Fiza'a OS gallery thread 1 - Page 60

wht is this fiza...😲

lovely os!!

beautifully written..mixture of romance,intensity,intimacy n passion...everything in a single piece of writing..yess ! ecstasy is indeed the right word to define it..😳heavenly os...cant wait 4 more like this...

Simply superb fiza

Blend of romance and intimacy

Fizu u wrote this 😲...dekha Fari ne woh jumla prove kar diya...woh kehte hai na Sanggat e Sohbat, Sohbat e Asar...Fari ke sangat ne kya asar dekhaya hai 🤣...bacchi ko bilkul bigaar kar rakh diya🤣🤣...!

one HELL romantic OS...ab aage kuch kaha nahi jayega im sooo☺️😳...!

@ Fari iss type ki Eidi mangti ho, bigri bacchi😳...waise tumahri to nikal padhi wah wah Eidi pe OS's ke barish lucky u 😊...!

Originally posted by: valliyah

Fizu u wrote this 😲...dekha Fari ne woh jumla prove kar diya...woh kehte hai na Sanggat e Sohbat, Sohbat e Asar...Fari ke sangat ne kya asar dekhaya hai 🤣...bacchi ko bilkul bigaar kar rakh diya🤣🤣...!

one HELL romantic OS...ab aage kuch kaha nahi jayega im sooo☺️😳...!

@ Fari iss type ki Eidi mangti ho, bigri bacchi😳...waise tumahri to nikal padhi wah wah Eidi pe OS's ke barish lucky u 😊...!

valley- ab mujhe rona arah hai
kash main ek jaga 2/3 Eidi pejle mang liya hota...
ab dekho dhire dhire sabse Eidi mil gayi tou baki samay kya karege?- btw suja se abhi bhie lena baki hai...

Wow Fiza its too romantic...

Fiza dnt hav the right word to explain the beauty of this os...It ws sooo freaking awesome...

From the first line to last line all ws pure magical...the rainy atmosphere, nupur's imaginations, mayank's sudden arrival brilliant writing...And the wedding ws heavenly...i cant say how much i loved the part where mayank slipped the ring in nupur's finger...i can imagine the whole scene and all thnks to u...it ws pure treat to read this mesmerizing work

'so let ur gestures speak it...nd let me silence u...
I have no sense left..he will not leave a bit of it...the only thing thats now left is a feeling of bliss'...how cud u write sooo magically this part...im amazed...hands down dear...

ps: sorry for not commenting in ur ff's dear...but i promise i'll surely try to put some...

Faria

Thnks jani…tu sudhar ja, kitna romance chaiy tum logo go….pls abhi nhi…mein itna hi handle kersakti hoon

Meri halat –e- naar per reham ker,….thks jnau love ya too

Suja

U know how diifcult it is..tu tu mera mazak ura rahi thi BYLM k zamna yaad ker k..very bad

Thnks for liking it..so much..

Maria, preety88, tukun2009, umi, chandu-mayu, Bhawna_arti, aysha1989, gopi06, shruti_ms, daniella05, shafyyy, immayurfan, Ayesha_LuvSaJan, mayur_eternal

Thnks

Anila

Ya khuda is se zayda romantic, reham kero pls…thnks for liking it, I know its was diffrnt engagement …asi occasion ho tu kitna maza aay

Mona

Thnks aloot , ya thnks to faria :p

Gul

Thnku so much dear

So gr8 to know u liked it tht much

Bidz

Thnks dear

I just love ur so elaborated coments….thy realy means a lot

U know ur coment made me blush , realizing wht I have written

U enjoyrd it tht all I want

Thnku

Amber

Thnks dear

Glad u enjoyed it

MAHAAA..

Uff tumhara os k title change ..

Thnks fro liking it, n u all made be write so much phewww

palz_ArTi4ever, Prada_176

thnks a lot for ur such gr8 words..

thnku so much

for feeling its true essnces

Valio

Dekh yeah loog mjhy se kiya kiy akertay hain

Mein masoom , mjhy per itna zulim pheww

Thnks dear for liking

Faria shukar talash ker rahi hai..suja bach gai hai

Ruchi

Thnk dear

So glad u enjoyed it

Auroni

I soo miss ur coments yaar so much..its oki I know ur busy

Preivoulst this os was inspirational on rain, but thn mjhy pata nhi kiya I changed it to this

Thanks for ur words , thnku so much for liking

U enjoyed it its worth it

I have been frequent with writng OS these days, an sumhow I enjoyed it to, so before the MJHT anniversary cuming up, here is my contribution to it..

