Akanksha,
Where are you now...I really like how you are adding concepts to your vms, nice touch!
I truly loved the colouring on this one. Your texturing and colouring have really improved so much. Those flecks of rising colour bringing out the vibrancy of the yellow in the taxi or Armaan's green and changing tones of blue shirt. Just mesmerizing. ⭐️⭐️⭐️
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I loved, JUST LOVED, the manner you cut that double image of Shilpa @0:03 adding detailed colouring to the one on the left, especially the eyes, at 'apne ankhon ki aage...' just wonderfully done and that mirror with Armaan's image, where his eyes move away WAS just an inspired aesthetic touch! ⭐️⭐️⭐️
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I loved the scene selection from 0:19 for 'when I need you most' especially @0:21, with that almost serene image of him sitting upon the lawn as well as that dreamed moment of Shilpa for 'why don't you take my hand.' The texturing and colouring throughout adding to that dreamlike effect, as Shilpa is the one who brings colour and movement, light into his life. ⭐️⭐️ The editing from 0:21 to 0:23 was sharp so that you catch his and her expressions, then that final close up on them, enhancing that
pull of Armaan's and Shilpa's look down, as the singer elongates that note. Finely done! 👏
I liked the change of that texturing so that it flows out, like rushing blood, for that salsa part. 👏
I loved, JUST LOVED that change of colouring from 0:31 to 0:32, for that scene, illuminating his endearment towards shilpa despite himself, that blindfold aiding as a metaphor in your piece.
Again, I like that moment @0:44, where the texturing adds to the aesthetic touch by adding movement but also hinting at the drama unseen. Nicely done!
I liked the editing for 'take my hand and walk with me' from 0:55 to 0:57, with that almost pause @0:58 upon shilpa coinciding with the singer's longer note! Precisely done! ⭐️⭐️⭐️
Akanksha, I really like how you created
your story from those clips, imaginatively done! However I was impressed the most by your use of colouring and texturing. Lovely! With love Sabah😳
Edited by a little faith - 14 years ago