MY IDEA FOR THE CONFESSION SCENE

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Posted: 19 years ago
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I know its already been shot, so this is all totally wrong

But it wud be great if they show atleast some stuff from my idea:-). Hope Jai doesnt become all sappy and foolish in love. I wud love for Bani to play hard to get for sometime.

I hope I hope..................

Here is my scene idea

Jai can be expected to show the only reaction he can think of frequently, that is anger:-)

Jai: Bani we need to talk

Bani: Mr Walia mera haath chhodiye.

Jai: (gritting his teeth) Oh No! Bani abhi nahi

In their room

Locks the door, leans her against it and whispers angrily in her face

Jai: Bani tumne jhoot kyon bola

Bani: no response

Jai: Bani baat karo mujhse main tumse kuch pooch raha hoon

Bani: Plz Mr Walia, mujhe jaane deejiye

Jai : Mera ek naam hai kab use karogi tum?

Bani: Mmmr. Www please

Jai: I want to know why you lied

Bani: Kal doosre judge se milna hai Mr.

Looks away........ blushing

Jai stares at her confused,

J: Oh No! Bani kal hum dono ko kisi se nahi milna

B: Bahut der ho chuki hai main thak gayi hoon

J: I am still waiting

B: Aap chahe mere baare mein kuch bhi soche Mr. Walia lekin mujhe is parivar ki fikar hai

J: Tumne yeh kadam kyon uthaya?

B: Mr Walia plz,......... she places her hands on his chest, but quickly pulls away her right hand almost as if it is singed

An eye locking scene here:-)

J: Meri dhadkan se tumhare haath kyon jal gaye? kyon dar gayi Bani? He picks up her hand and places it on hsi heart again.

J: mehsoos kar sakti ho?

B: looks away

J: Meri taraf dekho Bani

J: Main jab sorry boloon, main chahta hoon ki tum meri aankhon mein dekho

B: shocked, lifts her eyes and locks with his

J: I love you

Bani is stunned.........

B: Par aapne to kaha tha

J: I love you (smiles and looks at her intensely)

J: I love you and I am really sorry..........

B: Mr. Waa..... (blushes again and looks away, trying to say his name)

J: Hmmmmm?

B: "Jai plzzzzzzzzzz" bends down.

J: (Overjoyed), hugs her tightly "phir se kaho"

B: (blushing) Mr Walia

J: (menacingly bending towards her face)................. say it Bani, mera naam lo..........

J: chuckling.........."May be this will help my Darling wife" bending down towards her lips.............

Camera can do a loooooooooooong shot here when our Hottie kisses Ms. Bani

How do u like it?

Thanks for reading

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mayona thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#2
Good idea hope it happens 😉 😳 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#3
wow!
that was a nice.
more please!!
those dialogues are bound to be said by jai.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#4
LMAo...awsome..ahahhahaha..lets keep the fingers crossed!!
Vishakha_Sakhi thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#5
its gr8 👏 👏
continue...plz plz plz
thanx for sharing
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Posted: 19 years ago
#6
Umm that was kool. 👍🏼 😳 hope this Happens
sweetvidisha thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#7
Umm that was kool. 👍🏼 😳 hope this Happens
Arushi thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#8
nice one

all the writers here are giving the ceative heads of Balaji a run for money...

keep going......" ALL ART IS BUT IMITATION OF NATURE"
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Umm that was kool. 👍🏼 😳 hope this Happens
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Posted: 19 years ago
#10
wowwwwwww.. i like.. and very romantic!!!!! 😳 😳

Greetings from Amsterdam

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