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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Arians

awasome part
thnx for pm

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: priti11

awesome.
superb.
fab..
rocking.
wonderful...
loved the upd.
thanx for the pm.
take care.

This is from SDOLL but i liked the whole I love U from Pia to ABHAY which is exactly what the past 2 updates have been about
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shivanirajput

awesome update
abhiya romance was too hot
but jai pia has really become an obsession for him
i hope he will not hurt her
now i guess u r bringing back maithali
that will be gr8 to see
please update soon

This is what Jeh's love is all about OBSESSION. He reminds me of DARR where SRK stalks Juhi to the point of her almost going crazy.
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Posted: 14 years ago
very nice update ayesh di.just read nw again.loved it.u r rocking in ff wrinting!awesome work.be it!gn.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update 😊 I so eagerly waiting to know who this new female is? I am super duper excited if it turns out to be Maithali. Now that Pia is a hunter I hope we get to see a face off between Pia n Metz 😃 Good job Ayesha 👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
Lovely start. U write awesomely di. :)

ABhIna & AbhIya 😍Whoa..
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Posted: 14 years ago

:::Update 5:::PROPHECY FULFILLED:::

The woman in red was none other than Maithali. She was back to reclaim her mosed prized posession. Abhay Raichand was going to be all hers again just as soon as Pia met her maker. Maithali was going to have fun with Pia. She had the audacity to break her Boleved out of his tomb and claim Abhay as her own. Maithali wasn't going to condone Pia's dirty little antics with Abhay. He was only Maithali's. Abhay was her Obsession. He was her only LOVE. One she'd longed for and targeted endlessly so he could feel her pain if being decieved in love. Maithali saw a year ago how wrong she'd been realising Sid had made all this up manipulating her into thinking Abhay had forsaken her opening him up to new love in the form of her poor imitation of a lookalike. Maithali was livid at Pia holding Abhay shielding him from her and from the werewolves. Maithali wished she could laugh out loud the mere human thought she could protect Abhay with her fragile body. Human's were dumb. But Pia came even at an all time lower standard than the usual always there in the front line of danger so Abhay can protect her. Its how she got to him in the first place. Abhay was a sucker for the underdog.
Pia blew her hair out of her face angrily, frowning and rasped-U can't have him Maithali. None of U are going to touch him.
Maithali laughed-Little lamb (mimicing Pia) None ofU are going to touch him! Get real. Its U i want . Abhay can handle himself with both Jeh and Deepanita. (Turns to see Abhay's handsome feature unwilling to let it melt her cold heart) Oh Abhay! I really thought you'd have learnt by now that loving Pia (Spits on the floor) Its repulsive to even think a vampire could love such a thing seeming as U are the devil incarnate. This time i won't spare her Abhay. I won't let my love for U tamper with my stance. See how U fight us off Abhay.
Abhay tried to push Pia back so he was shielding her away but Pia was proving to be a very good match for his strength (Pia shakes her head telling him this time they are in this together) Fine. Maithali U won't win this war. I win't let U get any where near Pia.
Maithali full of ego in her powers and in her allies-Oh you'll find we haven't come alone Abhay. I have back up. (She laughs flashing her fangs and her eyes become neon electric blue) Look around U.
Jeh gives Pia his disgusted look. He was reviled by the animal, the satan she'd chosen over him. He really had no alterantive but to push Pia with the sharks. Pia he would save but Abhay was his priority. There was no way he was going to allow this golden opportunity to ensnare and finish this b*****d off once and for all. Then Pia would be his again. Maithali wasn't going to kill Pia immediately. She needed enough blood to become the vampire supreme. A true leader. Any leader was better than Abhay. Jeh detested Abhay with every fibre of his being.
Jeh sneered gleefully-U didn't think we'd face U alone did U? (Sarcastically smiles swiping his eyebrows) Oh U did!1 I'm sure you'll have fun in getting beat up by a clan that actually does stick together unlike your own.
Abhay gave Jeh his murderous hiss showing his eyes glimmering from Violet to red-U want to start walking the walk or are U too chicken so U want your lackey's to do the work for U.
Pia threatened Jeh-If U so much as touch ABHAY U are dead Jeh. I will personally make sure of it.
Jeh rolled his eyes-Stop being so melodramatic Pia. As if U could even outmatch me in a fight.
Pia pushed Abhay away from her and moved pushing Jeh backwards-U want to test my limits Jeh. (Screams at him) I will go down with my very last breath if I have to but U won't touch him.
Maithali grabbed Pia scartching her with her nails making her flesh vleed and licked her finger nails-Tasty Pia. Abhay U should have tried some of this. Its too good stuff. The elixirof our very being ABHAY. Pia's been keeping this all to herself Its a shame i can't share it with U. (Smirks at the intoxication and the sheer power making her a little drunk on it) Pia your blood tatses a little different here. More of a hit in it. Have U been on drugs?
