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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sorry guys..
I have a major rant here..so if you guys liked todays episode ..then maybe this post is not for you..
I have been loyal..I have been patient..But today my cup runeth over!!
I found the whole episode to be testing and quite disappointing..
!..Shyam's airtime needs to be reduced pronto..I am sick of seeing him camp in and camp out of Khushi's house ..Sick of his lustful??FB...I am not sure if there is any depth to his role..Why can't they delve into the past and show a connection if there is one...I mean he lies through the teeth to Anjali but this has been since the last few weeks..and what do we have..that he is a lecher..WHAT IS HIS ROLE ...Please CV's define his role...or if he is what he is..a lecher..then move him to the back ground..I mean he gets the lion's share of the episode even more than the leads themselves..
The other thing which I am sure I find quite insulting to my intelligence is Shyam leaves early.Is he going to leave early everyday and what about those millions of pictures littered in the house..do the CV's think Khushi walks with her eyes closed..Sheesh..How long are they going to keep playing cops and robbers..I am heartily sick of it,,
2.Khush's character sketch from the star plus website
She is righteous, intelligent but slightly nave at the same time.
@ bold.it does not mention being a simpleton but I found the dream sequence utterly OTT comedy..I am sorry but the comedy catered to eight year olds rather than an audience of 18-60...it was slapstick and crude ..and out of place..If she is intelligent, then why can't she process the information..plus the whole live in mumbo jumbo..utterly distorted in concept and watered down for an audience more used to SP formula shows..I mean are we heading anywhere??Half baked comedy and then she goofs up and hits her head on the pillar..I mean is this laurel or hardy..I found it quite clownish and more fit for a circus..In fact the whole Blah Sequence was over done..winds blowing to annouce ASR's entrance..I mean come on..
3..I need the CV's to show some credibilty to BLAH..How can she be soo dumb...HOW? and work for the ASR group of companies...I can not have her say ROUND and ROUND for aarti..This is not comedy any longer ..I am sorry..
4. Can we get some decent ..and by decent I mean a conversation between the leads even if biting each others head off..Can we at least get a decent episode without just intense stares by ASR who looks as if he will eat KKG alive without rhyme or reason.and Khushi cowering each time she passes him by..UFFF
5.This is what drew me to Iss Pyaar in the first place.I wanted Drama not a comedy of errors ..and by that I mean that which borders on buffonry..
Let me remind you all..
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=B_Isn3j5Shs[/YOUTUBE]
This had everything..Humour..angst..and chemical attraction..
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p968IHcN-3Y[/YOUTUBE]
the way she talks to him with the mirror in her hand..and then he shuts her up..
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XQuYQSzRdQE[/YOUTUBE]
again the humor is there on the look on ASR's face..and she is simple.and naive..when she tells him she recorded everything on her phone..haha
Please CV's you can do it..turn Iss pyaar around..I do love the show..don't get me wrong but I want things to move ..
Sorry for such a negative post but I just could not take it..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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you may think I am a regular in your rant posts😆 but I just wanted to give you a bg info to get you oriented to the workings of the screenplay writers mind..

I havent seen the epi.. but read the WU..and the UNCANNY similarity in the dream seq hit me.. this has been done and recycled no. of times by GH.. in his early shows.. while then I cldnt care less.. coz Sanaya dint have to do it.. but now the tht makes me uncomfortable.. to see her do the same OTT buffoonery.. so the thing is you may get glimpses of intense scenes here and there.. but the gravity laden scene will always be rare.. coz tht is a rarity in the man's psyche..his version of most things are rather watered down and hence risk losing the charm.. so m not surprised at the pseudo LIVING IN concept being driven around here😆.. too scandalizing I guess to think the lead would not be a chaste celibate... waiting for the right person.. so living in is just abt.. sharing space like siblings😆.. enough said.. the crux is GH does specialize in buffoonery which in his dictionary amounts to humor..Sadly some of us have enough experience in viewing that... 😆 u r new to the game

but yup the remedy is an additional help to him.. in his not-so much of a speciality scenes maybe.. will help everyone me thinks..
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damn!

in trying to quote you..

i let the reserved spot...go awry!!
oops!!
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Hey..No I never assume anything so you are safe...
hahha I was beginning to feel like a leper in here..because the forum is inundated with praise of the afore mentioned..
I hope GH does change his tactic because me thinks this story with so much potential is beginnig to slide dangerously on a sticky slope..I want humor...who says I don't ..but sadly as my posts reflect..the more understated..the better..the more in your face..the more I get turned off..hell I could have watched comedy central..
So since I am new to this man's psyche..it seems that there is to be no deliverance ...Yaar give me hope..I don't to despair...because I keep watching and kinda hoping for things to turn around..and I think I still will becauseI really like ARHI but the day it seems to be in my diary irrepairable..I guess it would be adieu..

but yup the remedy is an additional help to him.. in his not-so much of a speciality scenes maybe.. will help everyone me thinks..
would you care to elaborate..sorry I am slow..which remedy..is it the formula he uses .or is there something idon't know..
and if you can face it ..
the dream sequence..
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5XinIjL5W8Y&feature=channel_video_title[/YOUTUBE]
from 5 19 onwards..
and thanks for replying..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hiya Zain!

Cool down yaar!

I do accept, it's high time they shud define Shyam's character...creepy music and cheesy lines are no more creating interest to explore! dats y i don't luk @ the screen if he appears

And Blah's stupid dictionary for each n every word...but I don't bother!

I hav decided 2 gulp down some cliche's and OTT ness to enjoy the show!

It's her first day in his house na...they wil converse...If Live-in track follows...they will b forced to talk...

I liked the epi!

Thanx for posting the videos!

