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Hey galz i'm back... finally exams r over n i can update.. here is the part 7 of Unknown. hope you like it... plz hit the like n do comment.

Plz read this part with this song. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=neMj84LpIb8

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Part 7: Another Love Story of Us


"tell me one thing Geet.."

"What?"

What if I didn't go to France... what if we stay together from childhood to now??? What if we stand on our decision to marry each other??? Huh??"

Geet lowered her eyes. A smile adorned her lips. She started to speak " May be it would have happen like this

Dhaage tod laao chandani se noor ke

Ghoonghat hi banalo roshini se noor ke

"Maan and Geet would have been best friend forever. Maan would be always there to save Geet and Geet would be always ready to help Maan."

Sharma gai to aagosh mein lo

ho Saaaso se uljhi rahi meri saasein

"Hmm" She continued "It would have Maan's duty to carry Geet's bags and other stuffs." She laughed. I couldn't stop smiling hearing her. She was making a new story of us.

Bol Na Halke Halke

hooth se halke halke

bol na halke

Then I started "slowly Geet would grow up into a beautiful girl and Maan would grow up into a strong handsome man."

We carried on our story while roaming around the Taj Mahal. She was right it was not the history of Taj but the eyes of lovers which made Taj the symbol of love.

It was becoming a weird story but I loved our imaginary life. It was like we were exchanging our dream and creating another world, living another life.

Aa neend ka sauda karein

Ek khwaab de ek khwaab le

"Geet used to kill every boy of the town with her killer eyes. For her lovers it was a celebration when she came out of the house. They used to die to see her. They died after seeing her, others who didn't see her dies cause they didn't catch her glimpse." I smiled looking at her direction. "She was queen of their dream." And she was my dream ' I uttered those last words in my mind only.

Ek khwaab to aankhon mein hai

Ek chand ke takiye tale

She turned her gaze at me "well it's not a story' it's real every lovers of mine wait day and night to catch a little glimpse of mine." She gave a naughty smile. "But the lovers stayed away from her for Maan. Her fianc. Best friend of childhood would have turned into her fianc.

Kitne dino se yeh asmaan bhi

soya nahi hai

Isko sula de...

" rather say Maan would be a stupid fianc of Geet who wanted to say those magical words from their childhood But our families were enough intelligent to understand this silence so they fixed our marriage."

Bol Na Halke Halke

hooth se halke halke

bol na halke

I thought for a moment. Huh she said I am a stupid. She really thinks I am a stupid. But I didn't react and started to say the next part of the story. "one fine day we tied our knots and promised to stay together forever." We didn't even notice when we switched from Maan and Geet's story to our story.

Umrein lagi kehte hue

do lafaj the ek baat thi

"I wanted to say those words from young age but whenever I went to say that word it stacked on my throat. Days past, months passed, years passed but I didn't say those magical words." I paused for a moment " but one day I said it.. the magical words.. on the wedding night.."

Woh ek din sau saal ka

Sau saal ki woh raat thi

Geet: I lost all of my hopes to hear those magical words from you. But the moment stayed for a long time' it stayed forever.. like it was the moment I was living for.. it was the only one thing I have expected in my life.

Kaise lage jo chupchap dono

Palpal mein puri sadiyan beetadein

She carried on her story " after that you didn't say those words again'"

Maan: I didn't need to cause the moment stayed forever.

Bol Na Halke Halke

hooth se halke halke

bol na halke



"Geet" I coughed'she looked at me with her beautiful hazel eyes' her eyes were full of expectation. "Geet I'." paused "I'.."

"Hey Maan'. Geet'" Someone was calling our names' we turned back to see my mom was coming towards me' well I don't know what's the reason behind me and mom's enmity. She spoilt the moment'. She came towards us and spoke "what are you doing here alone' lets go.. we're leaving.' we started to follow her like obedient kids' but I wanted to share what happened here with someone' the someone is not my mom' she had spoil my moment again and if I tell her she will spoil it again.

"Mom' where is Louise?" I asked.

" around here.. some where'"

"stay here.. I'm going to find him.."

Louis was taking picture'

"Louis'" I shouted so hard that his camera almost fell from his hand. He turned to me..

"Oh! It's you' I thought a whole army is screaming my name'"

"stop the nonsense.. you will be shocked to hear this.." I was so exited..

"what?"

"I don't like Geet." I was sweating in excitement.. "I'"

"Maan'." It was Geet and the whole gang came here to find us but I had to share it with some one so I decided to say it in French. The unknown language..so that she can't understand "je l'aime" [I love her].

Again Louis gave me the expression like I have given him news of previous month. And I hate that expression on his face..

In Bus:

This time luckily I sat with Geet.

"We don't have any plan for tomorrow.. do we?" She asked in a low tone.

"No we don't" I replied after thinking a moment. "So what should we do?"

"Let's go to club then. We will pick you up from your hotel at 6pm." She smiled. "Then done?"

"Done.." I smiled back.

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Part 8: Mujhe Kuch Kahena Hai

waiting for your comments😃


Edited by princess_mimi - 13 years ago
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HEY I AM FIRST
NICE
BEAUTIFUL
THANX FOR THE PM
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nice part... poor louis... he'll be gonna mad in this love story for sure... poor guy hv to drank so many shocks every nw & thn
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Man realized his feelings towards Geet...but his mom interrupted at right moment...he was going to make so boring confession...he is saved for another time to confess beautifully...

awesome update...

thanx for pm
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some times i wish Geet knew French and just did not disclose the fact...damn it will be hillarious...she knowing all the time what they are speaking including he loves her and she toying and teasing him...
LOL...my imagination

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