FF#TUM KAISI MOHABBAT KARTE HO ch# 26, pg 69, 1/6 - Page 6

Originally posted by: annokhi

ASSALAMUALAEKUM! how r u all? i m back guys. marriage was superb and now i m little ill. for looonnng update u have to wait. because abhi dimagh kaam nahi kar raha. or mera typing hand ( my sis who type my ff on pc) is also injured. but don't worry i'll update soon as possible.

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hi guys! i'm annokhi sis. she start typing part 4. she update soon after 24 hours. sorry guys buhat wait karwana par raha hai and realy sorry for being rude.

i'm really very sorry guys i know my words hurting you guys really sorry for that.😭 i was saying all of this just bcoz i love my sis and realy cares for her.

CHAPTER 4 (FRIEND IS NEED )

Subah bohot udas thi kuch acha nahi lag raha tha is liye wo chat pe chali i.
Apne ghar k chat pe khara janay kis soch main doba tha k ek halke hawa k jhonke ne usey chonka diya kisi k anay ki khabar de kar, usnay mur k dekha tou wo b apni chat pe khari janay kya soch rahi thi.

''Ye asmaan, ye chand, ye taray gawah hain,

ay! Dost mujh ko neend na i tamam raat.''

Wo sochtay hue apne room ki taraf barh gaya.

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Purva talk with siddharth on cell.
Purva: pata nahi sid lekin mjhe shub k rawayya bohat dara raha hai. Isse tou acha tha k prem k liye heer ko mang letin dadi.
Sid: shub ko le k tumhen wehem hogaya hai, or rahi baat prem k liye heer tou now its late aj engagement date fix horahi hai. I believe that heer k naseeb ka tara bohat chamakdar hai phir chahe wo shub ho ya koi or.
Purva: yah! Acha aap wapas kab ayenge.
Sid: bohat jald tab tak tm apni maa k ghar raho (laugh).
Purva: very funny, puri family business trips or meeting k liye ati jati rehti hai tou main or gauri ?(Purva's jethani) akele rahen kiya? Wo apne mayke chali jati hain or main bhi.
Sid: o my sweet heart! Main tou aise hi keh raha tha. Acha meri sweet si sali sahiba (heer) ka khayal rakhiyega aj bohat nervous hogi wo.
Purva: ya ya is ghar main tou har koi apna rishta khud banata hai. (smile) but seriously heer ne meri behen ki kami ko perfectly pura kiya hai.
Sid: absolutly o.k c u soon bye.
Purva: bye.
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Agni villa:

"hahahaha..,hahaha" sanskirti still laughing.
Heer: tu chup kar ja warna bohat marungi.
Heer again: kiya masla hai yar tu chup kyun nahi hoti pagalon ki tarah hanse ja rahi hai.
Sansk: hehehe.., ohoho ho.., hahaha..,
Heer (angry): teher ja main tera gala daba deti hun waise tou teri batteesi andar jaegi nahi.
Heer sanskriti ki taraf barhi.
Sansk: hye nahi koi mjhe bachao.
Puray kamray main sanskriti agay agay or heer pichey pichey run kar rahi thin.
Sansk rukte hue: o.k o.k bas ab nahi hasungi (hahahaha).
Heer: tere tou (dushum dushum)
Sansk: plz help me. Aaa!!!

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all r busy in agni villa and prem nivas b/c of engagement date fixing.
Prem is distrub, purva is worried, shub looks angry and heer is quiet and sanskriti make fun of heer. Dadi's r busy for shagun and rasm.

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"i can't beleive that tum ne prem se aise baat ki" sansk said.
Heer: Han or ye sab teri wajah se hua.
Sansk: arey wah agar wo so cold larka yahan anay se k bajae apne mohalle ki larki bhagana zayada zaruri na samajhta tou tum sare sawal us se puchti na k prem se (hahaha)
Heer: shut up!
Sansk: hye "main tou prem ko face hi nahi kar sakti jab b saamna hoga kya karungi main" yehi kaha tha na pichle saal or kal.., my God kash main wahan hoti, maza ata tere kbc or prem k sach ka samna show dekh kar. (laugh)
Heer angry: tu mar main ja rahi hun.
Sansk: waise ye tera dost dikhta bilkul hero hai hero.
Heer: tumne kahan dekha?
Sansk: "subah jab tmhare ghar arahi thi tab".(in head) jab wo apni chat se tmhen tar raha tha.
Heer: oh! O.k i have 2 do my college project so lets do.