Pia roared-U want some more of this stuff then come get it b***h!
ABHAY TRIED TO STOP PIA FROM GOADING Maithali but Jeh and Deepanita got hold of him. Pia attempted to get back to Abhay freeing him from them but she was busy prancing a game of agility beats animal insticts which Maithali had both of but Pia had her own batch of something extra. The power oif Love by her side and the determination to win and live over power.
They were surrounded by werewolves and Chand sensed his son was in trouble. The Vampire Superiors had felt their leader was in need of their assisstance. So they all travelled from the next town with ample supplies of weaponry at their disposal. Haseena could feelt a blow to Abhay's heart by the She-Wolf.
Haseena hissed to Chand-Our son needs us we have to get there faster. He's outnumbered.
Chand mused licking his lips-Don't fret Haseena. We are in for a treat. Dinner is served and we have werewolves to feast on.
Mahesh one of the vampire Superiors-Your son is doing a far better job than we'd anticipated but bringing that many werewolves alone is not a wise move.
Chand concured defending Abhay-My son has the habit of inviting trouble especially when theres innocent blood to be spilled. U don't know the Khurana's at all. Their leader Deepanita is very cunning and she's enlisted a vampire on her team. We must stop them before the vampire gets any Power.
Ramesh sniffed the night air-Oh we are near already. I can taste them. They are all around Abhay.
Chand hoped their new Ally Alina would help Abhay-Hang in there Abhay.
Alina kept feeling this weird feeling. Like her insticts were screaming at her. It was Abhay in trouble. Alina closed her eyes to forsee Abhay attacked by her clan. Her mother was leading it and Jeh was part of the action too. Alina teleported herself using her powers to get to Abhay moving with the speed of light to where Abhay was. Abhay was badly bruised and was fending off 10 werewolves and her own Mother. This was her moment to shine. Alina jumped in to the centre having her back to Abhay who was relieved to see her there by his side.
Alina gave him a little worried look-I was busy practicing. Sorry!
Abhay smirked-Your here now Alina.
Alina touched Abhay''s face healing him with her inner power-Now lets finish this.
Alina took hold of her mother power blasting her with her mind. Deepanita grwoled snaling at her daughter-U traitor. U stabbed your clan for this bood sucker? U i won't sprae.
Alina clawed her mother using her half wolf powers-Oh shut it woman. Your voice grates for starters and quit being such a cry baby. Am i glad i washed my hands off of U.
Deepanita lunged for Alina trying to inflicted her with cuts using her sharp claws just about missing her.
Alina power blasted all her wolf clan away from Abhay exhausting her allowing Deepanita to get close to Alina. Alina powered up her shield smiling softly at her mother and electricuting her with lightening-My personal touch Mother. U like it? (Alina looked over her shoulders to see what Abhay was doing and then to Pia gracefully back flipping over Maithali super kicking the vamp) Wow! (Alina was concerned on how they were going to keep her clan at bay. There was only so much she could do. Her powers were growing the more she used it but she was wxhausting her body draining out her powers thanks to the power shield she had around Abhay and then her own assault on the elements) I need help!
Chand, Haseena, Mahesh, Ramesh and a group of 6 vampire Superiors came to level the playing field. It allowed a vampire to fight off 3 werewolves at a time. Ramesh took out the outer circle while Ramesh and the other 6 did the same leaviing Chand and Haseena with the latter 3.
Abhay and Jeh fought it out cursing the other taking blows to their bodies right down to their jaws. Jeh transformed right in front of Abhay shocking Pia reeling from all that transpired around her. Maithali bit Pia but was surprised to see a counter attack. Pia and Maithali faced of levelling out the playing field as Pia grabbed a stake and hurled it through Maithali's heart. Maithali spat out blood alarmed by Pia's strength.
Maithali weakly hissed-U will never win Abhay. How?
Pia gave a rue smile feeling sorry for the vapire-Maithali i am sorry Abhay no longer loves U and that its me he chose but U know what? U never deserved Abhay because U were willing to imprison him, throw him to the lions so U could have him. This is insanity and its not love Maithali. I really believe U do loove Abhay but not at the risk of killing him. Look he is faced with an obstacle and he could die. U did this to him. Like U i can never share ABHAY with anyone. So i understand U better than U think i do but i do.
Maithali cries blood of tears watching Abhay-I'm so sorry Pia. Love blinds U and a vampire like me was consumed with hatred and a LOVE obsession to obtain ABHAY at any cost. Save my Abhay. Please. save him.
Pia gave Maithali a little blood taking out the stake-I can't let U die without meeting ABHAY. I don't owe U anything but everyone deserves to have their dying wish fulfiled.
Abhay saw Maithali lying on the ground and another two werewolves were surrounding Pia so Abhay swiftly outmanouevred Jeh who was about to stake him. So Abhay countered back driving the wooden wedge through Jeh.
