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Posted: 13 years ago
#91
really?? pari n louis r coupl??????😲
huh.. i can really imagn d scene a guy having bargning cls frm a gal.. we gals r really smrt nah!!!!!😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey Mimi...I read ur FF and it is very interesting...I don't want to miss its update so please pm me...I have send a buddy request.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved ur FF.
Pls add me to ur PM list
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Waah!!that was jst awesomely awesome sweetheart!can't wait for the next part now!looking forward to the romance bet maaneet.u better make it passionate enough lyk jannat.i luved the last part of that ff soo much.pls,cont soon.waiting eagerly!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hei friends Sreya(princess_mimi) is having fever n she has to do some school project in this condition... she will not be able to post her ffs in this week ... pls dont mind... she will definitely post after she get well 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey friends sorry for the late update... I was ill n had to do my project for school... here is d next update... really long n with lots of snaps... hope U will like it... n dont forget to hit the LIKE button n comment😉

Special Note: I was listening to this song when the idea of ds story came in my mind...😊

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PART 6 : Tera hone laga hoon


I woke up early next morning. Doesn't matter how early I woke up I'm always late in my mom's eyes. She already called me 3 times to say I'm going to be late. She was super exited to visit Tajmahal. She kept blabbering yesterday how love bloomed between dad and her in Tajmahal. They were blushing. It was a funny scene.😆

It was the fourth time she called me to say I'm late and they are going to Geet's house. They are waiting to start journey. They left. Don't know why mom thinks I'm always late while she was going before time. They said they are gonna start journey at 7 am it means they are gonna start their journey at 9 o clock. Its universal truth u will b at least 2 hours late of the aimed time.😛 But it's only 7.30. We have got enough time. I'm sure Louis is still sleeping. For him waking up before 10 am is equal to sun rises in the west. I actually dragged him from his bed.😳

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Well we went to Geet's house at 9 o clock.. and I was right they were not ready then. They rented a bus. Hmm. A bus for their big family. At least 20 uncles and 15 aunties and 25 kids were going with us. Imagine this family is not family. It was a whole army.😕

Geet was standing in front of her house. She was wearing a white salwaar and looking beautiful..


I couldn't blink my eyes. But I had to look away cause mom was looking at us weirdly. Me and Geet entered Bus at 9. 30.

Louis and Pari were sitting together at the last seat lost in their own world.

"Maan" Geet looked at me and shifted her gaze towards Louis n Pari. "Lets pull their legs." She smirked at me..😉

Wow! Her voice is my favorite sound😊.. n I love to pull other's leg.. Specially if the guy is Louis..

"Pari" Geet shouted which cause to break their romantic moment.. "Pari u hv to sit with me.. or what wud I do??? I dnt wanna get bore it's a long way please!!!"

Then it was my turn..

"Louis..." He looked at me.. "u have to sit with me too... I have got very important things to say'"😆

Their face had became like a coconut... a saddy face😔...awww... After a few minutes we started our journey.

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We spare those lovebirds. They were sitting together at the last seat. Geet and I were sitting at the other side of the same seat.

"Maan"

"Hmm"

"They are made for each other no?"

"Hmm" I smiled at her. It was time to be romantic. But disaster happened.

A kid started to cry loudly. Then he announced his parents " I don't wanna sit with you. I am going to sit with Geet didi."

The kid came to us... "Geet didi I wanna sit with you." He said innocently.

Geet came beside me and gave the child the window seat.

"No." The kid protested. "no I wanna sit between you two." The kid crossed his hands over his chest.

😲

I looked at her helplessly and she was doing the same. Finally she sighed and said "He is just a kid." And the kid sat between us.

After a few minutes another kid started to shout " I don't wanna sit with you. I'm going to the last seat."

"Please don't say you have to sit with Pari di.. please don't say it'" I looked at Pari. She was crossing her fingers and blabbering those words.

"Geet di I also wanna sit between you two."🤔

"Yes!!!" I heard Pari's happy yelling.

