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Posted: 14 years ago
PART 14: Radev battle

Radhika and Dev decided not to talk with each other.

Through out the day in college Radhika didn't spoke with dev and as soon as she return house she started showing her anger on mrinalini.

Radhika:Tum meri didi hain yaan nahi

Mrininalini in her mind ," kya hua isse" : what happened radhu

Radhika: mujhe radhu nahi hain, i am radhika

Mrinalini: lagta hain madam ji aaj bahut khrodh mein hain

Radhika: yes

Mrinalini: lekin why???, i didn't see radhika with this anger

Radhika: Radhika is angry becoz u tried to fool me

Mrinalini with an innocent face : fooling ka matlab kya hain radhu

Radhika: ahahaha itna smart mat banao aur ye bolo ki aapka devar ji yaha hi that, lekin mujhse ye baat kyun chupaya

Mrinalini: main bhi mumbai gayi hain aur mujhe bhi aaj yaha aane ke baad hi pata chala

Radhika: are u saying truth

Dev: haan bhabhi is saying truth

Radhika: jeeji is se bolo ki main inse bat nahi karoongi

Dev: bhabhi aap ki behen se baat karne wala yaha koi nahi hain

Mrinalini was standing in between these both with a confused look

Mrinalini: lekin kya hua devar ji

Dev: i thought of giving a surprise to my friend but she didn't accept it and quarreled with me and even didn't look when i got hurted.

Radhika who was listening with a serious face immediately rushed to Dev and asked kaha.

Dev looked at Radhika seriously and said " bhabhi i doesn't need to show her"

Radhika was almost in tears and said " tell me where did u got hurted u stupid"

Dev who was shocked to listen a bad word from Radhika's mouth immediately showed his wound to her.

Radhika tored from her chunni and tied to his hand where there was a wound

"kaise laga"

Dev: bas when we both are quarreling it go hurted hitting to a tree

Mrnalini: radhika wo toh teri favorite dress hain

Radhika: di, shut up okay, nothing is more than my family and friends

Dev was wondered by her answer and shook his head off thinking " when u will say that u love me"

Radhika looking at Dev "Dev i wanna say that nothing is more than Dev , but i can't do that till when u say that u love me"

Mrinalini looked at both with amusement and said "Radhika, bandage karna katam hogaya hain, leave his hand"

Dev looked at Radhika who was in shock bendinng her head and laughed seeing all this.

Dev: bhabhi lagta hain aapki behen ki naaraj khatam ho gaya hain

Radhika: why can't u talk to me straightly u stupid , i will kill u.

Radhika started to run behind Dev and they both entered into the hall from kitchen.

Dev stopped seeing RP ji sitting there and Radhika who came back Dev not noticing Rpji said to Dev" pakad gaya tum"

Dev is trying to release his hand seing Rp

Radhika: today i won't leave u , u were over.

Dev whishpered " see there"

Radhika: don't play these filmy games with me

Dev: no see there

Radhika: u will go away

Dev: no see there u pagal

Radhika turned her head to look that side and saw RPji standing there seeing seriously

She sighed and walked towards RPJI , touching her ears with her hands saying "sorryyy"

Rpji looked at Radh seriously and liffted her hand , Radhika closed her eyes unable to bear his slap and Dev was standing there watching at whole scenario with a shocked , fearful face.

Rpji slowly lifted his hand and kept it on Radhika's head laughing and said " teri bachpan mein tujhe aisa dekha, itni saal ke baad aj tumhe aisi dikh rahi hun, i am very happy"

Radhika slowly opened her eyes with a relief and hugged him happily.
" i thought i was over in ur hands."

RPji: omg how u thought that, this old man will ever taunt his laadli

Radhika: thanku papa

Dev was standing there with his mouth left open as he never saw his father that free with himself or vivek

Radhika: ab toh apna mooh bandh karo , warna machar jayegi

Dev shut his mouth and Rpji and Radhika clapped their hands with each other laughing.

