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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: misslaugheasily

u knw what? sometimes i think that our fanfictions are always better than the actual show!!😲

what an awesome promo!! 😃

thanks yaar.. that means a lot to us.. 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
hehehe.. 😆
aweesumm promo guys..😍😳.. yahan tou ksg ne rey nd swayam ka patta hee cut kardia!!! 🤣🤣🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago
cool promo!!!
v all know 4 a FACT dat the handsm guy is KSG!
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Posted: 14 years ago
woww i Love did what an Amazing Promo <3 :P
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey friends... Ready for the next Dhamakedaar Part??
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Posted: 14 years ago
ya sure!!!
*rubs her hands 2gether in excitement!!*
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Posted: 14 years ago
Recap:

Date at the beach after which Rey drops Kriya...

Part 7
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It was a arnd 11 o'clock at night.. Both Rey and Kriya are standing by the window in their rooms, lost in each other's thoughts and remembering the beautiful evening they spent together...

(Rey could not control himself n called Kriya)

Kriya had a lovely smile on her beautiful face..

K: hello...
R: tum so toh nahin rahi thi na?
K: nahin abhi neend nahin aa rahi. Tum ab tak kaise jage ho?
R: Tum sone kahan de rahi ho mujhe.. 😊
K: Meine kya kiya?
R: MEAGIC kar diya hai tumne.. 😆 aaj ka din mein hamesha yaad rakhunga.
K: (Takes a little time n then says ) mein bhi..
R: kya soch rahe ho baatcutter??
K: mein humare pehle wale incidents k baare mein soch rahi thi.. humari fights, misunderstandings n all..
R: u know what? mein bhi yahi soch raha tha kuch der pehle. yaad hai jab humein detension mila tha?? 😛
K: Haan i know.. Meine kitna stupid prank kiya tha tumhare saath..
R: N uski wajah se humein 1 din ka detension mila tha.. Room paint karna n Princi k saath Quiz..
K: ( Starts to laugh ) N meine tumhare upar paint gira diya tha..
R: ya i know.. N jab tumne woh saaf kiya tha.. {OHO HO HO LA LA LA LA}

( Both went silent n go into the flashback mode n remember the past )

{ Rest of this Part is also completely in Flashback trying to remember all that happened before previous DATE }

(DETENTION SCENE)

Princi: Tum dono ko 1 din k liye detention di jati hai. U will come to college but u cannot attend the classes. Also, to u will be assigned some tasks which u have to complete together and within this one day. As a GS n Asst GS, u should have a good relationship n understand each other better which i cant see as of now. So i have decided, that you both should spend some time together n know more abt each other.. Also, I will conduct a small test on this assignmnt as well.. so dnt take it lightly.. u may go now..

Both go outside the room starring at each other..

(Same fight that you all saw in d3. Modified d last part of that fight.. here it goes: )

K: argue karne ka koi fayda nahin hai Rey. Jo ho gaya, so ho gaya. Na mein change kar sakti hun n na Aap. mein thak chuki hun inn fights se.. Please mujhe aur ladai nahin karni..
R: Tum toh hamesha fights ke liye ready rehti ho na.. toh ab kya hua? pehle baar Princi ne mere saath aise baat ki hai. Saara impression kharab ho gaya hai. All coz of u..
K: plz Rey.. bas karo na ab.. mein maanti hun ki meine galat kiya, but it was all just to teach u a lesson ki mein bhi insult tolerate nahin karungi. I hope ki tum samajh chuke hoge ab tak yeh baat.. N now.. we gt a task in our hands.. Remember wt princi said??
R: haan yaad hai.. but i need to be alone for some time.. meet u later..