This one is dedicated to Dr. Maha…sorry couldn't still write on Pyar k Side effects…but I hope u like it n the way u wanted it cum like tht……

N YA RPLYD TO U ALL ON ABOVE POST

So here ur enjoy…

Lov

Fiza….

Being In love

Just can't imagine what today I am doing, phew, life cumes with all the surprises but this love cumes with hell of the surprises. There was a time when all these things seems to be just "kitabi baatein" but today I am all willingly doing all this…………... Just imagine.

Me Mayank Sharma, the heart throb of college n over the top attitude person, an just a girl tooo extra ordinary cuming , taking up the challenge to made me go insane n here im all over insane….

Love is an expression tht cumes in life n mean to change evry thng around u , but sumhow it seems tht it made u discover aspects hidden in u, make u loss ur inhibition.

Nupur, mere name it seems, but it completes my whole world. Though this name means a loot to me but the conversion of it into MRs Nupur Mayank Sharma, gave me an immense satisfaction.

For me this love..in her language PYAR came in my life with horrifying , atleast for me, horrifying side effects.

Me being completely non eca ( extracuriculam activity) person , the first change she brought was she made me dance, woh alag baat hai k woh aj tak mjhy apni ungliyoon pe nacha rahi hai….By god…

Dekho aj bhi mjhy se woh kiya kiay ker rahi hai….just to impress my jahsi ki rani , I am all here decorating our first house, ya I bought tht from Samrat, as I don't want it to get lost from our life, its our heaven on earth, no matter how big our house now is, how comfortable n cosy our bed is now, the bless feeling tht we use to had on just a mere mattress lying on floor was indefinable….see this is another one, me being poetic…Gosh so much of all her

Don't laugh, don't laugh at my poetic sense, I tried tht day.,.. me mayank sharam ny shairi ki woh bhi romantic….wah wah…n my mom…bulkily apni bahu per gai hain…..

U know tht day she found tht stupid four lines tht I wrote first, library wali , in one of my books while dusting, n I was expecting a whole loads of leg pulling session of my beloved, but to my surprise I got a kiss,

Tum jab bhi kuch out if the way jaker specially meray liyan kertay ho …tu by God mayank itny sweeto lagtay hoo….hay mera RAJ…..

N my cheeks were pulled …

Touching my cheeks, see I m not blsuhinh, exbhit 2 is not at all blushing …..

Whenever she say sumthing like tht I found my self in an urge to do wahtevr out of way I can to…hay…the expression

Thud….

Samrat: mayank….tu nupur k kayal se bahr aay ga…..

Ya I fall from the chair

Mayank: mein koi us k kayal mein nhi tha…..

Samrat: han han bulkily, phol k pakar tu tu asay jhoom raha tha jasay nupur k hath ho….he laugh out lod

Mayank: dekh Samrat…tujhy jis kam k layn bilaya hai na woh ker

Samrat: kyun kero…he threw the buntings from his hand…

Ek tu mjhy tu yeah bata k tun mjhy decorator samjh rekha hai kiya …jab teri biwi ko impress kerna ho tu mein Samrat decoration wala kyun ban jata hoon..tu naraz ho ker banglore ja raha ho , ya tere honemoon ho, mein hi kyun

Mayank: kyun k fortunately or unfortuanltey nupur "the filmistan" got married to the sadu of the excel….. aur fortunately us k sath bonus mein mjhy the love guru of excel mila na…..tu chup chap dsoti k faraz nibha

Samrat: saray faraz mein nibhaoo..tera kuch faraz hai k nhi….aj Sunday hai sunaday….mein aur chasmish ek romantic breakfast, phir lunch , aur dinner kertay….

