what is happening outside a boy comes with gipse in pandal aur utar kar wo pandal ki taraf jata hai .uski aakhe lal aakhon mein gusa hai . jaise wo kisi ka khun hi kar dega uski aakho mein guse ko dekh kar sammer khada ho gata hai .

at that time nupur's dad comes and shouted in anger .
nd ; ye sab kya ho raha hai mayank tumhe meri beti ki khusiya sahi nahi jati kya pehlke hi use itne dukh de chuke ho ab kya chahte ho . at that samrat comes and take him to one side .
but mayank in another mood he goes to sammer and start betting hell out . everybody try to save him but all invain mayank ke ghuse ke aage sab bekar tha nupur pura lahu luhan ho gaya . but mayank use chod hi nahi raha tha . all can't think what is going on mayank and sammer are best budies but why mayank is doing all these thing . at that time police comes and stops the fight and arrested sammer malhotra now it's time to shok for sammer's father .
sd;to police aap mere bete ko arrest kun kar rahe hai aap ko ise arest karna chaiye ise ne ladai chalu ki thi .
po: dont teach our duty ok we know who is at fault .

nd; mayank tum mujhe bataoge ki ye sab kya ho raha hai.
gu; haa mayank batate kun nahi ki tumne meri di ko kun dokha diya dekho inhe (indicating towards nupur )aaj ek jinda laas ki tarah hai . tumne esa kun kiya mayank .

main batata hun .
samarat comes forword and said .

sa: uncle isme mayank ki galti nahi hai gunjan .
goes towards nd uncle mayank to nupur se unconditional pyar karta .
nd: agar wo usse pyar karta tha to use dokha kun diya .
sa:wo majboor tha uncle :
gu:kon si majboori samrat.
sa:uncle sammer nupur se bahut pehle se pasand karta tha wo use hasil karna chahta tha but mayank ke rahte nupur usse sadi nahi karti.
nd: to ,
sa:isi liye usne ek chal chali mayank ke coffi mein nasili dawaiya mila di jisse mayank ko chakar aane lage . jabhi wo uske sath rehat wo yahi karta tha aur aap to jante hi hai mayunk and sameer kitne ache dost the . phir sammer ne apne mayank ko apne family doctor ko councult karne ka option diya . jisne ye sammer ke plan ke that mayank ko ye bataya ki mayank ko brain tummer hai . aur wo jyada se jayada sirf aur sirf six month hi jee payega . isi liye mayank ne nupur ki balahiye ke liye apne ko usse alag kar diya par wo janta that nupur use itni aasani se apne se alag nahi hone degi isi liye mayank ne use jagda kiya aur apne ko nicha aur ye dikhaya ki wo sirf nupur se timepass kar raha tha.
gu: itna sab kuch ho gaya.
nd: mein us sameer ko chodunga hi nahi.
sa: itna hi nahi uncle mayank ne to suicide bhi kar liya tha wo to acha hua mein time par pahuch gaya .

our dusri taraf jab ye conversestion chal rahi thi do log sirf ek dusre ki tarah dekh rahe the . unki aakhon mein pyar aur judai ka dard saaf dekha jaa sakta tha . but ye kya mayank ko kuch gadbad lagti hai .

actually nupur has taken large amount of sleeping pils . she is fainted and mayank rush to her and shouted her many times at that time her friend ridhima comes forword and check her pulse and comes to know she has taken sleeping pills .

ri: mayank ise kamre mein le chalo .

all rushes towards nupur's room and mayank carry's her .
ri: uncle aap sab log bahr wait kijiye .

in meantime all are tensed and crying for nupur .
.and mayank is like a majisian"jiski jaan kisi tote mein band hai aur wo mot ki kagar par hai".

actually i have written this ff long time back but due to my study and now due to my hectic job i am not able to give update . and know my last topic is banned and i am not able to post update .