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in evening (prem niwas):

Everyone ready 2 go agni villa. Prem walks toward shubs room for wish him good luck. On other hand Shub is busy with a call.
Shub: mere kuch samajh nahi araha saray log date fix karne ja rahe hain.
Shub: so what han ek baat kaan khol k sun lo anil (shub's friend) main ye engagement hargiz nahi karne wala.
Prem's hand remain in space who want to jusT knock the door before listen shub's sentence. Prem is in shock.
Shub: what the hell all r thinking k main us down market heer se shadi karunga jo upper class ho kar bhi middle class behaiviour rakhti hai. Kabhi nahi.
Prem to shub in head: wo jaisi bhi hai achi hai. Upper class k naam pe besharam or cheap nahi hai.
Shub again: ek number ki duffer hai 9 9 meter k tanbo main chupi rehti hai.
Prem again in head: achi or paeydar cheeze hamesha dhaki hui hi milti hai. Or larkiyan sadgi or chupi hui hi achi lagti hain. Sharam ki chadar main chupi.
Prem ko heer ka dopatay k lye bechain hona yaad aya.
Shub: nahi anil ab or kuch nahi sunna chahta. Bas kisi tarah ye heer meri zindagi se bahar hojae.
Prem in head: samajh nahi araha ye chahta kiya hai?
Shub: han han.., pehle main hi heer se engage hona chahta tha lekin ab never.
Prem in head: khabti (psyco)
Shub: i love aastha. But problem is that she like heer and know about upcoming relation. Wo kabhi b heer ko hurt nahi karegi infact usay meri uske liye feelings pata chal gaen tou wo mjhe kabhi b accept nahi karegi.
Prem in head: what he loved aastha? Dimagh kharab hogaya hai kya? How could he do this wid heer?
Shub: arey yar yehi tou problem hai k agar main heer ko hurt kar k astha se rishta jorna chahun tou koi bhi mera sath nahi dega astha b nahi.
Prem in head: tumhare saath tou hona bhi yehi chahiye "selfish".
Shub: nahi astha ko nahi pata k main us say pyar karta hun.
Prem in head: bechari bay mout marjae gi is sadmay se.
Shub: i have a plane. Arey sun tou, maine soch liya hai k main ab heer ko mentely tourcher karunga.
Prem ki ankhon main khoon jaisi lali bhar gai.
Shub: ab main heer ko itna tesce karunga k wo khud ye rishta tor degi, sara malba heer k sar hoga.
Shub again: ab heer ki khushiyun ko gehen lagne wala hai. She is nothing for me ab se uske muskuranay ki har wajah ko khatam kardunga main tab tak jab tak main astha ko paa nahi leta.
Prem in head: gehen tou main tmhari planing ko lagaon ga. "she is every thing for me".
Prem shock k us k khayal main " " ye sentence kaise agaya.
Shub: ab mujhe astha ko panay se koi nahi rok sakta.
Prem his self: bas prem jo kuch hua wo sab bachpan tha. Heer is not responsible that's childhood yar. Now she need emotional protection. (talk to heer in head) tum meri couzin ho or friend thin. But now just for ur safty i have to make u friend again but only for saving from shub's evil plans.
Prem to shub in head: ab main banuga heer ki parchai, us ka aks, us ki awaz or us ka protective cover. Now u have to beware from my angerness.
Shub still busy when prem enter.
shub bohat ghabra gaya uske hath se cell phisal k gir gaya. Prem look very angry and just ghooring shub.
Shub: ttt.. Tututu..,tum yahan?
Prem: kyun nahi asakta? Waise tum itne pareshan kyun ho?
Shub apne face pe se pasina pouchnay laga.
Shub: nahi kuch nahi.
Prem very misteriously said: tumhe best of luck kehne aya tha. Zarurat jo paregi agay.
Shub: oh., th.., thanks.
Prem: i think u need rest. So i m leaving.
Prem leave from room. Shub take a long breath.
Prem not know why he doing this why he want to save heer or how he can doing what he want. E.t.c.

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Agni villa:

Heer's brothers r in heer's room.
Abhi: mujhe sahi sahi btao k kiya chahti ho?
Heer: bhaiya main ne kaha na k sab ki khushi main hi meri khusi hai.
Ahem: agar sab tujhe adhiwasi k sath biyah kar khush honge tou kya tu adhiwasi se shadi karegi?
Taj: shub adhiwasi hai?
All: u just shut up.
Taj: i dn't like shub plz bhaiya i need change.
Abhi: tumhara thopra change kardunga agar tum ne mun band na kiya tou.
Taj quiet.
Heer still quiet. All brother leave because of dadi's call. Sanskriti enter in room.
Sansk: uff! Tu us langoor se engage hone wali hai. I just hate him.
Heer: plz leave this topic.
Sansk: o.k yar. Happy or not?
Heer: i want to saticefy. Not happy or sad. I want saticfaction that in my life past, present and future is good for me. Jo hua, jo horaha hai or jo hoga sab main mujhe saticefaction chahiye just. Mujhe khushiyun ka laalach nahi hai mujhe sirf itminaan chahiye k meri zindagi main mere liye sab acha hai.
Sansk: thats y i luv u muahh.
Heer: stupid

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Engagement date fixed after a month. Some r happy, premeer mothers praying and purva is waiting for someone.