Mayank: ha ha ha…..ur so funny, as aj possible nhi tha

Samrat: kyun…

Mayank: kyun k teri chamish ki behan, roh roh ker pani kay baltiyan…

Samrat: kiya

Mayank: pani k bucket pardossi ko supply ker rahi hoo gi….tu teri chaishmish us buket ko pardosi tak pochny mein madad ker rahi hoti BY GOD……

Samrat: tu tu us se intan larta kyun hai…..10 saal hogay per tu aur teri lari

Mayank: tu tujhy agar yaad tha k 10 SAAL ( saying making his hand in air to show how big it was) tu mjhy yaad nhi dila sakta tha….tujhy pata hai woh pregnant hai..

Samrat: aur jab bhushan khandan ki larkyoon per pregnancy k bhoot ata hai tu, humari life horrifying hojati hai… wasy mein tujhy salute kerta hoon, tu ny yeah risk second time liya, mein tu dosri baar soch bhi nhi skata….gunjan ny jo haal kiya tha..uff….tu I just cant imagine …I don't want to nupur ny tera kiya kiya hoga

Mayank: he putted his hand on wasit….thnku…..wasy tujhy waqi asa lagta hai…he asked with a smile….

Samrat: he flash back the smile….yaar ajeeb hai haina…khabi socha tha k asa sab kuch asa hoga…I mean tu aur mein dost….he laughed phir..tum aur nupur …uff yeah tu duniya k sab se impossible kam …jo kitna dramtically hoa….tu tu…aur almost bhag ker shadi….

Mayank: uff…woh shadi tu duniya mein kisi ki nhi hoi hogi….

Samrat: ya an wedding night in college chemistry lab….they burts in to laughter n share high five…..

Mayank: aur tu …pehly parhi, phir shee..naaa…..phir devdas bana hua tu chaismish….aur phir shadi….

N now here we are….10 years of relation ..aur mein bhool gaya..

Samrat: as usual...

Chal my work here is done, nupur ko driver drop kerday ga….n bachy aj meray pass u have a good night….he said teasingly n hugged him patting his back…..

Looking around I chukled, I just took sami help idea was mine….

It 10 o clock mean only 4 hrs left ….today we completed 10 year of our togetherness, n I forgot the date….it doesn't mean it isn't important for me, but yet its amazing feeling, a feeling tht never get suppressed, I feeling tht no matter ho much I thnk God for giving isn't enough

Whenever I go down to memory lane I just cant help but laugh, from project report fight to talent parade…to finding a partner for academic meet, how arrogant I was uff, what not we have said, n what not I have done to get rid off her . for a sec tht moment did I ever thought I ll to anything to woo her today…life…n love..sab badal diya ...

So making up for it, I have decorated this whole out house to make my princes na jhasi ki rani special…by the way its an excuse cause I was thrown out of my house so can dcor it , neither have a way to manfoying…..

No noo noo way fiza no flash back…meri izaat hai 4 logo k samany yaar..larkiyan marti hai mjhy par

Aray wah asy kasay wohi tu sab se intresitng hai….

Dekho tumhary ffs k kiya hoga, mayank ki reputation agar karab hogai …he Mr attitude n..pls

No no ..

Ladies n gentleman presenting FLASH BACK…

Fiza im quitting being ur lead charcter from all ur ff…..bss

Thik hai tu mein nupur ki lovestory Durve k sath likho gi…kasa

I'll kill u….oh man

Tu let people enjoy….

So han tu kaha ti mein

FLASHABCK

Nupur: mayank tum ..tum phir bhol gay …tumhain kuch yaad rehta bhi hai

Mayank: nupur tumhar sath tu mein khud ko bhi bholl jata hoon dates kasay yaad rekho…

Nupur: acha yeah dialogues maat maro samhjy….tum 10^th anniversary bhool gay…mayank

Mayank: nupur is mein bara kiya hai…tum bhi tu 1^st anniversary bhool gai thi na mein ny kuch kaha tha….

Nupur: acha aaa….tu tum mjhy se badla lay rahy hoo…ho mayank…

Mayank: nupur mein tum se badla lo ga…

Nupur: dekh rahin hoo jab se mein moti hoi hoon na tum tum mjhy ignore ker rahy hoo…

He suppressed his smile but to his luck was caught

Nupur: dekha dekha….tum abhi bhi hassa ray hoo…dekha…tumhary liyan na tu mein…. na yeah din kuch important nhi hai…

Mayank: nupur…common..tum janti ho asa kuch nhi hai…

Nupur: mein sab janti hoon….jab mein nhi thi tu tum us RIYA k sath thy haina, aur han woh America mein kaun thi Christine….