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Posted: 14 years ago
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part2

so all you know that nupur has taken sleeping pils and all others are standing outside after checkup and her tretment
ridhima comes out .
rd: first goes to nupur's dad uncle don't worry she is fine .
nd: yeh sab kya ho raha hai meri beti ke sath . bas baghwan se yehi mangta hun ki uski muskrahat wapas aa gaye . now he goes towards mayank and holding his both hand . sorry mayank mujhe pata nahi tha ki tumhare sab ye sab hua nahi to main tumhe kabhi itna bhara bula nahi kehta .
ma:koi baat nahi uncle isme aap ki koi galti nahi hai hum sab halat ke aage majboor the.
nd: mayank aaj se main tumhe nupur ki sari jimadari de raha hun use hamesha khush rakhna .
ma:uncle aap mujh par wishwash kar sakte hai main aapko nirash nahi karunga.
nd:jao nupur ke pass jao use tumhari sabse jyada jarrorat hai.
ma:thik hai uncle .
saying this he enters in nupur's room
after entering in nupur's room he sees that his nupur is sleeping under the influinse of heavy doses .he goes towards beds corner and sit and held her hand firmly to never leave .
ma:tum jald se jald thik ho jao nupur main tumhare sare sapne jarror pure karonga.

he is sitting holding her hand and past events flashing in front of her.

flashback
mayank is sitting in front of doctor and he is waiting for his reports .

and when reports comes.
do:sorry mayank i can't help you you are suffering from brain tumer and it is on last stage you have only six months .

hearing these words mayanks dreams and life is shatterd.
ma:main kisi ko yeh sab nahi bata sakta khas kar nupur ko nahi to wo apni jindagi dangh se nahi je payegi.

yehi thik rahega.

after this mayank start avoiding nupur and start avoiding her but it is not sufficient so he desided a plan .

he take's help of neha

when nupur comes at mayank's home mayank and neha
doing acting of intimate seen . seeing this nupur is totally broken and her all dreams get shattered she lost her all sense .
seeing nupur condition nupu'rs dad fixed her marriage to sammer .

but one day samrat hear sammer talking on phone with the doctor and he chases him and when he comes to know all this thing he tells mayank and mayank stops marriage and now he is sitting in front of her.

flash back ends

ma:please nupur wakeup i want to hear your voice .


saying this a loan tears feel from his eyes wich fall on nupur's face and after that nupur start opening her eyes .


seeing this mayank hugged her .


ma:thank god tumhe hosh aa gaya main to jaise mar hi jaya tha.

nu:mayankkk.

ma:haa nupur.

nu:why did you heart...

Edited by aancchal - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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PART3
NUPUR HAS GAINED CONCISENESS


ma:thank god tumhe hosh aa gaya main to jaise mar hi jaya tha.


nu:mayankkk.

ma:haa nupur.

nu:why did you heart...
ma:i am sorry nupur main tumhe hurt nahi karna chata tha par main majboor tha i am sorry tumhe hurt karne ke liye.
nu:kitna bolne lage ho mayank main apni nahi tumhari baat kar rahi hun tumne apne aapko itni badi saja kun di tumne mujhe kun nahi batya.
now its time for mayank to shock that itna sab hone ke bad bhi nupur usiki chinta kar rahi hai .

ma:tumhi batao nupur tum meri jagha hoti to kya karti .


now it's nupur time to be silent because she knows mayank is right at his place.

nu:thik hai is bar to main tumhe maaf kar deti hun bat agli bar nahi .

at that time other's family member comes in .
gu: diii app thik hai na ye kya pagalpan tha.
nu: looking towards her father
"dad i am so soory meri wajah se apko kitni paresani hui na"

nd:haa beta paresani to hui aur taklif bhi bat ye sab tere dukh ke samne to kuch bhi nahi but aisa bachpana kabhi mat karna .
nu:nahi karungi aur apne dad ke gale lag gati hai.

now nupur's dad goes towards mayank

nd:holding mayank both hands in his hand .mayank tum nupur se pyar karte ho.
ma:haa uncle.
nd:to sadi karoge usse

now everyone looking towards him .
ma:nahi.

evryone :what?????????????????????