They all started teasing Dev and Mrinalni took dev's side and dev too started shutting their mouths.

After sometime "papaa maa aur daadi kaha hain"

Rp: They went to some function in malhotra's house

Radhika: Jiji tum kyun nahi gaya

Mrinalini: kyun

Radhika: becoz u not going means , an eighth wonder happening

Mrinalini: radhu ab mujhe keenchna mat

Mrinalni: waise maine suna ki aaj koi apni zindagi mein pehl baar stage mein dance kiya tha

Radhika felt butterflies in her tummy as she danced with dev.

Radhika: acha kaun

Mrinalini: radhika sharma ki naam ki ek ladki hain, jisne apni college mein, ek handsome hunk ke saath dance kiya tha

Radhika: handsome hunk, ye kaun hain

Mrinalini: wahi hain o teri paas khade hua hain

Radhika looked her side ways and peeking through the side of dev " mujhe yaha koi handsome nahi delkh raha hain"

Mrinalini: acha toh aapke paas jo khade hua na, vo college mein join karke 10 days hua hain aur 10 days mein 30 love letter aaya hain

RP ji frowned as he listened it and Dev signaled mrinu abt RP ji standing there and mrinu shut her mouth. Radhika was giggling seeing all this.

Radhika with an innocent face " pata hain didi , aaj jab humne programe complete karke aaya hain na, saari dressing room mein ladkiyan aagayi, is se autograph lene ke liye aur pata hain ek ladki ne iski haath mein kiss bhi khi hain"

Dev: shut up radhika

Radhika: kyn i am sayin truth, toh main kyun shut karoo haina paapa

Dev sawed at mrinalini looking for help.

Mrinalini: bahut jyaada ho gaya hain, ab vuse keenchna bas bhi karna radhu

Radhika: i will stop but on one condition he should say sorry for not tellng me the truth

Dev: okay ssorry!!!!!!!!!!

RpJi: Radhika tum jakar sojao, bahut tak gaya hoga, kal subah milenge. aur dev tum bhi autographs dekhe dekhe taka hoga

Radhika giggled seeing this and left sayingn goonight to rpji and hugging him and Dev too left with his down head.

Radhika left to her room and changed her dress into a casual and went into the balcony remembering her dance.

"aaj ke baad zindagi men kabhi kisi koh main surprise nahi doongi"

Radhika startled as she heared it and she turned around to see Dev standing there.

Radhika:"tum aur yaha, i locked the door but how u came here"

Dev:"mera room yahi hain"

Dev pointe to the room present beside radhika's and Radhika was shocked becoz, she never hae a chnace to see that room since she came there before 3 years as it is always closed, and she never dared to ask any one whose room is it. And as it was sharing common balcony with her's she always have an excietment to see that room.

Radhika: u got this room

Dev: meri bachpan se ye room mera hi tha

Radhika: ohhh

Dev: i never thought that u was really that serious when some one surprises u

Radhika now really hit him and said " stupid , i like surprises but this surprise gave a lot of pain to me, thats why i was not happy"

Dev" pain lekhi kyun

Radhika: why did u left with out telling me and also if ever u really went to america, omg i wonder if i could see u again, and u said not to talk to u or call u thats really a hell to me.

Dev: agar tumne mujhe call kiya toh tumhe ye pata jaayega ki main america jaane wale hun, but i wanna see the happiness and surprise u get in ur eyes when u see me. sorry radhika. but i didn't think that u was really sich serious abt my friendship with u, how did u live these 5 years jalli

Radhika looked at him with tears in her eyes and left into her room unable to say anything and closed the door of her room.

Dev was totally confused her reaction and thought " what happened to her, did i ask anything wrong"

Radhika in her room " kaise batavo kanha vusse ki main kaisa rehdiya ye 5saal vuske bina aur ye dus din maine kitna dukh sehdiya . Kanha agar main vusse ye bola ki main vunse pyar kar rahi hun then he will leave me forever, nahi nahi aur waise bhi main ek anath ladki hun aur mujhe ye sab log itne pyaar de raha hain. I am not fit for dev.