(Both leave n go in opposite directions.. Kriya goes to Fire Exit n Rey towards the basketball court)

(After some time Rey goes searching for Kriya n thinks ki shayad zyada hi rudely baat karli.. He goes searching for Kriya n finally finds her crying at the FIRE EXIT)

R: hey u ok??
K: yup m fine. (trying to wipe off the tears)
(Both together) : M sorry.. { Eye lock }
K: m sorry. . i never thot ki coz of this prank, yeh sab bhi hoga..
R: its ok.. M also sorry.. meine bhi shayad kuch zyada hi rudely behave kiya.. chalo lets forget all this n concentrate on the task given to us...
K: haan.. but hum yeh kaise karenge??
R: yeh toh pata nahin. i know ki difficult hoga humare liye But at least v can try..
K: ok..
R: toh humein ek doorse k baare mein pata karna hai basically.. { Thanks princi mann hi mann mein for giving him this chance }
K: haan.. toh lets start. What is ur favourite colour??
R: Black.. wts urs??
K: ok. Mine is Red
R: sauce wala?? { lol.. cant get over DMG sometimes}
K: (Smiles) haan.. sauce waala..

(They both went silent starring around)

R: waise mujhe ek cheez bohot achi tarah se pata hai tumhare bare mein...

K: woh kya??

R: ke tumhe baatein bahut achi tarah se cut karni aati hain (said Rey joking around but Kria was in no mood for joke)

K (back to aggressive Kriya) : mujhe bhi aapke bare mein kuch pata hai.. dat u r a bigtym CASANOVA...

(she said and got up from there to leave.. Rey got up and held out his hand to stop her)

R: excuse me...tum mere bare mein kuch nahi janti..

K: jitna janti hoon utna hi kafi hai..

R: acha kya janti ho tum kuch nahi.. nil..zero.. Agar tum sach mein mujhe samajh pati na, toh aaj hum yahan fight nahin kar rahe hote..

K: oho... ladki dekhi nahi.. Line maarni shuru kar dete hain.. Line cutter..

R: wat?? Tum pagal ho gayi ho sach mein..

K: zyada banye mat... Mr.Casanova..

R: Tumhare zyaada sochne ki bimari abhi start hui hai ya bachpan se hai??

K: isse intelligence kehte hai..

R: fine...!! tum aur tumhara intelligence dono ek jaise hain..both are CONFUSED

(said Rey and walked out of d fire escape. Kria got furious and went behind)

K: oh hello hume apne bare mein discuss karma tha.. Remember??

R: I think discussion khatam ho gayi hai.. waise bhi tumne hi toh kaha na tum mere bare mein kitna kuch janti ho..

K: lekin aap mere bare mein kuch nahi jaante..

R: Ufff... Yeh ladki...!!! ARRGHHH... tum jaane ka mauka kab deti ho.. baatcutter

(Kria walked after Rey in the whole corridor)

K: aapko aapki gf Sharon ke siwa aur kisike bare mein jaane ka interest bhi hai?

R: Sharon meri gf nahi hai (shouted Rey facing her and then walked off in anger and Kria still followed)

K: pata hai best friend hai.. lekin harkaton se toh aise nahin lagta hai.. saara time chippki jo rehti hai aapse...

(She walked soo fast after him that when he stopped she walked right in to him.. he faced her.. caught her arms and pulled her to an empty class and pinned her to the wall)

R: tumhe bahot farq padta hai ke main apne best friend ke saath kaise chipakta hun ya nahin..

(oho ho in the bg.. and Kria is at loss of words as she was numb wid Rey's hands on her and he was soo close to her)

K: woh woh main aisi hi...

(she couldn't think anymore and as soon as Rey moved away his hands she made a run and got away from him)


R: (smiling to himself) farq toh tumhe padta hai for sure miss baatcutter.
Said Rey and left off from there...

After Few Hours:

(Princi calls Rey n Kriya next day and asks about the assignment)

Princi : So r u guys ready wid the task i had given u??
R: (scared) yes sir..
Princi to Rey: what does Kriya lyk to do mostly in her free time ??
R: Dancing (Kriya is happy 2 knw he gav d rite ans) ...woh bhi apne mom se chup chupke..