Next 15 mints every kids came to sit between me and Geet. I couldn't do anything but making sad face. After all they are just kids. Well not just kids they are enemy of romance. Soon after I found myself sitting next to Pari and Louis and Geet at the other corner of the seat. I looked at Geet.. she was blabbering with the kids but after a few sec she looked at me and smiled helplessly. I did the same.

I know Louis was smirking at me. I turned my gaze at him and I was right. He is such an evil guy. I looked at him angrily as if I'm going to burn him. His evil smile grew wider he wrapped Pari's shoulder tightly and lipped all the best to me.

An hour past.. I was getting bore. Geet was busy with the enemies of romance the kids and Louis was busy with Pari. I had nothing to do. Suddenly a song started to play, and I started to think exactly how and when I started to like Geet.❤️


[har d song while reading

https://sound18.mp3pk.com/indian/ajabpremkighazabkahanii/ajabpremkighazabkahani04(www.songs.pk).mp3]

[Shining in the shad in sun like a pearl upon the ocean

Come and feel me

Girl feel me]

I couldn't remember when I first met her in childhood. I just remembered a beautiful little girl who always offered me chocolate and used to follow me blindly. I used to think it's my duty to protect the kid from everything as she is just a kid.

[Thinking about the love we making

And the life we sharing

Come and feel me

Girl feel]

Then one day we planned we will marry and will be together forever. Our parents took it seriously and after so many years mom dragged me here to meet her and marry her. I was angry but secretly thanking mom to bring me here. I smiled at myself.

[Shining in the shading sun like a pearl upon the ocean

Come and feel me

Com'mon heal me]

I looked at her. She was playing with the kids. After a few sec she stole glances at me. her almond eyes are so beautiful. I was totally lost in them. I couldn't think anything except her beautiful eyes.. I cudn't see anything except her angelic face.

[Oh jo tu bhi mera mera

Tera Jo ikrarr hua

Toh kyun na mein bhi

Keh dun keh dun

Hua mujhe bhi pyaar hua]

She gave me a big smile. Her smile was taking me to another world. There were only we two. Together we were alone. I haven't felt anything like this for any one. But the first day I saw her at her house not looking at me I felt something for her. A very different kind of feeling.

[Tera hone laga hoon

Khone Laga hoon

Jab se mila hoon

Tera hone laga hoon

Khone Laga hoon

Jab se mila hoon]

I just kept thinking all this and couldn't stop own self stealing glances from her. The bus reached the destination. Others went out of the bus. Me and Geet was still in the bus. Smiling at each other.

[Aankhon Se Chhu Lu Ke Baahein Tarasati HaiDil Ne Pukaara Hai Haan Abb Toh Chale AaoAao Ke Shabnam Ki Bunge Barasati HaiMausam Ishaara Hai Haan Abb Toh Chale Aao]

We were lost into each other's eyes. I couldn't take my eyes from her. After a few sec she waved hands in front of my eyes which gain my senses. She raised her eyebrows to ask what happened? I shook my head to say nothing. She smiled at me next moment she praised her soft lips against mine and gave a small peck. She smiled shyly and started to walk towards the door. I placed my hand on my lips. I still feel her soft touch on my lip. After a few steps walking towards the door she stopped and turned back at me.

[Baahon Mein Daale Baahein Baahein, Baahon Ka Jaise Haar HuwaHaan Maine Maana Maana Huwa Mujhe Bhi Pyaar Huwa]

She came to me and hold my hands tightly and started to walk towards the door. This time I pulled her in my embrace and broke into a long kiss.

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I don't know when I slept in the bus. Louis waked me up when we reached. The bus was empty. Oh s**t it was only a dream.🥺

"Hey Loui..." I turned at Geet but she was not there neither the kids. "Where is Geet?"

"She tried to wake you up.. she tickled you' she poked you but you were not waking up.. so she loose hope and went down..."

