A Maaneet scene came to my mind after hug scene!

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Geet's thoughts...
That night after we returned home, he had seen my tears...my restlessness to see him away from me. He had seen the fear I had in my eyes when I thought I had lost him once again into deep darkness. I still remember that morning when we both departed, and I found him laying injured, lifeless on the steps of the temple. Just as that, when Adi sir told me that Maan was missing, I too became lifeless, as though the wind was knocked out of me once again.
When Maan looked at me after we hugged, it was as though he can sense every feeling I was feeling in my being the moment my eyes met his. As a result, he had said, if I wanted to stay in his room that night I could have. He would sleep on the couch and I would get the bed. Sigh, I can see love filling his eyes as before, but it seems to me as though he cannot retrieve what he feels for me yet. Finally, I walked into his, "our" room with another blanket in my arms. He was on his desk still on his laptop working even yet.
I rolled my eyes which were still wet and some what red from all of the crying I had done when i was in search of my life, Maan.
Geet Thoughts over
Maan turned around as he felt her presence in his room. He had asked her to stay in his room for the night, but why did he say his room? She was his wife, lawfully, it was her room as well, as he looked a little frustrated at himself, he cleared his throat which also broke geet out of her thoughts. He nodded his head motioning her to come into the room, she walked by the couch and placed her blanket there.
Maan-Didn't you hear what I had said before, u get the bed and i shall stay on the couch.
Geet's eyes sparkled in front of him she was quiet, of course she would be, after all that happened.
Maan changed his tone into a more softer one, as he felt he sounded a little too harsh the first time.
Maan-Geet, take the bed I don't mind the couch...
Geet interrupts Maan-can't we stay on the same bed for the night?
Maan was speechless, and fell silent the moment he heard her voice. She looked soo innocent, beautiful, and yet so fragile. It seemed as though he going missing had shaken her a lot.
Maan breaks out of his thoughts-Kya?
Geet-Maan, you don't have to take the couch, you can sleep on the bed as well. It wouldn't hurt you nor me if you just slept on the same bed. Unless of course you are scared of me! (a glimpse of naughtiness in her eyes)
Maan-uh uh, why would i be scared...(he looked around quickly) ok fine, that can happen i guess.
Finally Geet walked to one side of the bed...and Maan the other side...both sat on the bed facing each other's backs...
Geet's thoughts...jhalli tu bhi na...what was the need to tell him to sleep on the bed, what if he takes you the wrong way.
I couldn't take the fact not being nearing him tonight...i was scared still...at least having him besides me would calm my heart and let me sleep in peace.
This was runnin through my mind after watching today's scene...thought to write it and share with you guys😆 ignore if you'd like.😊
Anyone want to continue to the next part?😈


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Infinitedreams thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Lovely scene Shivu, rest comment will update later...




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Posted: 13 years ago
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so u did write the scene like u said ...

wish thy show the scene what u wrote ... nice scene ...
i wish to see lot more though 😆
& after they both sleep on the bed ... i want them to come closer & hold each other's hands in sleep ...
1)geet hugging maan & sleeping & next day morning when maan wakes up first he will be surprised to see that he was actually hugging geet close to his heart while sleeping ...😳
agar hugging geet jyada ho gaya tho ... holding geet's hand bhi chalega ...
2)so maan will b surprised to see that he was actually holding geet's hands tighter & very close to his heart 😳
Edited by dewdropred - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sweet scene! Hope they show something on the same track tom...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey lovely scene -----wish the CVs would incorporate this into tonight's epi> Thanks a mill Buddy !
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Posted: 13 years ago
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UFF! Behna ye kya tha! :O 😳 LOVED IT! I can totally see this happening .. if they show something remotely like this in the show it'd be ah-mazing .. totally loved it .. the way Geet remembers him in his distraught state at the temple .. good touch
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thank you behna...this scene just came to me the moment i saw the episode...and i had to write one...i wanted him telling her to come to their room the beginning of maaneet's passionate moments...
u know imagine Maan telling geet to come to their room now...u know as he knows she is his wife her place is in that room as well...
this maan has no idea about geet's behaviors...imagine at night...oh damn i just thought of another scene that can go well with this one.
Imagine when the both finally fall asleep on the same bed...Geet starts to talk in her sleep where she is sayin she where r u maan...where is my maan...and starts to cry a little in her dream...cause after this incident she dreams of the incident where she is lookin for him...and finds him injured at the mandir.
This makes maan hold geet in his arms where she finds warmth and peace...and she calms down...and stops mumbling...and then he falls asleep holding Geet in his arms...
haye haye hayeee
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice post dear ,hope your prediction comes true.😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Heya !!!
Awesome post...!!! Just loved ur continuation... I wish they cud show something like this...!!! It was sooo much needed at this moment... Maaneet in the same room !!! Loved the way U portrayed Geet's feeling...!!!
U gonna continue...???
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Posted: 13 years ago
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frankly speaking i also thought the same after seeing yesterday's episode ...hope k sach ho...

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