NewFF(Maneet) Mere Humsafar Thrd3 Upd prt 39 pg143 - Page 72

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Posted: 13 years ago

Beautiful n cute part dear...
Maan to fida h geet p lekin uske gusse se ghabrata h...
D half asleep convo was amazing...luved it yaar!!
Shit yaar dev adi ne wrong timing mar di warna aj to maan keh hi deta...
Ye precap kya tha piya m really scared...pls mere ye cute se maaneet ko alag mat krna...
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update...
love the way geet was talking to him like that...
waiting for the next...
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Posted: 13 years ago
pretty awesome n lovely part

but y r u giving such scary precaps dear>>!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice very very very very nice

waiting for the updates
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsome update
relii relii cute luvd geets sleep convo
hope maan undastands is feelins soon
luvd da precap
plzz cont soon x
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Posted: 13 years ago
AMAZINGGG!
cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART 38
Khurana Mansion

Maan: Geet hum theek aadhe ghante k baad mil rahe hai

Geet: Kya? sirf aadha ghanta?

Maan: Kyun zyaada hai agar tum chaho toh'

Geet: Nahi bilkul nahi aadha ghanta chalega nahi toh janab time ko aur reduce kar denge

Maan: Geet tumne kuch kaha?

Geet: Nahi toh waise Sir aaj kya office mein wakai kaam bahut hai?

Maan: Geet aaj hum wo tender submit karne ja rahe hai waise bhi storeroom mein bannd hone se pehle humne kafi kaam kar liya tha ab bus thoda sa kaam baaki hai jaise hi wo pura ho jaata hai hum jaakar saare documents submit kar denge

Geet: Haan thik hai magar

Maan: Magar kya Geet?

Geet: ye sab aapki galti hai

Maan: Geet tum phir se shuru ho gayi

Geet: Haan saara kaam kal raat ko hi khatm ho jaata agar hum storeroom mein bannd na hothe tho

Maan: hum kamre mein tumhari wajah se bannd ho gaye the samjhi tum

Geet: Nahi galti aapki thi

Maan: Achha dubara kaho kiski galti thi

Saying so he starts moving ahead and Geet starts taking backward steps

Geet: Dekhiye aap mujhe apni inn badi badi aakhon se darane ki koshish mat kijiye inn sab ka asar mujh par kum honelaga hai

Maan holds Geet by her waist

Maan: Achha ye baat hai

Geet: Haan

Maan brings her more close

Maan: Geet ek baat batau jab main tumhare itne kareeb hotha hoon tumhe yun dekhtha hoon tab kya tumhe kuch bhi mehsoos nahi hotha

Geet gets lost in his eyes

Maan: bolona Geet kya wakai mein mera hona ya na hona tumhare liye koi maiyne nahi rakhtha?

Geet: (thinking) ye kya puch liya Maan Sir aapne is sawal ka jawab toh shayad mere paas bhi nahi hai

Maan: Bolona Geet jawab dho

Geet: Agar ye sawal main aapse puchu toh?

Maan: (thinking) Ye kya puch liya Geet tumhare liye mere dil mein kya jazbaat hai wo main khud nahi samaj paa raha toh main tumhe iska jawab kaise de saktha hoon

Geet: Boliye na agar kal main aapse kisi wajah se dur chali jau toh kya aap mujhe rokhne ki koshish karoge aur agar aisa na hua toh kya aapko mere jaane k baad meri yaad aayegi?

Maan holds Geet more firmly

Maan: Tum mujhse dur jaane ki baate kyun kar rahi ho aaj tumhe achanak se kya ho gaya?

Geet: Pata nahi magar ek darr lag raha hai aisa lag raha hai jaise kuch bura honewala hai aisa lag raha hai jaise k mujhse mera kuch chinnewala hai

Maan: Geet ye kaisi behki behki baate kar rahi ho aisa kuch nahi hoga maine kaha na main humesha tumhara saath dunga

Geet: Aur agar haalat aapko bhi mujhse dur le jaaye tab aap kya karenge?