(Kria has a shocked xpression on how did he knw abt dis as she had never mentioned this b4 to him)

P: Kriya, kya Rey sahi keh raha hai???
K: (Still in shock says slowly) Yes sir.. (Rey has a mischievous smile on his face)
P: Ok Kriya.. same ques to u as well..

(Kriya was lost ...she went bak 2 d dil se re day thinking of Rey's dance nd was staring at Rey .. Rey gave an awkward luk thinking wat was wrong wid Kriya nd den d princi called her out to her senses )

Pr: Kriya did u get my quess??
K: eh yes sir...woh Rey lyks 2 dance in d rehearsal hall sir..
(Rey lukd suddenly at Kria nd was wondering was she talking abt d same day wen he found Kriya's scarf)
Pr: ReY, kya Kriya sahi keh raha hai???
K: Yes sir.. i like to spend time rehersing in the dancing hall..

P: gud now Rey please tell me sumthing about Kria'I want to see how much you understand her..

(Both were stone shocked. Princi looked at them and Rey started)

R: Kria'iske bachpan ka naam baatcutter hai sir.. and { Kriya kicks n punches Rey as to get him in senses of what he is saying } and she is very ambitious gal sir'and jo bhi kaam karti hai full interest leke karti hai n bahut hardworking hai'.
her passion is her dance as we all know'.True friend hai apne friends ki.. Teachers aur aapki bahut respect karti hai. .
{starts a fake cough} even as an assistant she respects me a lot and my decisions..

(Kria the whole time stared in shock with mouth wide open at Rey'she couldn't believe her ears he was saying something gud and true abt her)

(Rey looked at her and stranded off to his thots'.baatein karna toh koi isse sikhe'.
miss baatcutter'.iske dance karne mein bhi ek magic hai'.her style.. her attitude everything just makes me go crazy for her)


P: hmm that's gud Rey'well done.. now Miss Kria its ur turn..

(Rey came out of his thoughts and Kria gulped she went into her flashback where she said Rey she knows him very well and that he's nothing but a Casanova. Rey looked at her and gave her the 'ab aya na utt pahar ke niche look')

K: sir who umm Rey bahut hi ache dancer hain.. Basketball khelna acha lagta hai inhe.. Hardworking hain bahut.. Sharon ke BOY friend hain..{Rey stares at Kriya} i mean BEST friend hain aur.. aur.. bas itna hi sir..

P: hmm well that's fair enough'.but I think Kria you should spend more time with Rey to know him better' waise u have lots of projects coming up like Footloose dance auditions.. so I'm expecting ke tum dono ek saath milkar sab kaam kar loge without any differences between both of you. i don't want any more complaints.. Now you both may leave..

(Both of them leave the Princi's office'Kria joins her hands and prays to god)


K: universeji thnku bacha liya'.and sorry kitne jhoot bole maine..😆

(She gives a whatever look to Rey and leaves. Rey stares after her in bewilderment)

Rey says to himself : ye ladki sach mein tujhe pagaal kar degi...

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Next day in College:

(RDX calls Rey to the his office and Kria decides to follow him so that she can spy on him, Kria hides outside d door wid her head peeking inside d office so that she cud hear them talk)

RDX: Rey I'm so glad u r here…actually we have a problem…Sharon aur Swaym ko maine footloose ke event ke liye bahar bheja tha…while coming back unki their car broke down…so can u go and pick them up...

R: ofcourse sir….i'll do it..

RDX: actually mein khud chala jatha but I've a meeting wid someone so…

R: don't worry sir.. u carry on I'll go pick them up..

(Rey turned towards the door and noticed Kria hiding out and thought of a plan. He turned back to RDX)

R: sir mein soch raha tha ke due to the recent events mere aur mere assistant ke beech kuch differences hogyae….so sir kyun na mein apne assistant ko bi saath mein leke jatha hoon we'll get to know each other better...

RDX: actually Rey that's a brilliant idea…aap Kria ko saath mein lekar jaye...