Louis started to walk towards the door... Geet was trying to wake me up and I didn't.. I am really a stupid.. Geet must be upset..🤔

"All are waiting for us Maan." Louis turned back at me.. "You are coming or not?"


I was feeling tipsy Louis spoke.. "Geet is waiting Maan."

"Coming..." I almost jumped.. Louis smiled at me.😊

Tajmahal!!!! It's not a dream world.. it's a dream.. I was wondering aimlessly there.. I saw her standing alone... I went to her..

"Hey.. so you enjoyed with the kids?"

She smiled sweetly.. " hey so u slept well?"😆

"Hmm..." I bit my lips.. "n u had fun with those kids?"

"Hmm.. I had."😊

"So what were you talking about.. huh?"

"The story of Tajmahal... the love story of Mumtaz and Sahajahan. Why it is symbol of love. "❤️

"Love story?" I paused.. "I wasn't student of history but as far I know.. Sahjahan was the man who killed his brothers and all the kids who were having his brothers' blood in them'Mumtaz wasn't his first love or first wife, she dies in very young age cause she wasn't strong enough to deliver child.. Sahajahan marry her sister after her death.. he killed the designer of Tajmahal and cut the fingers of the other artists who was involved. Now tell me is it really symbol of love?"

I looked in her eyes.

"Hmm.. u knw enough history.. I'm impressed.." we both smiled. "No.. if we see history Tajmahal isn't symbol of love' Tajmahal is symbol of love cause we love to see it in that way. Its not the true history of Tajmaham which makes it the emblem of love but it is the feeling of thousand of viewers which has made it the symbol of love. You know u can make the world beautiful if u want to see it beautiful"

"hmm" we kept silent for a few minutes. I was totally lost in her words. With her I really feel like heaven she is amazing. Oh how much I wanted to hug her and kiss her on her face but I can't. Finally I spoke "tell me one thing Geet.."

"What?"

"What if I didn't went to France... what if we stay together from childhood to now??? what if we stand on our decision to marry each other??? Huh??"

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Part 7: Another Love Story of Us



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Edited by princess_mimi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow sis u r awsm... what a mind blowing update... u r getting better n better👍🏼

U really rocked in ds update👏

"Its universal truth u will b at least 2 hours late of the aimed time"...haha soo true ... loved this comment ... very witty😆

" At least 20 uncles and 15 aunties and 25 kids were going with us. Imagine this family is not family. It was a whole army"... yah I can imagine... damm funny😃

"After all they are just kids. Well not just kids they are enemy of romance. Soon after I found myself sitting next to Pari and Louis and Geet at the other corner of the seat."... rofl🤣... bechara MAAN... pura romance ko bigar ke rakh diya unn baccho ne... hehe He was trying to pull Luies' leg but khud ka fofat ban gaya😆

"I just remembered a beautiful little girl who always offered me chocolate and used to follow me blindly. I used to think it's my duty to protect the kid from everything as she is just a kid."... awww thats sooo cute... love MAANEET's childhood memories❤️

"Oh s**t it was only a dream."... ohh holy crap... it was a dream...but what a dream... sooo romantic... dont worry MAAN ... jald hi ye sach ho jayega(sreya sach bana dena haan ... asap haan)😉

"Tajmahal is symbol of love cause we love to see it in that way"... soo true dear ... very nice explanation❤️ ... well I loved the history u put ...

Hmm soo MAAN is going for "what if" haan?? 😆

waiting for the next part😍
Edited by sayaneegupta - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#98
awesome...excellent update ...
eagerly waiting to know the next part...
please update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#99
hiii
awesome update
loved it
loved maaneet
poor maan
annoying children
cant wait 4 more
con soon
thanks 4 da pm

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Posted: 13 years ago


Hey Mimi...very beautiful update...

kiss was a dream...why Babaji why...why can't it be real...next time make it real ok or else...😡...😉

so now slowly Maan is falling for her...

I saw last post...u were not well...hope u are all right now...

thanx for pm...please update next soon.

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