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TeamMcSwarek

@TeamMcSwarek

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Posted: 13 years ago

#201

Niceee
cont soon
thanks for the pm!

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chandreyeeroy

@chandreyeeroy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#202

22 likes nwell im happy wid tht

nly 14 cmmnts

c frnds im crying badly

i feel tht i try my best 2 give u updates

i relly hv a busy schedule n travelling evryday takes my energy away(9 hrs of total travel )

still wen i cum bak home 2 find nly dese cmmnts i feel disheartened😭

plss ill update next by nyt n ill try my best 2 keep up2 my wrds

till den

ganesh chaturthi ki shubhkamnayen aapke saath rahe

ganpati bappa morya

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Tinu

@007jindal

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#203

Happy ganesh chaturthi to u too.
Waiting 4 u to upd.

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chandreyeeroy

@chandreyeeroy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#204

Part 24

It was finally the D-day'''''''..

Adi-dev the registrar is coming at

Dev-10am na adi

Adi-yesss

Muski-pinkyyy forget about the chips and ask the contractor about the decorations

Pinky-yaa iv had a talk

Ani-pinky come upstairs naaa I need your help

Dev was also called by ani upstairs when he suddenly bumped with somebody

Flowers falling from the heaven ''''''.light shone everywhere''''''..angel standing in the middle with her big black eyes lined with kohl'''''''..calling him sweetly 'dev' ohh how sweet did his name sound from her pretty pink lips and her blushing pink cheeks''''''..

DEV''''''''

He suddenly came out of his dream to see the face of his enraged sister ani

Ani-dev bhaiii'''''''''''..kab se chilla rahi hu apke samne bahre ho gaye ho kya

Dev-huh'''''''..ani vo mai

Ani disgustingly turned around and then realised the reason of devs weird behaviour

Ani-ohh pari

Dev and pari both blushed

(pari as mention earlier is khuranas neighbour n devs lady love)

Ani-you both blush and stare each other like this and you think the rest of the people will not come to know

Dev and pari immidiately straightened themselves

At the handa residence------

Geet-maa it's a court marriage only

Rano-still geet'''''''''''''.you should dress up properly

Papa-this is the upteenth time you are brushing her hair

Raj-maa now stop all this and you yourself come with me to the car

Rano-you will never understand a 'maa ke dil ka dard'

Geet-baaasss bahut ho gaya raj start the car''''''''.papa take maa and come down

Ill join you all in a minute'''''''''

Geet went to her room and opened her cupboard only to take a picture out:-

Yes her best picture''''''''.with''''''''.she was so happy in that picture

Happily chearing for 'him''''''''..ofcourse it was his graduation day and she was younger to him

He was in the picture also oblivious to her feelings for him that day'''''''''

Geet gently wiped the picture with her hands full of jwelery and mehendi in maans name

Geet-bye mr.champion''''''''.today im getting married to maan well unka kya kehna maan the workhollic'''''''''''..hey ill never love him more than you I promise darling so don't you worry baby'''''''''''..aakhir ye sab to tumhare liye hi hai'''''''''..tumhari jaan bachake tumhari jaan banna chati hoon''''''..she folded the picture and placed it in her purse and headed down''''''''thus burying an' innocent-onesided- lovestory' behind her.

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Precap----------shaaadi finallyyy

Aftr shaadi ahem ahem😃

please hit the like button and comment😭

Edited by chandreyeeroy - 13 years ago

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Tinu

@007jindal

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#205

Oh awsum.ab ye kaun hai mr.champion.
I m getting confused after every upd.gosh just clear my doubt. Wats is wid neel?geet loves whom?

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roopali

@rsroopali

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#206

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chandreyeeroy

@chandreyeeroy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#207

Originally posted by: tinu.jindal
Oh awsum.ab ye kaun hai mr.champion.
I m getting confused after every upd.gosh just clear my doubt. Wats is wid neel?geet loves whom?

olle srry yaar to put u in cnfusion bt wait for the suspence to unravel darling

mr.champion to wo geet ka hai but nw let him b mr.?

neel is gud frnd na n tht also frm army n im talking abt graduation na

geet is dedicated luvr so aftr marriage she is maans

ohhh my geet is a gud 1

secrets will b revealed sooon

till den sweety keep lykin n posting cmmntsss👏