(Kria who was standing outside dropped d file from her hand. Rey pretended to find Kria outside)

R: arey Kria tum yahan….hum tumhare baare mein baat kar rahe the...

RDX: Kria actually Rey ko Swaym-Sharon ko pick karne jaana hai….so I want you to join him also...

(Rey gave a smart smirk to Kria thinking 'tum jitnne mere peecha karogi mein tumhe usse zyada apne paas kichunga'….Kria looked at Rey irritated 'kahan phass gayi)

K: yes sir mein chali jaungi..

(Rey smirked and left and Kria followed him. They walked out of the colg towards the parking lot. Kria went ahead of Rey and stood in front of him)

R: wat?

K: aapne aisa kyun kiya..

R: maine kya kiya?

K: zyada bano mat.. aapke intentions ko achi tarah se jaan gayi hoon main..

R: oh really….fyn wid me…live in ur own world...

(Said Rey and moved ahead but Kria went and stopped him again)


K: aapne jaan bhuj kar RDX ko kaha na mujhe saath mein leke jaane ke liye..

R: arey tum yeh kya keh rahi ho…tum ne hi toh kaha tha na ke mein koi bhi kaam karu usme tumhe involved rakhna.. isliye tumhe involve kar raha hoon…ms assistant GS..

K: Swaym-Sharon ko pick karne ke liye aap ko meri assistance ki kya zarurat hai….waise bhi mujhe ghar jaldi jaana hai..

(Kria said and was walking away when Rey pulled her towards him) {OHO HO HO LA LA LA}

R: seedha ghadi mein bhetho aur chalo..

K: kyun chalu mein..

R: kyun ke maine kaha hai (Rey was walking towards d car and Kria reluctantly following him)

K: soo

R: so BOSS IS ALWAYS RIGHT….remember this rule..

(Kria remembered how she told d princi she follows whatever Rey says and stamped her foot on the ground and went over to sit in the car)

(There was dead silence between the two in the car. But Rey couldn't help but look over towards his baatcutter… his heart was doing jumping jack that his baatcutter was with him in his car.. )

(They soon reached where Swaym-Sharon were stranded. Rey got out of the car)

Sh: Rey finally tum aagaye….thnk god mein toh thak gaye wait karte karte..

(Sharon saw Kria getting out of d car nd shut her mouth nd was shocked dat she was here. Rey saw her xpressions nd understood)

R: woh RDX ne hume kuch kaam diya tha so we just got late over dere…eh Sharon, Swaym chale...

(Sharon moved towards the car and Swaym noticed kria moving towards the car but Swaym walked faster then both of them and reached Rey's car and was about to sit in the front seat)

Sh: excuse me…tum peeche jaake betho...

S: mein yehi bethunga..

Sh: Rey mera best friend hai.. tumhara nahi.. so just move..

S: sorry fist come first serve...

R: stop it guys.. aisa karo, tum dono peeche baith jao n let Kriya sit in front..

Sh: Ji nahin..Mein iske saath nahin baith sakti.. Swayam.. Tum aage baith jao.. (Sharon was so irritated and tired that she just couldn't fight back)

(Kria gave a disgusting luk for making Sharon sit beside her. Rey looked towards her and got inside the car)

(Both the ladies sat lyk stubborn five yr old kids behind. Swaym was happy Sharon did not fuss…he deliberately sat in the front so that Kria or Sharon do not start fighting)

(Suddenly the car started jerking and it stopped)

Sh: ab kya hua??

R: oh shit...

(Rey and Swaym got off the car)


R: yeh ho kya raha hai guys??

S: tera bhi car breakdown….mujhe aisa kyun lag raha hai ke God hume ishara de rahe hai ke kuch bahut bura hone wala hai..

(Said Swaym looking around at the dark dead road)

R: Swaym kya bhol raha hai…chal RDX ko phone kar..

(Swaym trie RDX but his no. was not reachable….the girls come out furious)

K: kya hua??

