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Posted: 13 years ago
why'll maan bring tear in geet's eyes?nooo they have to be together.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Congrats on new FF:-D
lovely updates ...JE is one of m fav.
Beautifully written ...cont, soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Please dear..have more confidence in yourself. This chapter was wonderful and so is your writing skills..Glad to note your promise to continue this FF till the end. I've read the original book but am looking forward to read the twists and turns you are planning .It'll be really appreciated if you'd change the most depressing part about Mr.Rochester losing his eye sight and a hand..please don;t think that i'm intefering..this was just a suggestion.I'll happily read whatever you write,Promise!!😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow so maan also enchanted by geet,awsome prt
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Posted: 13 years ago
Despite the right side of my cheek have swollen to twice its usual size due to dental issues, I'm still in a hyper mood.
All thanks to this genius: https://www.youtube.com/user/fouseyTUBE
I've spent all morning watching his videos. He speaks the truth & cheered me up so go check him out.

I was stalking my thread, as you do & realised someone asked me what my name was & I didn't even tell them.
In fact, I haven't really introduced myself properly.

I'm Fozia, I'm 17 & I live in the wonderful land of the United Kingdom (note, heavy sarcasm)
I'm part Arab from my mother's side & Pakistani from my father's side. I was born & bred in the UK which makes me a British-Pakistani-Arab...?
That's too confusing. Let's just say I'm British.

I'm a student, studying A Levels & I plan to go to university to study English then become a teacher. Whoo.

So yeah, I hope that answers any questions about me as a person. Here's chapter 8, enjoy.

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Chapter 8 - Can't Stay Away

The seconds passed into minutes, minutes into hours, hours into days and the days into a week.

Geet had grown more restless with each passing day. And more frustrated with herself for continuously allowing herself to think about Maan.

She walked to the kitchen before breakfast, expecting a usual dull & monotonous day when Madhavi threw her hands up in the air at the sight of Geet.

"Miss Geet, I am so frantic! I have so many courses to prepare, the house must be cleaned spotless, I have to help Amelia-"

"What's going on?"

"Mr Maan is coming back today!" Madhavi began scrubbing the kitchen worktops ferociously.

"Today?" Her heart picked up in double time at the sight of seeing him again.

"Yes, and he's bringing the Malhotras with him. They're staying over for a few nights."

Geet's mind wandered back to Madhavi's comments about the eldest daughter being linked to Maan. She gazed at the floor, lost in her own thoughts.

Was Maan planning to marry Sasha Malhotra soon? Would they get engaged during her stay here? How would he behave towards Sasha?

"Geet!"

Geet blinked & looked up at Madhavi, who had a cloth in her hand. Beads of sweat rested on her forehead.

"I would really appreciate it if you could handle Amelia. I need you to clean her room, make sure her best outfits are ready & ensure she's on her best behaviour."

"Best behaviour?" Geet wondered what Madhavi meant by that; Amelia was always quiet & reclusive.

"Amelia has a habit of becoming hostile towards people she doesn't know. Especially the Malhotras. In the past, she has incurred Mr Maan's wrath with her behaviour."

"She wasn't hostile towards me when I first arrived."

"She likes you. You have a warm & friendly aura about you, Miss Geet. But make sure you explain to her that she needs to behave herself. For her sake more than anyone else's."

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Several hooves of horses clicked as the sound of his arrival back to his estate was heard. The Malhotras accompanied Maan on their horses; Mrs Savitri Malhotra had insisted they go on horseback. She was particularly eager for Sasha to display her horse riding skills to Maan.

The man himself rode ahead, his eyes focused on his glorious house before him which was about half a mile away from him now. He had been leading them alone, but turned his head when he heard another horse beside him.

Sasha rode on her white horse, looking straight ahead. Her long, glossy black hair was pulled up into a loose bun, with a few strands loose as they billowed in the wind. Her lavish dress was flowed out around her.

She was beautiful, and Maan never denied it. But he wasn't attracted to her; he saw far more to a person than their beauty.

Sasha turned to see Maan looking at her - she smiled at him, a smile that had charmed many men before.

"You look perplexed Mr Maan, never seen a woman ride a horse before?"

"I have seen many women ride," he replied, looking back ahead.

"I am sure you have. May I add that it is truly the most affluent women who possess a flair & talent for horse riding. It has been running in my family for generations."

He began to grow a little irritated at her self boasting, but chose to ignore it as the gates appeared closer. The guards rushed to open them, just in time for Maan to gallop into his front garden and stop abruptly, eyeing the sight before him.

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"How do I look, Miss Geet?"

Amelia twirled around in the light pink dress she wore. Pink was her favourite colour, as she had told Geet before.

"You look adorable."

Amelia ran to the full length mirror & admired herself.

"Can you come & sit down next to me for a minute, Amelia? I want to talk to you."

She sat down beside Geet, her small hands folded in her lap.

"I've been told that your behaviour hasn't been good when visitors have arrived."

Amelia looked down. Geet noticed she squeezed her hands together.

"I'm not scolding you, I promise. I just want you to know that I want you to be on your best behaviour. You'll listen to me, right?"

She remained motionless & expressionless, her eyes focused on her hands.

"Amelia?"

"Promise me Mr Maan won't hit me!" Geet was taken aback when Amelia suddenly looked up at her, tears in her eyes & fear evident on her face.

"Why would Mr Maan hit you?"

"He has before, when I've been bad! Please promise me, Miss Geet. I don't want to get hit again. I'll be good, I'll do whatever you say, just don't let him hit me."

Geet pulled Amelia into a hug, kissing the top of her head. "I promise he won't hurt you," she whispered, her eyebrows lodged into a frown as she contemplated over Amelia's tearful plea.

