Gopi and Ahem love ff!

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-JollyJabeen-

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Posted: 14 years ago

Hii guys, im a new member and im inspired to write an ff on gopi and ahem and also rashi and jigar, here goes, likes and comments please, i'll update regularly, please don't mind abou my spelling!

So the story contines after the maha episode,

Ahem: Gopi, how can you be so careless, you hurt your hand and no you can't do your test either.(ANGRY AND CONCERNED)

Gopi: Ahemjii, im sorry, forgive me please Ahemjii, i..i don't know what to say(SAD AND DEPRESSED)

Ahem: you know what i should never have taught you, your a gawar and will remain one forever(ANGRY)

Gopi was horrified and upset,she upset her Ahemjii and decided she was going to make him proud of her, jigar ecides to take gopi to school and consoles her,gopi's in the school now.

Gopi: Principle saab, my hand has been cut but i request you, can i say my time tables and poetry and all oral tests now and after 3 days, i will do my written tests.

Principle:This is a good idea gopi, let me test you now.

meanwhile in the office, ahem is feeling guilty and wondering if he said a bit too much to gopi, maybe i overreacted,when suddenly he had a FB and saw gopi's smile, he had to see gopi and reassure her so he left office and went to the school.Gopi had completed her oral and was very happy, it was hometime and she was playing with Sarika and her friends and was very happy when Ahem saw her so happy and childlike, a smile came accross his face and the little cute boy who likes gopi (sorry i don't know his name) with glasses notices ahem and nidges gopi.

Gopi says bye to the kids and runs happily to Ahem and says

Gopi- Ahemjii, you know i did an oral exam and my written exams in 3 days, i recited all my time tables and poems,everything you taught me thank you so much ahemjii.

Ahem was so happy he hugged gopi tightly and said well done gopi,im so proud and than...

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Edited by CHIKA784 - 14 years ago

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Filmyarchu

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Posted: 14 years ago

it's really nice about ahem and gopi making him proud update soon 😊

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Nazma

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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey a great start!!!!

I liked the way you had Gopi think for herself and decide what to do by talking to the principal. It makes her a bit more independent.

Also loved that Ahem regretted what he said and decided to go see Gopi without knowing that she'd taken some of her test - shows great maturity and heading in the right direction!!!

Also you had Ahem hugging Gopi!!!! and not just hugging but hugging tightly!

Well done!

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-JollyJabeen-

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: NazmaJ
Hey a great start!!!!
I liked the way you had Gopi think for herself and decide what to do by talking to the principal. It makes her a bit more independent.

Also loved that Ahem regretted what he said and decided to go see Gopi without knowing that she'd taken some of her test - shows great maturity and heading in the right direction!!!

Also you had Ahem hugging Gopi!!!! and not just hugging but hugging tightly!

Well done!

thank you very much, its my first try so all this encouragement actually helps :D x

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-JollyJabeen-

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Priyakna
it's really nice about ahem and gopi making him proud update soon 😊

thanks!!!!

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-JollyJabeen-

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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 2:

Ahem realised what he was doing and said to gopi,"Gopi,you've made me very happy today so im going to take you out today",gopi was over the moon and replied"but where ahemjii",ahem replied saying"gopijii, thats for me to know and you to find out (he said it in a cute, mocking tone) and gopi blushes,ahem thinks she looks so adorable.

they get in the car and past by small shops and it starts to rain,gopi and ahem get out of the car to go have some pani puri when suddenly it started to rain and gopi put her hands out and started spinning in the rain,she was smiling and looking up and ahem was staring at her beauty, her white and pink sari,her wet hair which was down(not like how she usually wears it) and ahem was just gobsmacked in her beauty and went to her, he smiled and she said, "ahemjii m soo happy today" and ahem said "gopi, here take this,eat this in the rain",ahem hands gopi a chocolate cadbury's bar and gopi is very confused,she asks "ahemjii what is this?, i remember rashiben used to eat these but i never knew what they are", ahemjii was shocked,apalled, how could gopi never have eaten chocolate?!Gopi opened the wrapper and a wide grin came over her face,"mmm ahemjii this is sooo goood, its so sweeet ahemjii!,here you have some", gopi held chocolate and ut it over ahem's face and he lovinglyy started to eat it,he turned around to check the time on the clock and looked back to see gopi's face covered with chocolate and her jumping in puddles,she looked so adorable.

ahem-"gopi, come on we need to go now or mum will get worried"

gopi-"jii ahemjii, lets go"

over at modi bhavan,rashi was walking towards her room to call her mother and tell her how much kagdii made her do work when she bumped into jigar and she fell only to have jigar catch her,jiger held onto rashi's waist and both of them had an eyelock for 2 mins where rashi looked at jigar with a uppy-dog face and jigar kissed rashi on the cheek and whispered "rashi you look so pretty today", rashi blushed and replied "jigarjii, your so sweet,im really lucky to have someone like you" just than there is a dor knock and rashi rushes to open the door.

she see's gopi and ahem together and is shocked, ahem comes in and tells rashi,tell mani to get me green tea now and rashi aggravated, rushes and tells mani, ahem and gopi go upstairs to change when gopi trips and ahem catches her but both of them fall on the bed,ahem on top of gopi and both can hear there heart beats thumping,ahem touches gopi's waist which is cold but with ahem's touch it goes warm,gopi closes her eye's and ahem is full of passion,he closes his eye's and goes down towards gopi's neckline and is just about to kiss her when suddenly they hear kokila screaming at rashi downstairs in the hall.

a quick, short update,sorry next time will def be longer!😆

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Edited by CHIKA784 - 14 years ago