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Posted: 13 years ago

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Hi guys i am first time trying to do some poetry on kriya😃

Ankho main neend na thi

Chain na karar tha

Tab hume kisi de pyaar na tha

Ek din nazar mili

Uda hosh hamara tha

Us bechani main ajeeb sa karar tha

Dil ne use bana liya apna

Par us dil ko yeh dil manjoor na tha

Shayad ek taraf se pyaar ek taraf se inkaar tha

Par chahat kab tak reha pati anjaan

Akhir use hume apnana hi tha

Kab tak reha pati gulshaan main patjhadh(autumn)

Bahar ko toh aana hi tha

hope you will like it

Plz comment if you like my creation

Tanu😃

Edited by kriya2011 - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: Veena5aary
Lovely..., keep it up

Thanks😃

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: riyya6
awwesome...😊

thanks😃

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Posted: 13 years ago

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wow yaara u r a poet too hmm multi talented girl great loved it⭐️

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: telstra
wow yaara u r a poet too hmm multi talented girl great loved it⭐️

thanks nazia for your apperciation😃

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