NEW OS:A Night to Love, A night to Lose(pt4,pg-24)

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tamoha(tora)

@..tora.tangled.

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Shivangi.

@caffeineaddict

Trailblazer

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Posted: 14 years ago

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abhi thodi der mein edit karti hoon dabba!

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wow!!! awesome OS tora...! kitne perfectly you described each one's feelings...whether it be Alina...Jeh...Abhay...aur Piya...beautifully written...have no words to describe this OS... nice tora...Hats Off!!!

last waala Abhiya moment... I am waiting...ki kaash aisa kuch ho asli mein... mazaa aa jayega...nai? Aline ki line "Who will I betray" Abhay? or bhai?" was perfect!! aur phir...Piya ke emotions... Abhay ki smile... Jeh-Armaan convo... was a delight to read!!

continue soon and PM me!!

arey haan...main bhul hi gayi... dekho...silly me!!! yay!!! me first!!!! lol!!

pehle aane pur...and for a beautiful OS...!!!

Edited by CIDMaaneetNaksh - 14 years ago

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purple_shadoz

@purple_shadoz

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

awww...dt ws so beautiful tiora...lvd it cmpltly ...wtng 4 jeh's plan to reveal n abhiya wr so dreamlike...do cont soon...n plz pm me...

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Posted: 14 years ago

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really an awesome OS at ur first attempt.🤗
plz update soon!!

Edited by ANTARA-2244 - 14 years ago

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Rashmi

@Rashu1505

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

Tora i loved it khub bhalo os thanks for pm aaj kal abhay kafi naughty ho gaya hai lol

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Pratiksha

@Don_theEvil

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

hye tora thats fo beatuiful, continue soon, pm me ok

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--Signorina--

@--Signorina--

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

Really nice tora🤗

so back with a bang 😳

Edited by black_scorpio - 14 years ago

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sandeep

@SANDY_ROSE

Inactive

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Posted: 14 years ago

awesome

i loved it

mind blowing

great job well done

abhiya romance was great jey & woh vampire plan to kill abhay & great idea serial mein to us vampire ka maksad pata hi nahi cahlta ke vo kis liya aya hai cont.soon and thx 4 pm

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sonia

@-Sonia-

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

Wow Tora, love the start of your new OS...
I just enjoyed the room scene
oho ! Jeh n armaan r plotting against abhay!
I'm sure abhay inka BBB nikale ga. . Hehe
continue soon
thanks 4 d pm