Maan: Geet tum yuhi aisi waisi baate kar rahi ho aisa kuch nahi honewala aur main bhala kyun tumse dur jaanelaga main jaanta hoon tum mera vishwas kabhi nahi todogi

Geet: (thinking and constantly looking at Maan) pata nahi kyun aaj ji bahut ghabraraha hai

Maan: Geet tum kuch bolti kyun nahi aur aise kya dekh rahi ho?

Geet: Aapka chehra apni aakhon mein khaid kar rahi hoon kya pata dubara aapko dekhne ka mauka mile ya nahi

Maan was really worried now

The thought of Geet going away was killing him

He took Geet in his embrace as if promising himself that whatever the condition he won't let Geet go away from his life

This was true that he was not sure about his feelings towards Geet but this was also a fact that Geet had a very important place in his life and he couldn't imagine his life without Geet

Maan: Tum kahi bhi nahi jaayogi main tumhe kahi jaane nahi dunga

Geet: Magar Maan najaane kismat ko kya manzoor hai

Maan: Kismat ko humare saamne jhukna hoga Geet... meri Geet ko mujhse koi cheen nahi saktha koi nahi phir chahe wo kismat hi kyun na ho

Geet: Magar Maan

Maan: Magar wagar kuch nahi Geet main kismat ko humari zindagi k saath khilwad karne nahi dunga aur agar aisa ho bhi gaya toh bhi main kismat ka faisla badal dunga jab tak main hoon tumhe mujhse koi judaa nahi kar saktha kyunki'

Geet: Kyunki?

Maan: Kyunki meri zindagi tumhare bina adhuri hai Geet. Aadat ho gayi hai meri zindagi ko tumhari Geet

Geet: Maan aap

He breaks the hug and places his finger on her lips

Maan: Chup bilkul chup ab agar dubara mujhe chodkar jaane ki baat kina toh main tumhare khilaf court mein case kar dunga

Geet: Case?

Maan: haan bhool gayi tumne wo contract sign kiya tha dho saal tak tum naukri chodkar nahi jaa sakthi iska matlab hai tum chahkar bhi apne dhust danav se apna peecha nahi chudasakthi

Geet: (smiles) Aap bahut ache ho

Maan: Haan wo toh main hoon magar ab tumhare paas sirf 15 minute hai

Geet: (confused) Ji?

Maan: ji haan 15 minute mein agar tum taiyaar hokar nahi aayi toh main tumhe office uthakar le jaaunga phir mat kehna maine warn nahi kiya tha

Geet: Babaji

She runs away from there

Maan: ye Geet aaj aisi baate kyun kar rahi thi kya ho gaya tha usse khamkha mujhe bhi dara diya main kabhi bhi geet ko apne se dur jaane nahi dunga chahe kuch bhi ho jaaye

After some time both of them leave for office

Khurana Constructions

Maan and Geet complete their pending work

Maan tries his level best to keep Geet happy

He was trying to irritate her so that she starts fighting with him

Geet: Maan Sir aap ka toh khana hazam nahi hotha na jab tak aap mujhse jhagdha nahi kar lethe

Maan: Tum bhi na typical ilzaamo ki dukan ki secretary lag rahi ho

Geet: Ilzamo ki dukan?

Maan: Itne jaldi bhool gayi geet yaad hai ye naam bhi tumhi ne mujhe diya tha wo uss din jab tumne mujhe jhadu se maara tha

Geet: Ye toh haath dohkar mere peeche hi pad gaye hai jaayiye main aapse baat nahi karti

Saying so goes out of the room

Maan: Shukar hai kum se kum phir se normal toh ho gayi warna subah toh isne meri jaan hi le lithi

After some time

Maan: Chalo Geet documents submit karke aathe hai

Geet: ji chaliye

Mystery person: Sir aapke liye ek important message hai wo Rasika madam k project mein kuch gadbad ho gayi hai aapko issi waqt waha jaana hoga

