Creative Critics Corner - 7th Sept 2011

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For the time being we will follow a format for the review, which will be as follows:

PoV of Overall Epi:

Points that we liked:

Points that we disliked:

Mention Bloopers:

Msgs for the lead Actors (Sincere Comments):

Msgs for the rest of the cast../team/makeup/costume department:

Suggestions for handling of tracks:

Other suggestions:

PoV of Overall Epi:

Again a good fast paced epi

Points that we liked:

The way Mohan gave expressions to Kastur when she was trying to stop him from opening the door 😆

Mohan-Saroj scene... lovely... I liked the understanding they do share even after 4 years of Mohan staying away from his mom ...

Loved how Mohan was trying to first establish his point politely to baapji ... And loved even more when he argues with baapji

"Aapki soch aaj bhi 1947 se pehle wali hai" 🤣

Points that we disliked:

None as such today really

Mention Bloopers:

None

Msgs for the lead Actors (Sincere Comments):

Rocking expressions by Harshad in the first scene and awesome dialogue delivery in his arguement with baapji

Aasiya didnt breathe too heavily today except when baa caught her .. so i was fine with her performance today ...dialogue delivery could have been a bit slow in her scene with her brothers ...liked her slight blushing at the end of that scene

Msgs for the rest of the cast../team/makeup/costume department:

HC looked dashing in the red kurta during the Ganesh Pooja 😍

Surpiya ji made me love her more with the delivery of that one dialogue today ...when she asked mohan why he needs money ... The way Supriya ji said it it made Saroj look so loving yet worried and confused at the same time ... She was looking gorgeous too

Suggestions for handling of tracks:

Now that they are reaching the highpoint gradually with the revealation of why Mohan came back to India, why is he asking for money and how would he end up marrying Kastur, I sincerely hope the CVs do justify properly every act of Mohan..Eventhough he is supposed to be grey-shaded and am sure Harshad would handle it perfectly, a grey-shade character does need a strong script that shows the character "grey" and doesnt end up making it negative! I expect CVs to give exposure to Mohan's thoughts, feelings and POV too in all the mess he'd be going through

Other suggestions:

Same as above

PoV of Overall Epi: Good episode with a move in story 8/10! 😃

Points that we liked: Mohan ofcourse 😍 MohUr scene, Mohan's raaz khulling 🤣, Kastur's defend on Mohan from now itself! 😆, Mohan's new avatar and his exercising in anger😍, Mohan looks in Kurta for the first time! 😳 Not to forget the scene between Mohan-Saroj and the argument between Mohan-Baapji!🥱

Points that we disliked: Argument! It was much of loudness from Baapji's side! Not properly showing why the loan was taken from Mohan and his friend!😕

Mention Bloopers: Nothing I guess for today!😆

Msgs for the lead Actors (Sincere Comments): Harshad rocked as usual with this dialogs and gestures! Aisya was good in the beginning scene as a scared girl! 😉😆

Msgs for the rest of the cast../team/makeup/costume department: Dont like Kastur's costume in today's episode and make up was dull!

Loved Mohan's wardrobe today! Saroj was good at her best to help her son! 😛

Suggestions for handling of tracks: I completely hate the track that's leading to Mohan-Kastur marriage because of the load clearance that might be happening from Kastur's dad! This will be completely bad track ever ! 🤢

Guess the marriage track is coming soon which should not be so fast! 😕

Other suggestions:

PoV of Overall Epi:

Really good episode. Enjoyable, moving with the flow now. I like the points shown in today episode

Points that we liked:

Old generation vs. new generation. This was the main thing I really liked in today's episode. We got to see both point of views and it help us to know the character very well. Also the bon between Saroj and Mohan was a treat to watch.

Points that we disliked:

I think the sound department needs to tone down. Really dramatic music is played even when it's not needed. Example when Kastur gets caught and gets hyper the music was OTT.

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Mention Bloopers:

None

Msgs for the lead Actors (Sincere Comments):

Today two actors stole the show. It was Baapji and Mohan. Excellent dialogues delivery. Gestures were bang on. Their expressions were right on the spot. Bravo to both of them.

Msgs for the rest of the cast../team/makeup/costume department:

Also Kastur needs new clothes. I think they PH are focusing on Mohan clothing; she needs a makeover in clothes term. I don't like what she wears I mean it's the same design, same type with just different colors

Suggestions for handling of tracks:

We should get Mohan spending more time with his family i.e. without Baapji interrupting. I want the rest of the family to ask Mohan about his life in London. About his friends etc.

Make Mohan have special place or Kastur in his heart rather than a business deal. Also both of them to share their opinions on certain thing

Other suggestions:

Same as above

PoV of Overall Epi:

dhamaakedaar...yupp thats the only word that comes to my mind...for once we had an epi which actually focussed on wat the show is all abt...mohan's past being revealed slowly...and the fact that mohan and baapji have a difference of opinion due to their generation gap...

Points that we liked:

Points that we disliked:

Mention Bloopers:

Msgs for the lead Actors (Sincere Comments):

harshad...

Suggestions for handling of tracks:

Other suggestions:

thank god...u've made baapji and baa much more tolerable...

baa's references to salman r fine...but no more dabbang antics plzzz

baapji not agreeing to wat mohan thinks is oki...but don't overdo it

and plzzz don't make saroj go overboard with her disliking for kastur...we know she loves mohan a lot...