Nothing hurts me more than your tears

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Posted: 14 years ago
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He closes his eyes and has a vision of the girl in tears. He wonders why he can't bear to see her sad. Every teardrop leaves a sore in his heart. As if the water ignites a fire in his heart which can only diminish with her smile.

As she watches them unite it brings a smile to her face. But the smile slowly begins to fade when he raise his arms to touch. It is a touch she unknowingly longs for. An embrace she wants to feel. Her heart begins to ache and tears well down her cheeks.


He isn't lost in the halfhearted hug. His body embraces the girl but his mind is elsewhere. His heart belongs to the other girl, the one whose tears ignite fire within his heart.


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Posted: 14 years ago
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Beautifully written, very vivid, i could easily imagine both of their emotions, loved it!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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It was a lovely scene..


Uss falak ke teer ka kya nishana tha
Jahan thee meri manzil wahin mera aashiyana tha
Bas pahunch hi rahi thi Kashti saahil pe
Is toofan ko bhi abhi hi aana tha...

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nicely written...
so much going on between the two..when no words are even uttered...Barun and Sanaya and doing such wonderful job!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Well written.. I just loved that whole scene.. It was really beautiful!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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you described the scene very nicely and I totally agree...Barun and Sanaya did an exceptional job acting out the scene...it was very beautiful
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Body language says it all.

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