S: Tyre punchered..

Sh: OMG ab kya karein

R: RDX ka phone nt reachable aa raha hai..

S: guys its too late now….ek kaam karte hai kisi se lift lethe hai...

R: haan chalo..u guys sit in d car..

(Kria and Sharon lean and stnd on two sides of d car while Rey nd Swaym are trying to get a lift. It was such a deady highway dere were hardly cars passing. One or two passed and ReYam tried every tactic to stop them but they didn't)

(Kria and Sharon looked at them and started laughing. Rey and Swaym were literally jumping over each car waving at them to stop)

Sh: ye dono kaise lift maang rahe hai..

K: exactly sab darr ke bhaag rahe hai..

(They go over to Rey and Swaym)


R: kya hua??

Sh: kya hua?? ye tum log kaise lift maang rahe ho?? aise toh mil gayi humhe lift..

K: aise bhoot banke maangoge toh sab bhaag hi jaayenge na..

S: acha toh ab tum sikhayoge ki lift kaise lete hain??

(Kria and Sharon give them a know it all look)

R: fine den u guys try..

K: fine hum dikhate hai ki lift kaise maangte hain..

(Rey and Swaym was finding it unbelievable that these two were working together)


(Kria and Sharon went and stood on the road looking out for a lift)

(Suddenly dey noticed a black jeep coming nd moved out their hands asking for lift…the jeep was at speed so it went ahead nd d boys smirked at d girls but then d jeep stopped nd den reversed back)

(Kria and Sharon gawked at what they were looking at. He was some HOT HANDSOME HUNK….Kria nd Sharon were literally drooling over him…they were soo lost when he said Hi they jus stared at him with their cheeks blushing on)

(And why not he did look very hot in dat black fitting shirt which shaped out his good built body….his sleeves were pulled up till his elbow showing off his tattoos. His face shone in d dark night like a Prince Charming…his hair was ruffled up
from d front nd few strands fell on his forehead which made him look so cute….and his smile nd dimples was something which bowled the girls)

The boys stared in horror at the girls...

Guys quicky moved fwd n talked to that person..


R: Hey dude, humari gaadi kharab ho gayi hai.. So can u help us out by giving us lift??
KSG: ya sure.. kahan jaana hai aap sab ne?
S: St Louis college..
Ksg: ohh.. St Louis.. ok.. chalo baith jao..

(After they are seated.. Gals go crazy n keep starring at him.. Rey n swayam try to grab the attention of their gals but they ignore them completely n keep drooling at him)

Ksg: Soo, aap log St Louis ke students hain..
Sw: haan..
Ksg: Kafi interesting coll hai.. In fact m a pass out from there...
K n Sh: Really??

(Guys are wondering wts wrong wid them)

Ksg: yaa.. i had b best time of my life in St Louis.. i was the GS..

(Rey n Kriya look towards each other n smile)


R: i am currently the GS of the Coll.. Rey.. Reyaansh Singhania
KSG: interesting.. nice to meet u young man..
K: aur mein, asst GS..
KSG: Arey wahh.. nice..
Sh: Mein coll ki cultural head hun... Sharon.. ( moves her hand fwd to shake but swayam takes her hand in hers )
S: gaadi chala rahen hain woh.. haath nahin mila sakte.. {lol} haina sir??
K: mein Kriya.. nice to meet you MR...
Ksg: Karan.. Karan Mallik

(They reach ST Louis then n thanked Karan Mallik for the lift )

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NEXT DAY IN COLLEGE:

(Vicky nd Nil were jus walking thru d corridor heading 2 d locker room b4 deir next class and Nil was blabbering to Vicky nd Vicky was busy eating d cake he quickly brought frm d canteen to fill his tummy b4 going to class but little did Nil notice that his friend walking beside him has entered another world as came in front of him was his deewani walking wid sum pile of books in hand nd struggling 2 keep her hair off her face)