Mayank: nupur ….koi Christine nhi thi …woh sirf mazak tha…

He recvied a cushion from sofa…

Nupur: sab janti hoon mein…she wiped a tear..mein waha akelay sab se lari thi aur tum…sab mard ek jasy hotay hain,…..riya, siya aur pata nhi kaun kaun…

Mayank: nupur yeah galat baat hai dont doubt in my loyalty pls….

Nupur: unglyi kis ko dekh rahy hoo han….

Mayank: yaar ek anniversary hi tu bholo hoon

Nupur: kiya kaha tum ny ek …ek anniversary….ek bhagwahn ….kaun se shahurkh ki film miss ki thi mein, kaun sa show….jo mjhy yeah yeah …asa pati diya…sadu… akhdu, kerla woh bhi neem charha….

Ek anniversary bhool gaya …she hited him agin with a cushion….tum anniversary bholo na ek…ab tu raho aj is ghar mein zara…

Mayank: nupur arm se lag jay gi…

Nupur: tu tumhain kiya lagata hai mein ..mein criket team ki selection k lyan throw chek ker rahi hoon apna …tumahin marany k lyan hi pehk rahi hoon …

Mayank: nupur buhat dhand hai bahr mein kasay rahon gaya….we will celebrate na..kyun moment waste ker rahi hoon

Nupur: celebration gai taail layny….yaha zindgai waste hogai meri …keraly k sath…kaha mornea mein , mein ny rassgoly ki trah sweet zindagi k khuwab dekhy thy aur yah…gai baahass pani mein….bahr niklo…n now she hited flowers from the vase…

N he was moving back saving him self n fearfully watching her steps..when she trip n was about to fall…

Mayank: dekha…aii tu tum yahin na…meri bahoon mein…

Nupur: choro …aj na tu koi eyelock hoga…aur background score waly bhaiya ..koi music nhi bajay ga….is RK pose ny hi marwaya hai BY god …na mein kardti na mera demgh karab hota ….mil jay excel colloge k floor maker…pocho gi sara polish mera hi pathway mein lagaya..sheena tu lambi lambi heelo mei na giri…

Mayank: dekhi yeah background score itna popular hoa ek next drama mein production house ny lead is ko diya

Nupur: hain woh kasay

Mayank: kyun geet mein lead kis k pass hai….mahi vayyy(sorry geet watcher. Didn't mean to hurt u)

Nupur: zayada stupid jokes marny ki zaroorat nhi hai

Aur tum kiya muskrat rahy hoo…bahr aniklo….

N with tht she pushed him away n shut the door…

Mayank: nupur pls na ….pls sorry kam pakar k sorry …duinya mein jtini sorry hain sab sorry…pls

She opened the door n he smile n went near her

Nupur: dur dur raho wahin…..jitny sorry milay sab ko lay aao…aur jis ko pakrana hai pakro….aj tumahin mein ny ghar mein anay diya hoo……

N the door was shut again…

I stod outside watching n thn smiling at my wifes anger…how cum sumone looks so cute….mayank Sharma itni izzaat k bad she looks cute….wah yeah side effect nhi adverse love event hai….

Report kero globally…

I glared at the writer….i hate when u tried to prove she is doctor…

I don't need to prove it I am

Haha ha haha..funny …

Teri tu…contract cancel tumhar…

Yaar ab tum tension maat do wasy biwi ny ghar se bahr nikal diya hai

So here I am after all this tht has happened, I came here n decorated this out house , with her flowers of choice red rose tht are , making her path drench in petals, a cake in center of hall…n candles all around…with thousands of flowers all over…I am waitng for her…hope she will cum, n forgive me….

I heard the car stop at the door, I switched off the lights….

Nupur: gunjan..gunjan…aay bhgawan ek tu meri behan.pata hai mjhy andheray se daar lagta hai phir bhi….she step in the door …n I found her expression , her lips twich in a smile and thn the famous frown…she smell n can easily gues its of flowers…

Acha tu tumari favorite Sali ny phir tumahra sath diya

I cant hold but chuckle

Ab chup ker kyun bhatay hoo bahr aao na….mjhy se daar lagta hai …..

