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Posted: 14 years ago
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Once in a while I get the urge to write a little poetry particularly if a scene or a character resonates with me. (more often than not, Barun is involved, I ain't gonna lie) As with everyone else, I died for ASR's smile today. It was gorgeous. It gave us a glimpsei into the prank playing Chote of yore...and anticipation of his rebirth once again.

So, before I bore you to death and your head hits the keyboard, here is my little jaunt into the poetry of ASR's smile:

It burst forth from within him
Long kept hibernating
Hidden in the vault
of things once been

Like sunshine's rays
It charms the soul
A tingle felt from days
long melted and gone

As moonlit waves crash
and sparkle in dreams
The grin glistens in glory and
the soft eyes twinkle
for her.

The throaty laugh
is gravelly warm
Rushing out, free at last
Serving witness for her,
A hidden heart still beats.

It captivates her
She watches the glimmer
savors the fleeting sight
of his dawning spring.

All done before the smile
Vanishes under the cover
of brooding clouds and his
self inflicted frost.

It is decided.
She will be his summer.


(feel free to comment, hit the like button, throw tamaters, chappals, etc...)





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Posted: 14 years ago
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Beautiful !!!!!!!Thank you for sharing it with us.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Why would anyone throw chappals ? lol..I hope his smile is not the haleys comet like you mentioined in your other post.😆..want to see it like everyday now 😳...even if Khushi has to act silly.🤣

This part is my favourite.☺️

It captivates her
She watches the glimmer
savors the fleeting sight
of his dawning spring.

All done before the smile
Vanishes under the cover
of brooding clouds and his
self inflicted frost.

It is decided.
She will be his summer.


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Posted: 14 years ago
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What amazing poetry. Such a wonderful description of his emotions and hers when she sees him smile. His self inflicted frost and she is his summer. Very nice.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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"It is decided.
She will be his summer."

aaah! Anu, perfectly said!!!

What we see is just a spring bloom which will blossom into a colorful oasis showing us glimpses of what "summer" has in store for us!!

Loved your poem!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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this is soo good!!
why would anyone throw chappals?!?
love the pic btw... soo cute!!
and the poem was just awesome!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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beautiful Momma!!

I am doing an improvisation of Jackson five's song blame it on the boogie

You are my sunshine
YOu are my moonlight
you are my good times
to chase away the boogie!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: momma1128

Once in a while I get the urge to write a little poetry particularly if a scene or a character resonates with me. (more often than not, Barun is involved, I ain't gonna lie) As with everyone else, I died for ASR's smile today. It was gorgeous. It gave us a glimpsei into the prank playing Chote of yore...and anticipation of his rebirth once again.


So, before I bore you to death and your head hits the keyboard, here is my little jaunt into the poetry of ASR's smile:

It burst forth from within him
Long kept hibernating
Hidden in the vault
of things once been

Like sunshine's rays
It charms the soul
A tingle felt from days
long melted and gone

As moonlit waves crash
and sparkle in dreams
The grin glistens in glory and
the soft eyes twinkle
for her.

The throaty laugh
is gravelly warm
Rushing out, free at last
Serving witness for her,
A hidden heart still beats.

It captivates her
She watches the glimmer
savors the fleeting sight
of his dawning spring.

All done before the smile
Vanishes under the cover
of brooding clouds and his
self inflicted frost.

It is decided.
She will be his summer.


(feel free to comment, hit the like button, throw tamaters, chappals, etc...)







The face that launched a thousand ships nay, the face that launched a thousand poets.😃

Beautiful Anu. Keep 'em comin.

The throaty laugh
is gravelly warm
Rushing out, free at last
Serving witness for her,
A hidden heart still beats.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Heya It was beautiful!

I loved this portion
All done before the smile
Vanishes under the cover
of brooding clouds and his
self inflicted frost.

It is decided.
She will be his summer.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesome post, momma!

Loved Arnav's laugh too!! it was really beautiful!

Like sunshine's rays
It charms the soul
A tingle felt from days
long melted and gone

As moonlit waves crash
and sparkle in dreams
The grin glistens in glory and
the soft eyes twinkle
for her.

-- amazing lines.. really lovely!

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