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Posted: 13 years ago

Hey Guys!!

Its Been Ages Since I Have Updated This...


Just That My Laptop Went Bust..
Had To Re-Boot It..
But I Don't Have Word...
Usually Write My Updates on There Before Posting!!
Anyway Here Is The Next Part ...

Chapter Twenty One


Geet had had enough.. she hated the smell of this hosptial and it was even worse when she found out that she had to stay for two more days how was she going to survive for two more days... she had enough already..she knew her brothers would want her to recover... thinking of her brothers geet had not seen them.. she started to miss them... she called Maan who had fallen
asleep on the chair beside the bed... she slowly got up pain shooting through her shoulder... she winced as she tried to move her arm... she called his name softly...

Geet - Maan.. she said softly...

Maan was still sleeping... Geet moved closer to him trying to ignore the pain ...
Geet - Maan she said again softly ..

Maan still did not react ...

Geet Smiled At him... seeing him sleep soo peaceflly was the best feeling ever... although she was missing her brothers, she still felt safe around maan...

she bushed thinking about his confession in the morning...
how she never expected to have him confess.. she never knew all along while she craved secretly for her laddo he was there
infront of her ...

she was about to poke him and as she moved her arm she yelped in pain ... maan woke up ...
Maan seeing geet in pain he got up and asked her if she was alright..

Maan - Geet tum teek ho na? he asked worriedly.

Geet Held her arm and slowly lay down... she looked at maan who was really worried for her...

Get - Maan main teek hoon... bas thora dard ho raha hai? she said meekly...

Maan - kya .. main abhi doctor ko bulatha hoon .. he said ...he got up and was about to rush out when he heard his name...

Geet - maan.. she said ever so softly..

Maan turned around to see geet sitting on the bed waiting for him to come and sit next to her..

Geet - Maan aap yaha aayina.. mujhe aap se baat karni hai .. she said with abit of saddness in her voice ... maan huuried up to her and asked her wat was wrong...

Maan - kya hua geet... tum itne udaas kyun ho...

Geet - Maan vo veerji abhi tak nahi aayi... naraaz hai mujhse?? she said sadly as tears threatening to spill...

Maan - Geet Tum yeh kya keh rahi ho?? Radhe aur tumhara veerji's naraaz kyun hoga?? hmm.. he asked ...

Geet - vo abhi tak aaye nahi muje milne ke liye...

Maan - geet they will come.. dont worry..

just then the door opened and in walked the three people Geet was waiting for... seeing them she had a big grin on her face... she smiled at them ... almost immediately Radhe hugged Geet and Geet Cried...

Geet - veerji ... She tried to talk in between sobbing...

radhe - mujhe bohat dar tha ... agar tumhe kuch ho gaya hai ...

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Geet was still sobbing in her brother's arms... after a while she stopped crying and told her brothers everything that had happened...

Radhe, Rahul and Sameer were shocked.. Maan Was Mortified... To Think she went through all that all on her own... now he was even more scared and worried... not for himself but for her ...

after a couple of day geet was feeling alot better than before ... she really wanted to be discharged.. fighting with maan and radhe she yelled at them...

Geet - Bhai aap dono mujhe yaha ka prisoner samja hai kya?? she said angrily...

Radhe - Arre Geet .. Humme Bas Tumhari Fikar hai bas... Lekin Agar tum yeh chahthi ho ki tum ghar joagi phir yeh nahi ho sakta... abhi tum poori tara si teek nahi ho.. he said softly...

Geet refused to listen to her brother's words of concern...

Geet - Maan aap Veerji Ko Kahiya na.. mujhe yaha nahii rehna... she said pouting a little...

Maan immediately fell prey into her pleading face...

Maan ST - God!! she looks beautiful ... Kitne Khoobsurat Lagti hai... Yeh Yaha rehagi tho phir mujhe teek laga ga... meri liye isse milna bohat easy hoga.. aur agar ghar gayi tho... par agar maine Radhe Ka Saath Diya Tho Phir Yeh Mujse baat nahi karigi... Ab kya karo... he said thinking...

Geet was wondering what was going on in his mind.. he seemed to be in deep thoughts.. she had wanted him to immediately take her side but if he did then this would cause eyebrows be raised at them both.. maan being Radhe's Best Friend he wouldn't not take his side... but he was her best friend too... right...

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Maan was just thinking of who's side he was supposed to take...

Geet - MAAN!! she yelled which brought him back to reality

Maan - Vo Geet Radhe Teek Keh Raha Hai, Lekin Radhe Geet to bhi teek Keh Rahi Hai... he said hoping he won't be getting Yelled At by Geet and Radhe.

Geet & Radhe - KYA!! they yelled confused...

Rahul, Vicky And Sameer Were Just Stood there Watching the scene..

Vicky interupted.

Vicky - Dekh Geet tum Veerji Ke nazar Se dekho tumne itne bari tufaan se guzaari ho... aur tumhe aise ghar jana teek nahi hai...

sameer - haan geet tum abhi poopri tara si teek bhi nahi hui...

Geet - bhai aap yahan aayina.. Bhaiya aap bhi... Both Rahul And sameer came and sat next to her...

Geet - Bhai Main Vada karti hoon agar aap aur veerji mujhe ghar leh jaayenga na phir main apni bed se bilkul nahi uttigi...

Radhe - Lekin Geet ...

Geet - Veerji Please Mujhe Aap Ke Bina Yaha Daar Lagtha Hai... Please...

Radhe - Teek hai.. he gave up... seeing her fears in her eyes he finally let her get her way...

After a couple of days Geet Was getting Discharged...

she was still in the hospital room while Rahul Completed the Discharge Papers...

Radhe - Geet Hum Aab Aap ke saath Aur Rahul aur Sameer, Pinky Aur Meera Ke Saath Bodyguards Rakenga,... hmm.. Aur Hum Tumhe Maan Ke saath Rakenga... Aab College Main Maan Tumhareh Saath Rahega...

Geet was stunned..

Geet - Lekin Bhai Maan Ka Kaam>> vo Kaun Sambala ga...

Maan - Tum Fikar Mat Karo.. Tumhe sirf dlo haftaa ki liya college jana hai... uski baad tum mera saath kaam par chalogi... hmmm ...

Geet smiled...

Precap -

Tere Hone Laga Hoon...

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Sorry Guys.. I Know I've Not Updated In a While...

Just That My LAPTOP died.. and i normally type my updates on Word but i haven't got that anymore since i re-booted laptop...


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Edited by Nazmaa - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Hi! awesome update👏. I have read all the chapters in one go. 😳

So can't wait further. plz update soon.😃

PLZ-100 add me to your PM list.😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
Awwwh so shweet! i loved the ladoo relationship LOL.. i could imagine Maan being a chubby cute kid😳😆


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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update

loved it

continue soon
with bigger parts

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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks for the update after a long time 😊
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nice update
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Awesome update
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