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Posted: 14 years ago
Os on Pg 99

Wow

Such a cute os

Loved it
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Posted: 14 years ago
wanted to post on a fresh page!! 😳
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okay so sweets, i am writing after a pretty long time 🤔, well as you all know, fakeness around in the forum effected me pretty badly, more badly than i ever expected .. ANYWAYS, the thing is that i wrote an OS.

This is a request form my frnd ayshu .. she wanted me to write a romantic OS, but this is how it turned out 😕
Ayshu jiger, i know this is not what u wanted, but inspite of trying I couldn't write the type of romance u wanted .. hope u like it .. 🤗


MAYUR OS
An ordinary winter night

Nupur peeped out of the blanket and saw Mayank reading a book. She closed her eyes in anger and again went under.

It was a Saturday January night, and the newly married couple was sitting on the opposite corners of the room due to a fight, nupur under the blanket on the bed and mayank on the study table, immersed in the book.

"after a fight there are supposed to be patch-ups rather than study sessions", spoke nupur from under the blanket, in a loud voice, enough for the neighbors to hear.

"and in this weather, people are supposed to drink hot coffee, rather than chilled cold drinks", replied mayank, in his usual soft tone, and his voice combined with a slight rattle of page turn.

"people should understand that even in winters, someone CAN get extremely thirsty and crave for cold drinks"

"and then people should understand that after satisfying these silly cravings, they shouldn't opt for rain bathes the very next hour"

"people better not forget that I LOVE RAINS"

And I LOVE MY WIFE AND CAN'T SEE HER SICK"

And mayank's voice was followed by silence.

Nupur had no answer. Her mouthed gapped and slowly looking out of the blanket, she saw mayank smiling at her and ignoring the melt of her heart she went inside with a "hmph"

Once she was under the blanket, she opened her eyes and felt her cheeks boil even in the dark under-blanket environment. She bit her lip and smiled to herself when she felt the bed shift. Blood came rushing to her cheeks with greater speed as light fell on her face due to the removal blanket from her face and then a wellknown pair of protective arms pulled her close, "I love you", he whispered, followed by a brush of butterfly kisses on her neck and all her anger melted like ice under sun , or perhaps even faster.

"yeah, and that is why you shout at me", she pouted, but turned towards him, hugging him tightly.

"I am sorry if I shouted, but I totally freaked out seeing you shivering like that", he stroked her hair and she snuggled further to him.

"how are you now?", he asked, moving a bit away and stroking her cheek, "yeah fine, much better, shivering gone", she smiled and received a mirror reaction from her husband. Mayank pulled her close and she closed her eyes in his embrace.

"mayank..", she said after a couple of minutes.

"hmm,", was the reply.

"umm ' how much was the doctor's fee?", she looked up at him to find his brows knitted.

"what?"

"I asked about the doctors' fee", she bit her lip and sighing mayank pulled her close, "don't worry, I didn't have to take a loan", he giggled and nupur hit him on chest, "that was not funny!, tell na",she sat up and mayank smiled, "nupur what do u have to do with it?"

"kia mtlb what do I have to do with it?, I have everything to do with it, just tell me"
,she glared and then resumed her previous position of all snuggled upto him.

"it was 500", he said.

"and medicines?'

"nupur!"

"mayank..", she glared and he gave up, " they were for 500 as well"

"1000 ruppes", nupur looked up again and then hugged him tightly, "I am so sorry mayank, it's been so hard for you to work along with study and we've been managing accounts so precisely and between of all this a 1000 rupees unwanted expenditure that too because of my stupidity", she said and hid her face in his chest.

"are u done ranting?", asked an amused mayank.

"yes", she pouted.

"good!, now listen to me", he cupped her face.

"nupur I am your husband, and you are my responsibility, I am the one who is supposed to take care of all your needs, and thus saying sorries is certainly not acceptable, so please ..", he glared and nupur moved close, "are u done giving your speech?", she asked placing arms around his neck,

"yes,", he smiled.

"good!, now you listen to ME!", she glared, "mayank if you are the one to take acre of my needs than I am the one who should be taking care that you are not in any kind of trouble, stress or financial problem, so being formal is certainly not acceptable", she completed her sentence ,raising her collar and mayank broke in a giggle, "okay wifey", smiling, he hugged her.

"btw now I guess you should sleep", he moved away but nupur resisted, "kia mayank ..",she pouted.

"kia mtlb kia mayank?, go to sleep you are not well",

"I am well", she said slowly and snuggled further to him, pressing her lips over his neck.

"and?", asked mayank, taking her in his arms,

"and that we have a holiday tomorrow", she sighed as nupur action of kissing his neck was repeated by mayank on her neck.

"and I love you", and before her statement followed another *and*, she kissed him softly.

The kiss was soon followed by much more and the moonlight seeping in the room witnessed how these two people beautified an ordinary winter night, by strengthening their relation and overcoming the phases slowly


Edited by Fantasia. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Fantuuu🤗🤗

Tu pitegi mujhse if you say I'll not like it!!😡😡...I LOVED IT YAAR!!!!
😍
you know what I read it again and again😳😳
That was sooo beautiful!!!!!!.😍...and sooo romantic!!!!!☺️☺️
I just loved the way Mayank said and I LOVE MY WIFE...awww...he is adorable😍
and the way she was concerned about his financial concern...😳😳...thats called true companionship😳😳
aur romance toh...BY GOD!!☺️
That was just soo lovely😍...I couldn't have asked for more😳😳
Thank you soo much mere jigar ki tukri🤗
Edited by aysha_mayur - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow loved the cute fight
the way they were addressing each other as people was cute loved it
beautiful and romantic os
felt really nice to read ur writings after so long
thanks for the pm
pls continue writing 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Lovely ☺️
Missed your writing so much... Thank you for coming up with a wonderful OS... 🤗
Take care!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Classic, there, I am quite fond of your lighthearted post-marriage MN. For, I never really liked the pair of them after the confession. This was well, warming and everything. And there, you write well.



Thanks for the PM.




-Savage
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Posted: 14 years ago
This ws amazing kinza...
ws expecting something from u as u didnt write for a long time...
This is sweet and adorable...how mayank cares so much for nupur and the way they apologized at last ws adoring...
Loved it completely...
hope u can overcome this situation and write more as u wr used to be...
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Posted: 14 years ago
This is adorable and sweet Sis loved how Mayu caring Nupur
thnx for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome OS API...
i loved it...
such a cute OS...
gosh i sooo love dis Mayank who loves his wifey n care for her a looottt...
n i love dis Nupur who love her hubby n cares for him as d same way...
his concern abt her health n her concern abt der financial situations is too adorable...😍
i loved it...
n d last part sooo jst...awesome,out of dis world...☺️☺️☺️
i love ur writing n m missing it a looottt API...
i wish meri dono APIs pehle ki tarha phir wapas a jaye...
n m eagerly waiting for another ""MAGIC FF"" to start again...
love u lodsss🤗🤗🤗
may ALLAH bless u n my Mehak API alwaysss...
Edited by 18anila1 - 14 years ago

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