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Sujata

@SujaLuvsMayur

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+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#641

very nice os.

beautiufl.

bt i love d last line.

it was so nice.

thanks for the pm.

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Gul

@DhanakZ

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#642

Happy Birthday Ayesha

Wao Kinzu that was superb and lovely Os

I really loved it

Thanks for Pm

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samira

@-Samira-

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#643

Such amazing OS
loved mayu expression wen nups told about her pragnent
wen he hasitate i was scared he might not be happy about being pragnant
it was pleasure 2 read this OS sis thnx for the pm

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Auroni

@Auroni.92

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#644

OMG im gonna cry..its sooo heart touching and sooo amazing...I loveeed this os as much i loved the real one...
Its sooo adorable...
loved this kinzu...specially the last line took my heart...they high five...how cute...
Happy Birthday Ayshu..

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Ria Arjun

@ria.arjun

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#645

Okay first of all, wishing Ayesha a very happy birthday, God bless you🤗

Now Kinzu, what do i say 😊 *sigh* this was so beautiful... you just leave me speechless and nostalgic... 😳

awwh i loved the way nupur told mayank.. it was so sweet... in fact i had never liked the way mayank was informed about her pregnancy in the show! it was all too dramebaaz types...

thank you for making the moment a special and an emotional one kinzu... loved the tensed mayank - reminded me of someone we know

and awwwh the last line where the kids share a hi-5... that was shhooo cute ❤️

many many mwahzzz to you kinzu... thank you soo much for writing this one... ❤️

Thank you for the PM kinzu... love ya loads *back to readin the OS again* 🤗

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bhargavi

@gopi06

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#646

cute one kinza
thanks for the pm

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Shafy_Kaira_MN

@Shafy_Kaira_MN

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#647

very very... nice...😊

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_ArTi4ever_

@_ArTi4ever_

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#648

astounding piece of writing kinza...this piece is somehow extremely benevolent...something dat instantly fills ur heart with certain warmth...i was always dead against the way the scene had come up in the show...the way mayank had come to knw about her pregnancy news,was way too ludicrous...dats why i had always longed 4 such a os to come up my way...😳

n when it comes to depicting emotions in a proper manner, u become the epitome of perfection in it..😊
marvellous os dear❤️🤗

ps- a very happy birthday to u ayeshu🤗God bless u.😊

Edited by palz_ArTi4ever - 14 years ago

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-Annu-

@-Annu-

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#649

HAPPY BIRTHDAY AYSHUUU...❤️🤗

Fantuuu...i LUV U... ❤️🤗
It was just PERFECT...😳😍
the way as we all wanted it to be...😳
the way nupsie told him...mayu's reaction...his concern ...the talk with the baby...n the last line...as if the baby r responding...awww...can smthing be more perfect n beautiful then this...😳😍
just luv u...GOD BLESS U JIGERRR...😳
Annu😳

Edited by Annu_Arti_Mayur - 14 years ago