(Vicky in deep thots to himself: mere naina how cum I have never noticed u b4?? so many tyms b4 u've walked thru dis corridor wid a bunch of books in ur hand but never my eyes swayed over 2 u jus becoz I thot u were a loser bookworm weakling. but den dere was ur beautiful hair which always covered ur beauty but dats one thing I really admire even btw those silky beautiful hair ur face shines brightly lyk d moon in d pitch darkness of d nite)


(She suddenly looked up from dat far end walking towards him lyk an angel wid her cute smile on her face. And then wat happened next moment struck Vicky's heart nd it started beating soo fast as if it wud pop out of his chest. Neha was holding her books on one hand nd waving wid d other smiling. only aftr a few seconds he noticed her eyes shift to the side nd he looked back and saw the other dazzler guy Ali whom Neha gave more footage than to Vicky. As he saw Ali walking towards Neha he had a plan, nd he dropped his cake.. but to his dismay he did not c on his other side where Neha was walking towards Ali nd stepped on d cake widout noticing and before Vicky cud hold her she fell wid a gr8 thud as all her books went flying and sum hit Nilesh)


'OUCH!!' screamed out Nil..

'AAHHH Neha again slide lyk sea-saw' complaining to herself nd den she noticed d cake squashed under her sandals..

N: EWW cake under Neha's sandal..

V: R u okay mere naina- I mean Neha.. { lol }

(Neha realises Vicky bending beside her)

V: woh actually cake mere haath se-

N: KYA u Vicky u made Neha step on cake to fall..

V: NAHI. .woh mein.. .woh galti se slip ho gaya haath se..

(But Neha misunderstands Vicky and thinks he purposely made her fall and tries to get up in anger but fails and was abt to fall when Vicky holds her. and both Vicky-Neha r lost in each others eyes)

'AAAOOW' said Neha trying to stndup but cn only stand wid Vicky's support

N: mera foot crack hogaya shayad... ab how Neha walk to class??

V: its ok neha.. I'll take you..

(Vicky said and Neha was again lost in him, Vicky took d chance and lifted Neha up on his hands and started walking as if he was strolling the park and the whole tym both of their eyes were set on each other which spoke a thousand words)


N: abe Vicky...!!!!!!

(Nil screamed out to Vicky but since he was not in his senses, Nil picked up d books which dropped as a hurricane over him and followed Vicky)

(When Vicky went downstairs to the atrium with both of them lost in each others eyes they were met by Vishaka, Bharat nd Amar)

Vish: WAT d hell?? Neha n Vicky??

(Vicky put down Neha both of them coming back to their senses)

N: woh Neha slip again. Vicky ka cake-

Vish: WAT??isne tumhe cake se phisla diya..

N: haan.. mera matlab hai nahii..

V: Vicky agar next tym tune aisa kuch kiya na toh dekhna mujhse bhura koi nahi hoga..

S: tumse bhura koi ho sakhta hai

(All of dem turned around to see Simmi nd Rinni walking towards dem and Nilesh cums behind Vicky handing him d books)

B: aagayi plastic ki gudhiyan..

(Said Bharat as all of dem sensed trouble coming)

S: toh tum kya keh rahi thi Vishaka, ke mujhse bhura koi nahin hoga..?? typical LS dialogue...tumse bura koi nahi dikh sakhta..

(Said Simmi luking at Vishaka wid disgust)

Vish: pls give me a break bimboo... tumse toh behtar hi dikhti hoon.. Sharon wannabe chick...!!

R: how dare u?

(Before Vishaka cud say anything further Vicky broke in)

Vick: yeh toh Sharon ki line hai..

vish: ha ha.. dekha kaha tha na mein.. wannabe...!!

Vick: guys guys plzz.. yeh ladayi band karo plz.. pak gaya hun seriously...

Vish: oh really?? pak gaye ho toh Neha kyun giraya??

S: jo giri hui hai usse aur kitna girana

R: xactly

(Neha got furious nd pushed aside Vicky facing Simmi Rinni)

N: how dare u call Neha gira hua.. tumhara friend gira hua hai..cake usne giraya tha neha par..

