FF: Intoxicated Confessions -Pt25 (LastPart) pg56 - Page 17

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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow tht wuz rele cute loved it!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Aww that was a sweet update, really enjoying ur ff!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved how Arnav's starting to feel discomfort with La! Update soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Really great part cant wait for the next one
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Posted: 13 years ago
Shy!
Smashing update hun!!
I loved the way Khushi responded to Arnav accordingly.
Fab work sugar.
Thanks for the PM!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 16:


Arnav is very angry...

Arnav: Mazaak kar rahi ho mere saath...

Khushi: Nahi...sirf aaina dikha rahi hoon aapko...dard ya gussa sirf aapko nahi hota...hume bhi hota hai

Khushi starts crying...

Khushi: Bina baat kiye chale gaye...Jannte hai ki der ho gayi...pooch tak nahi kyon...

Khushi: yeh leejiye

Khushi hands a dabba to him...

Arnav looks at the dabba...

Khushi: Socha tha...ki hum aap ke liye jalebi banayenge aur apne haathom se khilayenge..subah isliye der ho gayi thi...yeh aap kha sakthe hai...Sugar free hai...

Khushi wipes her tears and is walking away...Arnav opens the box and there are heart shape jalebis.(how cute)

Arnav feels very bad...and holds her hand...

Arnav: Khushi...I am really sorry...maaf kardo...dekho subah tumhare liye kitna intezaar kar raha tha

isliye...sorry...

Khushi turns with tears in her eyes...

Arnav is shattered to see her tears...

Arnav: Khushi...dekho aansoon nahi...please...yeh mujhe kamzor kar deti hai...I am sorry Khushi...

Arnav holds her face and says sorry...Khushi just pushes his hands away

Khushi: humme ghar jaana hai...Anjaliji aur Lavanyaji hamara intezaar kar rahe...

Khushi is mad and goes away...

Arnav: dekhon Khushi, jab tak tum nahi khilaaogi mein yeh jalebiyaan nahi khaaoonga...

Khushi: toh mat khayiye...Hum ja rahe hai...

Arnav is dejected...


Evening at RM:

Arnav gets back home...and comes in tired...he walks and Khushi brings in some chai for everyone...

Everyone is sitting in the living area...

Khushi is still upset...She gives chai to everyone...she walks to Arnav...and he goes to take the chai from her but she just places the chai on the table...

Arnav is not mad...but knows that it was his mistake...but is feeling bad that Khushi isn't talking to him and he cant even hold her hand in front of his family and Lavanya is there tooo...

Arnav keeps looking at Khushi...

Anjali: Khushiji...yeh kya hua...aapke haaton ko.

Khushi: Kuch nahi Anjali ji...aaj subah jalebiyaan banaa rahi thi...toh haat jal gaya...hum theek hai

Arnav is shocked on hearing this and is very hurt that she had made those jalebis for him and she even burnt her hand...uufff!

Khushi: aaccha hum abhi chalte hai...der ho gayi hai...

Lavanya: Bye Chamkili

Khushi leaves...

Arnav: he is angry and say, Lavanya tum Hameshaa ussse chamkili kyon bulaaati...she has a name damn it...

Naani and Anjali are very surprised and shocked at Arnav's reaction...how come he is supporting Khushi...Nani has a suspicious smile...

Arnav walks away and is heading to catch Khushi before she leaves...

Arnav spots Khushi taking her bag and grabs her...

Arnav: Khushi...meine kahaan na I am sorry...ab bhi naraaz ho...Maaf kardo please...he keeps his fingers on his ears and says sorry and Khushi grabs his hands and nods his head..

Arnav quickly takes her to his room hiding from his family ….

Khushi: Arnavji, kya kar rahe hai...koi dekh lega...

Arnav: I dont care...

He takes the jalebi dabba...and opens it.

Arnav: khilaao mujhe...

Khushi: aap bhi naa...

Khushi takes the jalebi and feeds him...lovingly. He even bites her finger a little.(naughty boy)

Khushi: Aah! Bade badmaash hai aap...Hatiye...hum ja rahe hai...

Arnav holds her hand to stop her...and see the burnt scar...on her hand...he as tears in his eyes

Arnav: Meri waja se hai na...

Khushi: Nahi...aap kyon?

Arnav: Tumne jalebi mere liye baanaya tha na...

Khushi: Hum theek hai...

Arnav kisses her scar and Khushi closes her eyes...

Khushi: Arnavji...bas koi dekh lega...Humme der ho rahi hai...

Khushi turns and walks away...and he is holding her Dupatta...Khushi is shy.

Khushi: Arnavji, please...

Arnav: Sab ke saamne izhaar kas karogi...shart yaad hai na...

Khushi's face turns blue...and turns to see Arnav...

Khushi: Aap ko yeh sab mazaak lag raha hai...

Arnav: tum mukkar nahi sakti...meine tumhe sirf izhaar karne ko kaha hai...aise nahi ki jaake directly boldo...samjhi

Khushi: Aap samajhte kyon nahi and

Khushi turns and looks at Arnav's mirror and is shocked...to see someone standing outside Arnav's room looking at them...her eyes open wide with shock...


Part 17 coming soon...😛






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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the part..i was waiting for this..a good update..
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Posted: 13 years ago
On no! a cliff hanger! hayee tht is cheating nah. i shuld sue for this lol but can we writers do. gotta keep our readers active nah? lol
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Posted: 13 years ago
Suspense eh?😆
Fab part sugar!!
I loved the way Arnav was trying to pacify Khushi...really sweet!
Looking forward to the next!!
Thanks for the PM...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
On no! a cliff hanger! hayee tht is cheating nah. i shuld sue for this lol but can we writers do. gotta keep our readers active nah? lol

@aqua: thats right...i make it to fit it within a real half hour serial slot😆 always nice to end it with climax...😃


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