ma:mera matlab he karunga par abhi nahi .
nd:to phir kab .
ma:pehle mein nupur ki sari wishes to puri kar dun .
gu: konsi wishes.
ma: ye jo tumhari behen hai na iski bahut sari lambi list hai usi ko pura karna hai.

at that time nd leave the yonger one to disscus about plan
nd:mujhe tum par pura bharosa hai mayank lekin jo bhi karna jaldi karna
when nupur dad's leave the room
gu: haa mayank batao meri di ki kya kya khawaise hai
ma:batado nupur.
nu:nahiii
ma:ab chupana kya samrat aur gunjan apne hi hai koi gair thodi hai
now hering this nupur start blushing seeing this samrat start teesing her

sa: oh ho soon to bi mrs mayank sharma aap itna laal kun ho rahi hai.

gu:meri behen ko chidana chodo samrat aur tum mayank bol rahe ho ki na ahi.

ok batata hun


FLASHBACK

AT AHMEDABAD TRIP .

THEY ARE SEATING IN LIVING AREA AND TALKING ABOUT THEIR LIFE AT THAT TIME MAYANK HAS STARTED FEELINGS FOR NUPUR

nu: thanks mayank tum mujhe yaha laye mera mood bilkul thik ho gaya .
ma: thanks ki koi jarrorat nahi hai phir bhi " your welcome".
nu:haa to mayank apne bare mein batao .tumhe kya kya pasand hai.
ma:well mujhe kitabe pasand hai . class mein top karna pasand wagehra wagerha .
nu:oh my god tum to ekdum sadu ho tum se jo sadi karegi bahut pachtagi .
ma: oh really now just shut up aur tum apne bare mein batao aur specially ye batana tumhe kaisa chaiye .
nu:mujhe now comes to nupur list what she wants in her life partner .
1. wo handsum ho (mayank is handsum)
2 uske galo pe dimples hon.(and you all no about it
3 everyone respect him and loves him ( you no mayank sharma is loved by everyone
4 wo mujhse bahut pyar karta ho. (now mayank start loving her very much )
5 bahudur ho (you all know about it late when mayank save her from gunda's)
6 bado ki respect karna janta ho ( maynk respect his elder very much)
7 mujhe aur meri behen ko kabhi alag naa kare ( how he can dare to seprate the gunur)
8 last not the least wo mujhe aise propose kare jaise aaj tak kisine naa kiya ho.(she is not talking about love confession just for marriage proposal).
ma: ohhh

flashback ends

ma: to tum samjhi gunjan mein tumhari behen ki 8 condition mein 7 mein to phit bhetha hun bat abhi tak 8th pura nahi hua hai

gu: thik hai bat agar tum 7 condition puri nahi karte na to main tumhe apni behen puri nahi karta .
ma: but ye condition pura karna to samrat ke hath mein hai.
sa: mere haath mein ...now understanding his words . ohhh.

now mayank goes towards nupur and holding her hand .

ma: to miss nupur bhushan tyar ho jao tumhari 8 wish ke liye .
nu: soch lo mr shrma nupur bhushan ko impress karna itna aasan nahi hai .
ma: thik hai madam aap jaldi thik hoiye tabhi to aap ko lake gayunga .
wishparing in her ears .
ma: so miss bhushan tyar ho pachtane kre liye . now after heing this nupur start blushes more .

ma: good night nupur ab so jao aur sapno mein sirf mujhe he dekhna . now he take the comforter and put on nupur and kisses on her forehead and nupur goes in slumber .

ma: gunjan nupur ka khyal rakhna .

now when mayank reaches the door he turns back.

ma: we willbe...
SORRY FOR THE DELAY BUT NOTHING IS IN MY HAND DUE TO CERTAIN THING I AM NOT ABLE TO UPDATE IT REGULARLY BUT TRY TO UPDATE MY FF'S ON FRIDAY& SATURDAY AND SOMETIMES ON SUNDAY.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Lovely Os dear
so cute Thank God Mayur are save
waiting to see how Mayank will fulfilled her wishes
thanks for Pm
cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey aachal - very nice story dear
sweet, simple and nice
plz do cont. it

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