Thought of switching on the light but thn sumthing else struck my mind….with soft steps I went near her , to my luck she turned to feel me around I so love u wife, but I am clever enough , hided my self at her back , a place I want to be placed….

I crawled my hands on her waist n pulled her near, to hug her from back….

Mayank: happy anniversary Ms Sharma

Nupur: chor mjhy ..mein tum se naraz hoon, abhi k abhi choro ..

Mayank: nupur ..pls n I am sorry, thinking sumthng mischievous I kissed her shoulder, ahh no matter wht its effect her like the frist time….

Nupur: collecting her self …mayank..mein ny kaha choro….

Mayank: nupur mjhy pata hai I did wrong, but tum mjhy kal khub sara naz hojana …but pls aj nhi na…yeah din phir thori aay ga….aur tum kyun apna moment apny sadu, idiot , good for nothing, boring pati k lyan waste kerti hoo

Nupur: she turned n point her finger to him…. o helloo,…yeah sab kahny k haq sirf mjhy hai samhjy tum ….ek lafaz bhi nhi khana meray pati k baray mein…

She smiled n he smiled more widely …..n hugged her but lighly …she too hugged him but to tightly…

Mayank: sorry….

Nupur: tum mjhy ab hug bhi sahi se nhi kertay na…she pouted n he burst into laughter…dekho tu mer phir mazak ura rahy hoo….mayank tu ny khabi nhi sudhar sektay …hamesha mera day spoil kertay ho aur ph…..

Her bla bla bla was stoped when I found it to much to hold on, ek tu meri sweet wife n her sweet anger, uper se her mood swings n pregnancy making her more irresistible ….uper se itna bolti hai k aur mein kya kero…..actually aur buhat kcuh hai jo mein ker sakta …pls let me enjoy….

Pulling her near to him , he captured her lips, it was hight time they celebrate n stop fighting…..

It was so long I felt her, tht I lost my senses, n made it so deep, but with a jerk I broke

Mayank: nupur ….tum bhi na ..rukh nhi sakti mjhy……I said as I was breathless…God knows how she must be feeling…I hug her n rubbing her back ….

Picking her up I placed her on the cushion beside…n cuped her face…

Mayank: tum thik hona …..

Nupur: she chukled….h.a.a.n….

Mayank: nupuuurrr..ur not…..ab yeah light kyun off hai..

With forgetting evrythng tht I switch off the light so tht my princes get the surprise when she will switch on them, I did it by my self as to have a clear glimpse tht she is alright was more important…

I turned around, n looked at her, her expression was fine n she was standing up..

Mayank: wahi bahti rahoo …rest kero….

Nupur: aray hato mayank…ek kiss se kuch nhi hota…samany se hatho

Mayank: nupur ur so breathless..pls…ab kiya hai…

Nupur: meray sadu pati ny itni sari mehnaat ki hai….mjhy dekhn hai…

With tht I realize she is viewing all tht I have done…

She looked around and twirled in joy…I neared her cant stop her…she is nupur…after all….

Nupur: OMG mayank …..yeah sab kitan acha hai…thnku thnku thnku..

Mayank: so mjhy maaf kiya….

Nupur: jao maf kiya tum bhi kiya yaad kero gay kis tayaloo se pala para hai….

We laughed n thn proceed to the table to cut the cake…blowing the candling , wishing togetherness for eternity with my four love ones, two standing with me, n two must be asleep at home…..we fed each other n I kissed her agin but this time carefully…u pouted n I chukled,,..

Hiting her head with mine…sorry my romantic wife, I cant risk ur life samjhi

Nupur: had hai mayank …ek kiss mein kiya risk hai,..she went n sat on the sofa..n I accompany her , hugging her from back I ly down n made her too…..

Mayank: bs rest kero….thakti nhi hona tum bol bol ker…na mjhy se lartay hoay

Nupur: han han tum sun sun ker thak jaty hoo na

Mayank: bulkily nhi….i can nevr ..samjhi….

He said tht with so much love n affection ozzing out from his eyes, tht I cant help but tears brim in my eyes….he kissed away them n kissed my eyes…

Nupur: I love you….always n forevr…

Mayank: Lov ya too…abhi tak tu agay k I cant say…..grinningly

Nupur: mayank….

She raised her hand to hit me n I grip it n pulled her near…made her comfortable in my arms….feeling the feeling of being in love with her ….