R: aankh band kar ke chalogi ho slip toh karoge na...

S: shayad verbal diarrhoea ko zor ki lagi hai

(Vicky got soo furious at Simmi was abt to confront her but Nilesh stopped him bak)

(There Vishaka Neha Simmi Rinni broke out in a huge verbal fight saying anything nd everything nd around them every1 stopped to watch d riot while d guys tried stopping d girls.. but as a result were just pushed aside by d girls so dey all sat on d staircase in line with hands on deir face as if dey were watching a really boring movie)

(RDX was jus passing by d corridors when he notices all the students grouped up and shoutings from the centre. he moves to the centre and was not surprised to d cause of the shoutings)

RDX: GUYS STOP IT ENOUGH IS ENOUGH

(Shouted RDX.. which took d girls by surprise nd stopped bickering immediately while d guys felt as if dey woke up from a disturbing sleep)

RDX: aap sab yahan kya kar rahe hai.. pls go bak 2 ur classes..

RDX said 2 d crowd. He then looked at the girls who started moving from there but RDX stopped them..

RDX: I need 2 talk 2 u guys

S: Sir who jus choti si baat..

RDX: no Simmi yeh choti si baat nahi hai anymore. guys yeh ek colg hai not a fight ring ke aap log hamesha kahi par shurru ho jao.. I warned you guys before also not 2 create a scene jis ke liye mujhe strict action lena pade.

(Every1 remembered d food fight incident aftr which d LOUIAN rule was made)

R: iska matlab phir se band pehna padega??

S: iski koi zarurat nahi hai sir (Simmi said scared he wud tel dem to where d bands again). we were jus arguing on a very small issue dats it..

Vs: xactly ..u dnt need to take any strict action sir.. yeh sab toh chalta rehta hai na sir..

RDX: aap log isse argument keh the hai.. then wat's fighting for u guys?? Agar princi ne dekha hota, toh pata nahin kya karte woh against u ppl..

(All the girls silently looked down)

RDX: nd secondly nahi mein aap logo ko phirse band pehane ke liye nahi kahunga (All were relieved on that) '.but haan action toh mein zarur lunga (sab ke hosh awaaz urr gaye) '.i think its high time someone else solves this matter now..

Nil: u mean Princi???

RDX: nahi Nilesh.. wat u guys need is a COUNSELLAR..

Every1: WAT??

RDX: pls get bak 2 ur classes..

(RDX left while all of them were standing stunned)

V: yeh kya BOMB poda re RDX ne..

B: arey koi mujhe batayega ke ye RDX ne jo bola uska matlab kya hai... gali toh nahi diya na?

A: Nahi Bhalat.. gali nahi hai.. .thounselar matlab naya teacher aa raha hai..

N: iske liye counselling ki kya zarurat hai

B: abey ye ladkiyon ko sabak tho sikhana hi chahiye.. inke fights mein hum log bhi fas jate hain..

( Next is the same thing that we saw in D3.. They are planning to play pranks on the new teacher..But Kriyaansh n Swaron are not involved in this )

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Thats all for now.. Had so much fun with Farah while making this one.. 😆 😉

Hope you all enjoyed it... out for more excitement in the next part...there's a SURPRISE for all of you coming up..

Keep Posting your Comments n Suggestions.. 😊😃

Thanks for Reading...!!!!!!!!

~~~ Mick N Farah ~~~
Edited by ~~ MICK ~~ - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
U guys keep on updating! How m i supposed to catch up then? 😒
Can't read today either due to reasons.
Hopefully I can tomorrow.

M sure it is rocking.

Chapter 7

Like the way you make it go in FLASHBACK!
outstanding flashback
One to remember for sure...
Read the whole thing.
Like I said, sorry for not big comment this time.
:(
Keep up the great work.

Love, Khushi
Xx


Edited by Princess_Khushi - 14 years ago

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