Arhi Romantic SS: 'Am i forgiven?' Part3 on Pg12 - Page 5

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Posted: 13 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: ayesha786xxx

Hey great start please continue and pm me when you update ... XX

Thank you 😳 Send me buddy request so i will add you in PM List.
I will update next part tomorrow 😊
Edited by Meenakshi_Dhane - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: aquablue17

i like it a lot! plz continue

Thank you 😳
I will update next part very soon😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: muskaan_cute19

Hey dear loved it do continue soon will be waiting eagerly😳

Thank you very much Embarrassed
I will update next part very soon 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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really nice do continue plz nd do pm plz
Edited by Lily2011 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45

Hello everyone, Thank you very much for appreciating my writing 😳 Considering your comments, i am updating the second part of the story. So here it goes.

"Khushi, ab toh tum gayi.." Arnav runs after her. Khushi is unable to run fast due to her saree. So Arnav catches up with her, holds her arm and pulls he towards him. She whirls and is now standing in front of him. She tries to get rid from his grip.
"Koshish bhi mat karna. Tum itni strong nahi ho." Arnav says as a matter of fact.
"Shayad main aap ke itni strong nahi hoon, lekin ye mat bhuliyega ki main aapki ki sabse badi kamzori hoon." Khushi says with pride 😊
Of course, that was the truth. He just can't deny it. He just smiles at her. He puts strand of hair which was coming on her face behind her ear and starts placing kisses on her neck. Khushi shivers with joy and happiness 😳 She wonders if this is the same Arnav who had once made her standing in rain and told to manage the parking. And now being totally romantic in rain. Yes, he has changed. He still wants everything to happen as per his wish. But now he cares for people around him, believes in beautiful feeling called love. As someone has rightly said "Har insaan ko zindagi me ek baar pyaar zaroor karna chahiye. Pyaar insaan ko bahot achha bana deta hai.😊 " (Dialogue from 'Pyaar to hona hi tha' movie starring Ajay devgn and Kajol 😉)
Khushi: "Arnav.."
Arnav: "Hmm.."
He is still busy accomplishing his task. 😉
Khushi: "Chaliye na, Hum dance karte hai."
Arnav says instantly, "Kya?"
"Haan, baarish me ek dusre ke bahon me khoke dance karne me kitna maja aayega.", Khushi says innocently.
"Khushi", Arnav shakes his head in disbelief.
"Chalo, bahot der ho rahi hai, room me jate hai.", Arnav says to avoid the topic.
"Rukiye na, kitna romantic lagega.", Khushi is beaming. 😳
Arnav: "Lekin mujhe dance karna nahi aata."
Khushi: "Koi baat nahi, hum aap ko sikhate hai."
Arnav now understands that she will not let go this topic.
Khushi holds Arnav's right hand and puts it around her waist, with her left hand on his shoulder and holds his other hand by hers tightly. They perform passionate dance forgetting the world around them, completely lost in each other. They don't notice that now its raining heavily, as if Devi Maiya is pouring her love on these lovebirds. 😳 Arnav feels that Khushi is shivering as it's really cold now. He tells that they must stop now or they'll be sick on the next day. Khushi agrees and both go to their room.
~ Next day morning ~

Khushi opens her eyes slightly and sees that Arnav is not beside her. Her eyes search for him and finds him doing work on his laptop. It's 5 am. She doubts if he had even slept for a while. she knew him very well. He will not rest till he makes sure that everything is perfect. Arnav finishes his work and shuts the laptop with satisfaction. He looks at Khushi, who is now pretending to be asleep and is shivering. He wonders why she was feeling cold. Even the AC temperature is not that low. And after they got drenched in rain yesterday, thay had changed into new cloths. He goes near her and asks "Khushi, kya tum theek ho? Tumhe thand lag rahi hai kya?" His voice is trembling. He checks her temperature by touching her forehead, but all is fine. There is no sign of fever.

He is now panicking. All thoghts running in his mind, "What has happened to her? Will she be ok? And what reason i am going to give for Khushi's sickness? If Di and Aakash finds out that we were dancing in the rain yesterday night, they'll burst into laughter and will make fun of.." He needs to focus on Khushi first, he tells himself. He asks with concern, "Khushi, main abhi doctor ko bulata hoon." and he picks up phone.
"Nahi.. ", Khushi says abruptly.
"Kyun?" Arnav looking puzzled.
"Woh doctor ko bulane ki kya zaroorat hai.. mera matlab hai ki.. woh meri thand kam karne ki liye aap..", Khushi gives him a teasing smile.
Arnav doesn't miss the hint of mischief in her eyes. 😛
He is relieved now and moves towards her. He cuddles against her to keep her warm and they are again lost in each other. 😉

Thats it. I hope you enjoyed it 😳

Edited by LoveArnavKhushi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
please plz continue as this is our only way of escape from asr anger and their fights. please continue, i can't wait to read more of it. btw you are a brilliant writer 👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47
AWw this is cute...plz continue soon :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48
aww, that was such a romantic part...loved it...please continue
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49
This was super cute!!! how have to continue
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Posted: 13 years ago
#50
NICE ! loved it !!! 😍 👏

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