Maan: Magar mujhe toh ye documents submit karna hai

Geet: Maan Sir aap site par chale jaayiye ye documents main submit kar aathi hoon

Maan: Nahi Geet tum akele kahi bhi nahi jaayogi

Geet: ofho Sir aap bhi ye kaunsi zid lekar bait gaye ho sirf documents hi submit karna hai na bus main yun gayi aur yun aayi haan agar aap mujhe trust nahi karte toh wo alag baat hai

Maan : Geet ye tum ache se jaanti ho k tumpar main puri tarah se bharosa karta hoon main bus tumhe kahi akele nahi jaane dunga

Geet: Maan aap jaisa soch rahe ho waisa kuch nahi hoga mujhpar koi musibat nahi aayegi aur agar aisa ho bhi gaya toh main aapko call karke bulalungi

Maan: magar Geet

Geet: pls Maan

Maan: Thik hai main tumhe drop kar dunga wo office, site k kafi kareeb hai main jaise hi site par pauch jaaunga toh gaadi wapas bhijwadunga tumhe fikr karne ki koi zarurat nahi hai

Geet: Achha ji ab chale

Maan: Hmm...

Both of them leave

Mystery person: Arjun Sir aapka kaam ho gaya hai Geet akele hi aa rahi hai

Arjun: Thank you main issi ka wait kar raha tha

Arjun disconnects the call

After some time

Maan : Geet tum apna khayal rakhna main bus abhi gadi wapas bhijwatha hoon

Geet: Aap tension mat lijiye main bilkul thik hoon aap bus site par jaakar situation ko samaliye

Maan: Geet kuch bhi problem ho toh

Geet: Maan ab aap jaate ho ya nahi

Maan: Thik hai jaldi milthe hai

Maan goes away

Geet: Chal ab jaldi se jaakar documents submit karte hai

Chalthe chalte ek aadmi Geet se takra jaata hai

All the documents and files fall down

Geet: Arjun tum?

PRECAP: Arjun: "Humari iss mulakat ka anjaam tho tumhe khud Maan samjhayega Geet...The countdown begins now"

So Guys what do u think what will Arjun do and will his plan b successful? Who is the traitor who is helping Arjun is he/ she someone whom I have already introduced in the ff or is it someone new? What do u think about the precap ?

Do let me know

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Love-Piya

PART 39: PAGE 143
Edited by piya- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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me again the first...yiepeee
dhinchak...dhinchak...dhinchak
awesome update
loved it
superb mindblowing...loved maaneet convo yar
see this maan is getting possessive for geet day by day
"loved that dialogue--tumhare bina meri zindagi adhuri hai geet"

awesome...
waise geet ka darr kuch to sach hai...gadbad to hogi hi
par maan hain sab thik kar lega
ab coming to this mystery man...kaun hai kaun hai
main samjhi nahin...😕😕😕
suppose its a girl...dn tell me ull be introducing sasha

devil arjun maaneet ke beech kuch to duriya layega hi...m sure of that
but overall loved the update
awesome


and ya m much much better now meri dear

Edited by minnie_tweetie - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
the first bit was pretty scary...i mean...they way geet was talking...i hope everything will go fine between them...because i really do not want them to be apart...after all they are like on good terms after such a long time n fights...haha...


this line is my all time favourite...:
"Kyunki meri zindagi tumhare bina adhuri hai Geet."
i just love this...even in the serial...when maan had said this...it felt so nice...

oh no Geet...why cant you listen to maan for once...i wonder what will happen now...you see if you had pay heed to maan he would have been with you and you wouldnt have had to deal with thaat idiot arjun-good for nothing...i cant remember how many times i have said that i hate him Piya...

continue soon and thanks for the pm Piya...i so cant wait to read more now...



Edited by zahra15 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice part...

now comes the the part where everything wil begin to fall apart...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...

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