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Kunal and prem in passage. Kunal saw prem look quiet. Preet enter in passage.
Preet: bhaiya mithai khao.
Kunal: kis cheez ki?
Preet: arey tum tou murdon se shart laga k soye the hosh main hotay tou pata chalta na k Aj mere sarson k khet ko karele k khet se jorne k liye pehla qadam uthaya hai.
Kunal: wat? I dn't understand.
Preet: arey kal tm heer se mile they uski engagement date fixed hogai hai.
Kunal mainikhaiz andaz main: oh i c. Lekin kis se.
Preet: karele oh i mean shub se.
Kunal: sorry tou say wohi lamba khamba jis ka mun tera hai.
Preet: han han wohi.
Kunal: feel sad 4 him.
Preet: why?
Kunal: i predict k ek din wo bohat pitey ga. (kunal focus on prem expressions).
Preet: never know may be.
Prem: tum logon ko bakbak karni hai tou yahan se chale jao.
Kunal:

"dil shikan ho k chale aye teri mehfil se,
teri mehfil main tou har baat pe pabandi hai."

kunal leaves prem try to stop him but he dn't.
Prem: kunal listen, Kunal!... Shit man.

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after half hour:

Prem went to agni villa. Heer in lounge. Preet, kunal, taj, sanskriti, purva and kali are also in lounge. Prem enter and stop for a while and then start walk again towards heer. Heer heart beat fastly. She look very confusing and shocking. Prem face expression is serious. Pin drop silence in lounge.
Prem stop infront of heer. Heer eyes and lips start shivring. Prem in heart.

"Meri sanjeedgi mashhoor hai zamaane mein

Main khud zameen mera zarf aasmaan ka hai
K toot kar bhi mera hosla chataan ka hai

Bura na Maan mere hurf-o-lafz zehr sahi
Main kya karun k yehi zaaiqa zabaan ka hai

Meri sanjeedgi mashhoor hai zamaane mein
Meri khaamoshi bhi Pehlu mere bayaan ka hai

Har ek ghar pe musallat hai dil ki veeraani
Tamaam sheher pe saaya mere makaan ka hai

Bichhar k us se main bas es liye nahi bikhra
Wo keh gaya tha yehi waqt terey imtehaan ka hai".

Prem to heer: My all best wishes to u. Kal ko bhul jao main bhi bhul gaya.
Prem ne apna hath agay kiya. Heer thougth a while usnay apne sir se ek bojh utarta mehsus kiya and shake hand wid prem.
All: ooo.. Yuppy
Prem and heer blush. When both hand in eachother hand someone enter. Both r excited to saw him. All are happy to saw him.

Precap:
* shub's bad behaviour.
* heer prem friendship start.?
* misterious entry

Note: ab socho ye entry kis ki hai or ye premeer se kaise connect hai. U can't imaging.

That was an really really awesome, fantastic part!!!

Loved it…

Awww… purva and sid realtion is so sweet… and purva love heer so much… i really like purva character…

I also feel the same way purva does about shubh… his behavior is not that good….

"Prem is distrub, purva is worried, shub looks angry and heer is quiet and sanskriti make fun of heer. Dadi's r busy for shagun and rasm." All people have different emotion within them… hope we get to see some progress with prem and heer….

Sanskriti is such a cheerful girl… loved it when she said… maza ata tere kbc or prem k sach ka samna show dekh kar.

At least prem got to know about the real face of subh… hope he doesnot let the engagement happen..

WOW… prem's thought about heer… that was really emotive…

So subh loves someone else… I think he should tell this to his family… try to make things work… but not going to happen seeing hs behaviour ..

Prem in head: bechari bay mout marjae gi is sadmay se. hahaha.. that was hilarious..

I wanna kill this subh… ufff…that jerk thinking to torture heer so as to get astha…

Love u so much prem I wanna u to do something bad with subh and torture him so much…

The precap really fascinating….

Eagerly waiting for the next part…

Thanks for the pm…

Continue super duper soon!!!