Dev in his room: kanha maine meri zindagi mein ab tk kuch bhi nahi chaha , aur pehli baar main tumhe ye maang raha ki meri radhika ko humesha kush rahe aur vusse meri zindagi mein dijiye. 5 saal maine ek stone ki tarah jiya tha vuske bina aur aaj vuski aankh mein aane wale ek ek aansoon se main ne apne andhar kitne rulaya ye toh aap hi jaante hain. vus ne dad ke saamen mera majak vutaya phir bhi maine kuch nahi kaha, kyun ki woh radhika hain, wuski haseena dekhte hi i forgot everything. Dad also like her a lot thanks kanha, ek baar mujhe radhika "iloveu"keh de i am rwady to fight with whole world for her.

Radhka in her room still: I am trying every thing t make dev hate me kanha. Wo mujhse door rehna hi behtar hain, warna main ap ne aapko vus ke liye i love u bolene ke liye nahi ruk paavungi. Agar ye kehne ke baad Dev mujhe chod gaya toh main nahi seh paavungi. Vo mujhe apne sabse achi dost maante hain, main vus dosti ko damki de nahi paavungi kanha. Aaj maine maaloom nahi kyun lekin De ka kitna majaak vudaya ki zindagi mein kabhi bhi kisi ka itna nahi udhaya hoga, lekin paapa ne ye kaha ki main apne bachpan mein bhi Dev ke saath aise hi karne wala tha, lekin mujhe kyun e bhi yaad nahi hain."

Both in their rooms said at a time "kanha main aao se ek hi prarthana karte ki mere pyaar ko zindahi ki saari kushiyan do aur please meri jo intezaar hain apne pyaar ko paane ke liye vo jaldi khatam karlo"

Kanha's staue had a wide smile loking at them both and a cool wind passed through tem as if god was blessing them.


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Posted: 14 years ago
Thnx for the lovely update.Waiting for the day when RaDev will confess their love for each other.
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Posted: 14 years ago
mindblowing hari loved the little nok jhok with radev and then the teasing all of them had it was awesome and the talk with kanha that was superb really loved it too gd update soon and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
HARI,I was thinking why is rads using the words'stupid' and above so much making fun of him and u know what ,the answer came in my mind that after seeing today's epi ,u are in very fun mood
but alas the answer was sthing else.ohhh no.this is like ,none is problem but they want each other to tell first in fear of loosing friendship.
well job hari,very well managing the situation and moving ahead.
i wonder who is going to reveal their love ,their friends or family members or someone else.but i will be happy if u show they themselves either due to situation or leaving fear.this is just my opinion.
and ya i loved last part,beautifully enacted ,i mean they in their rooms talking with kanha.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ekta-avinafan

HARI,I was thinking why is rads using the words'stupid' and above so much making fun of him and u know what ,the answer came in my mind that after seeing today's epi ,u are in very fun mood
but alas the answer was sthing else.ohhh no.this is like ,none is problem but they want each other to tell first in fear of loosing friendship.
well job hari,very well managing the situation and moving ahead.
i wonder who is going to reveal their love ,their friends or family members or someone else.but i will be happy if u show they themselves either due to situation or leaving fear.this is just my opinion.
and ya i loved last part,beautifully enacted ,i mean they in their rooms talking with kanha.

nothing i used the word stupid because,radhika wants dev to realise that she is loving him and in every situation she is trying her level best but he is not understanding thats why she said stupid
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Posted: 14 years ago
NICE UPDATE 😊 ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
really lovely hari wow thank you
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Posted: 14 years ago

very nice update👏eagerly waiting for the next update😃

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Posted: 14 years ago
Very nice update hari,keep it up!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: fatssrilanka

Thnx for the lovely update.Waiting for the day when RaDev will confess their love for each other.

thanks dear and for that day u are waiting hope it comes soon may be i too doesn't knwo😉

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