Alina blasted her mother matching her power for power using all her energies to power out Deepanita While Abhay helped Alina holding Deepanita down allowing Alina to finishe her off using her electric power bolts until she exploded right before Alina's very eyes. Small lights particles came out and meshed with Alina becoming greater in strength. Power was passed on. The prohphecy was now complete. Abhay proved he was a leader by taking down the werewolf clan and freeing his clan of imminent danger. Alina was now a leader of what was left of her clan while Pia slayed two werewolves and a vampire.
Alina apologized-I'm sorry Bhai. I could not save U.
Chand, Haseena, Mahesh, Ramesh and their 3 surving vampire superiors glowed in triumph having fed on their enemies. They congratulated Abhay on his success but Abhay wanted to evade this calamity. Lives had been lost and for what vengence? honour? Being the superior species. Abhay hugged Pia and then moved towards Maithali's body with his eyes dark.
Abhay held Maithali in his arms-Why did U do this Maithali? Why?
Maithali rasped struggling to stay alive-I found no peace being what i am Abhay. Without U i am nothing. U defined me. And with U loving her. Loving Pia i just couldn't baer it. No woman animal or vampire would allow another to take their love from them. I became dark. The very thing i am not. I wanted out. I wanted something to fill that void in my black heart so i clung for Power but even this did not quench my thirst Abhay. I thrist for only U. And only one of us could survive. Either it was Pia or it is me. And i know you'd al;ways save Pia over me. U can't help it. U have always been pure of heart and i am anything but pure. I am not the Maithali U loved as a human. But i am still your Maithali.
Abhay kissed Maithali's forehead allowing her to die in peace-I forgive U Maithali. U will always hold one special place in my life but Pia owns every other part of my SOUL, and mind.
Maithali whimpered holding Pia's hand-Take good care of him Pia. Don't ever hurt him like i did and be there for each other.
With that Maithali was dead and Abhay and Pia were free to love without fear of Maithali's soul being in turmoil. The superiors felt Pia's power and allowed their leader to have a Slayer as a life partner. It would spread fear in all supernaturals and a little cross marriage would be good for their reputation. Slayer and Vampire was a first.
Alina headed to Abhay's place with PIA, THE VAMPIRE SUPERIORS AND HER OWN CLAN THE FEW LEFT FROM THIS ATTACK MORE WERE ON THEIR WAY TO MEET THEIR FUTURE QUEEN! Alina gathered them all in a circle getting their blessing which was vital to completing this huge task she had. Alina and Abhay's palms were cut with a ritual knife for the blood oath ceremony connecting her with Abhay forever thus forming a peace treaty between vampires and werewolves. Their hands were then pressed against the others so they were tied until the ending of the ceremony. Haseena posed as Alina's mother as she now saw Alina as a surrogate daughter. While Chand as the father of his vampire leader did the same until it was complete. Now Pia was added into this as she was going to be the new Vampire Queen she too had to bind herself with Alina. It was a way of guranteeing eternal peace and harmony within the two camps.
Alina was a little upset having lost both her family members in this blood feeuled war. Abhay comforted Alina promising her that she was now part of his family forever. Alina gave him a big wide smile promising Abhay she'd always be a call away.
Abhay and Pia sneaked out of the ceremony met Chai Wala Baba one last time to get his blessing to unite as one in matrimony.
Chai Wala Baba-I'm proud to see U two have finally done it. You've beaten all the odds. For U are the chosen ones.
Pia and Abhay were now confused-What?
Chai Wala Baba chuckled-Oh give it 3 months time kids. You'll have a little bundle of joy. Actually make it a double surprise. i AM sure U know what i am on about. Start preparing for the newcomers Pia. Especially U Abhay. You'll need to brace yourselves. They are going to show U the meaning of live wires.
Pia ventured home smiling at the new revelation. Miniture Abhay's inside her. She just couldn't wait. So Pia managed to convince her father to accept Abhay as his son in law. The wedding was fixed within two weeks the sooner they were married the sooner they could get on with their lives.
Abhay sneaked Pia into his room every night until the wedding spending every waking morning with her and sneaking her back to her room at the crack of morn SO NOBODY WOULD SUSPECT. iT KEPT THEIR ROMANCE ALIVE but Misha found out ribbing Pia for her exra curricular activities.
So Alina, Pia and Abhay were all now complete individuals in charge of their destinies and of their people leading them to a new path one that lead to unity. Their people were no longer in demand for each others blood. Friendship was what they all soght from each other.
The End
Edited by matwamango - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
great ending ayesha. fabulous. loved that the superiors accepted Pia.
Edited by abhayfan_dishu - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh. . .So sweet one. . . Sad that it ended.0. . . .Thanks a lot for making this beautiful one story. ..Love you lot
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Posted: 14 years ago
great ending ayesha... loved it!!!!!

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