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Her heart pounded in her chest as she descended the stairs, holding Amelia's hand. She looked around; no sight of the Malhotras. Maybe they had decided not to come.

She already knew Maan was here as she had heard his voice earlier.

Reluctantly, Geet opened the door to the drawing room & her eyes fell on the one person who was looking right back at her.

She averted her gaze quickly then walked with Amelia to where Maan & the Malhotras stood. Geet's eyes were downcast, to Maan's irritation.

Maan cleared his throat, then began. "Mr & Mrs Malhotra, this is Miss Geet Handa. She takes care of Amelia."

Geet held out a hand for Savitri to shake, but Savitri took one look at Geet with her hair tied back & in a simple grey dress & looked away.

Mr Malhotra however, had the courtesy to shake her hand & smiled. "Aditya Malhotra, pleased to meet you."

They released hands & Geet stepped back, folding her hands together in front of her. She could make out 3 figures from the corner of her eye, as they stood to her left.

"Naintara," Maan said, gesturing for Naintara to step forward & greet Geet. Naintara was very pretty with her slightly tanned skin, almond shaped green eyes & light brown hair. She looked a lot like her mother.

Naintara shook Geet's hand weakly, not paying much attention to being polite.

"Natasha," he said. The girl in the middle stepped forward & smiled at Geet. She had dark brown eyes, black hair & fair skin. She was stunning, but in a simple way. They shook hands then Natasha retreated as she sensed her mother's angry eyes bore into her.

"And Sasha."

Geet was left dumfounded as the eldest Malhotra daughter stepped forward. She was unbelievably beautiful.

Sasha smirked at Geet's surprise & took her hand firmly. "How do you do, Miss Geet?"

"Very well, thank you," Geet managed to say, not failing to notice the beautiful pearls & wonderful dress she had on.

"And of course, you all know Amelia."

Geet looked at Maan, & noticed the cold look he shot Amelia. She looked at Amelia who stood a few feet away, & shrunk back at Maan's gesture.

"I am certain we will have a pleasant stay," Savitri said. "Even if some people quite evidently seem to stick out like a sore thumb." Her small eyes flickered towards Geet, who looked down at the floor in humiliation.

"Oh, you have a new piano!" Naintara exclaimed excitedly, glancing at the piece behind her.

"It's refurbished," Maan said.

"Sasha, you must play one of your pieces!"

"Oh, well, only if Maan agrees," she batted her eyelashes & smiled at him sweetly. Geet felt her stomach churning inside.

"I don't see why not," he replied.

She had been standing here for the best part of 10 minutes and Maan hadn't even looked at her once.

"Let's sit down," she said softly to Amelia as they sat on the sofas away from everyone else. The Malhotras littered themselves around the room; the mother & daughters gathered around the piano, helping Sasha prepare.

Maan & Aditya stood by the fireplace as they poured themselves a glass of wine.

Amelia was engrossed with playing with an ornament off one of the nearby tables, & Geet felt alone & lost as usual.

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He kept stealing glances at her, & her distant expression. He watched as her eyes were fixed on the floor, her hands mindlessly fiddled with the hem of her sleeve. She looked lost in her own thoughts.

Maan suddenly felt the urge to sit down beside her, tilt her chin up towards his & read the emotions in her beautiful eyes. He shook his head lightly & turned his attention back to Aditya, who was heatedly talking about a businessman he worked with.

The sound of a slow harmony filled the room as everyone was silenced. They all watched as Sasha began playing a beautiful composition.

Naintara & her mother stood together, smiling at the reaction Maan was giving.

Maan's gaze was fixed on the piano as the music reminded him of his mother. He paid little heed to the person playing it, but rather lost himself in the familiar piece that he had heard his mother play so often during his childhood.

Naintara & Savitri genuinely thought Maan was displaying interest towards Sasha.

"Maan, why don't you join her?" Savitri said.

Geet's head shot up, as she looked from Maan to the Malhotras. Maan looked as if he was staring at Sasha.

Sasha turned back to look at Maan, flashing her dazzling smile. "Yes, please do. It would be a great privilege."

Reluctantly, he set his glass on the fireplace & walked to the piano, aware of Geet's eyes following his movements. He sat beside Sasha, who looked at him with admiration in her eyes, then they both began playing the piece together.

Their close proximity, being reflected by their duet, was something Geet could no longer take. She stood up, not failing to notice how close their hands were on the piano.

"Excuse me," she muttered, more to herself than anyone else, as she hurried out of the drawing room.

Maan continued playing but looked up in surprise as he saw the last of a grey dress, before the door slammed shut.

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Edited by walkintomylifex - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Shoryyy mummy for being late but hey atleast I commented😳
lool I just subscribed to him...will check the videos out later =P
Awww it's only been a few days and geet misses him terribly
Why doesn't maan want her to have feelings for him?!
Urrgh hate the malhotras especially savitri and sasha...what :O sasha and maan togeteher?!
Hope they break up quickly...can't stand maan wiv anyone else :P awww felt so sorry for geet everyone had each other and she was standing ther like a loner :( oooh someone was feeling jealous seeing maan wiv someone else ;) xx
Can't wait to read the next chapter
Cont soon Mummy and awww hope ur swollen cheek heals soon :(
Luv you loadss and loadss
Mwaaah xx
Thx 4 the PM <3
Edited by MaaneetLuverr - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Amazing dear...you always leave me in awe...

btw I also stay in great land called UK...LOL

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Posted: 13 years ago


hey Fouzia...thanx for pm

interesting update...U answered some of my queries in this part...all three sisters names...Geet missed him and Maan also missed her...but there is so much status gap in between..

why Maan is so rude to Amelia...what is the relation between them...

waiting for next update
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
the whole malhotra family is disgusting.

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