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Originally posted by: cindrella255

Hiya Zain!

Cool down yaar!

I do accept, it's high time they shud define Shyam's character...creepy music and cheesy lines are no more creating interest to explore! dats y i don't luk @ the screen if he appears

And Blah's stupid dictionary for each n every word...but I don't bother!

I hav decided 2 gulp down some cliche's and OTT ness to enjoy the show!

It's first day in her house na...they wil converse...If Live-in track follows...they will b forced to talk...

I liked the epi!

Thanx for posting the videos!

ahhh..Cinders..old faithful..🤣
I know .. I lost it today..completely flipped seeing Shyam's mug for the upteenth. time...and you know we all have our days..😃
@ blue..hallelujeh...amen to that..I will gulp too..I will keep repeating this..
and @ black...that too..thanks for the hope my friend..I know you all liked the epi..good for you..
rest assured .. I am going to continue watching for now..😛one dream sequence..BAH..
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Originally posted by: current

Sorry guys..

I have a major rant here..so if you guys liked todays episode ..then maybe this post is not for you..
I have been loyal..I have been patient..But today my cup runeth over!!
I found the whole episode to be testing and quite disappointing..
!..Shyam's airtime needs to be reduced pronto..I am sick of seeing him camp in and camp out of Khushi's house ..Sick of his lustful??FB...I am not sure if there is any depth to his role..Why can't they delve into the past and show a connection if there is one...I mean he lies through the teeth to Anjali but this has been since the last few weeks..and what do we have..that he is a lecher..WHAT IS HIS ROLE ...Please CV's define his role...or if he is what he is..a lecher..then move him to the back ground..I mean he gets the lion's share of the episode even more than the leads themselves..
The other thing which I am sure I find quite insulting to my intelligence is Shyam leaves early.Is he going to leave early everyday and what about those millions of pictures littered in the house..do the CV's think Khushi walks with her eyes closed..Sheesh..How long are they going to keep playing cops and robbers..I am heartily sick of it,,

totally there with you on this... How are they going to tackle her knowing. And even if she does know..i dont see anything coming off it..for she has no feelings for him... it is him..who has things to hide... he does not want her to know..so even if khushi knows..it wont make a difference..
i feel the CVs have planned for Buaji to come to RM and find out...

now she will remember her conversation about asking him who all are there in his family and him definitely not mentioning a wife..also in the beginning when he tried ingrain himself into Buaji's house he had said something like akeli jaan...

so yes..Mr Shyam - and here i mean Black...has much to hide so if Khushi knows she might blurt out that he lives with them when he has a house...here... so what is the reason? only Shyam knows or may be CVs do or may be even they right now are racking their brains for one!!


2.Khush's character sketch from the star plus website
She is righteous, intelligent but slightly nave at the same time.
@ bold.it does not mention being a simpleton but I found the dream sequence utterly OTT comedy..I am sorry but the comedy catered to eight year olds rather than an audience of 18-60...it was slapstick and crude ..and out of place..If she is intelligent, then why can't she process the information..plus the whole live in mumbo jumbo..utterly distorted in concept and watered down for an audience more used to SP formula shows..I mean are we heading anywhere??Half baked comedy and then she goofs up and hits her head on the pillar..I mean is this laurel or hardy..I found it quite clownish and more fit for a circus..In fact the whole Blah Sequence was over done..winds blowing to annouce ASR's entrance..I mean come on..

I feel she is what she was today... and that is why i liked the episode...She got that dream because she had felt strange about the live in part. She also believes that Arnav is the guy who would have forced her to comply and that is what was manifested...it may seem to you a bit OTT but i felt it was Khushi

she is a girl who takes a broom around the house and dances...makes finger guns and prances and also the girl who blurts out simplest things that make her difference..

even in the ber scene when he threw them away she forgot her dupatta and told him things on her mind.. and then lamented at her torn dupatta...

i think it was an innovative way of explaining a concept like Live In...which is a fact in urban India...today!!

now the pillar part was a bit much i agree..but she does flounder...whether it was falling the steps when she had gone for dictation...in the office..

of step back when he had pointed to the kumkum near her eyes

or step back when he came forward after her slapping the resignation letter in his hand..she does feel scared of him and he did growl...

even the first time when he had said what the when she was under the table she had hit her head...against it when he had growled at her..with what the..

so may be a little of consistency in her scrambling when he gets mad at her...

i feel now the time has come for her see that she is aware of him rather than scared..that he affects her beyond fear...it is not him she fears but herself or her response when he holds her...!!

that way i agree they need to move on..now...

3..I need the CV's to show some credibilty to BLAH..How can she be soo dumb...HOW? and work for the ASR group of companies...I can not have her say ROUND and ROUND for aarti..This is not comedy any longer ..I am sorry..

I had said this earlier as well Blah or La is today's woman...has her ideas of how she wants to live and right not it suits her man too... she is not dumb...just different from what the family wants not even from the society for women like her are there..who do not cook, who do not believe in rituals or other things..that is quintessential indian woman...stereotype...but...does not mean it is bad..or dumb..

i feel they should have her understand that the man is also having same values instilled in him> he knows them but denounces them. she has never seen it so it is new for her..not incomprehensible...

so not knowing krishnaleela or his story is fine..but not understanding a word like babuji..is again far fetched... i agree with the word for jail...it would beyond the most die hard hindi speaking people...who have probably lived and breathed hindi language..

and round round came after she had already...done aarti the right way...on teej? why the regression?


4. Can we get some decent ..and by decent I mean a conversation between the leads even if biting each others head off..Can we at least get a decent episode without just intense stares by ASR who looks as if he will eat KKG alive without rhyme or reason.and Khushi cowering each time she passes him by..UFFF

I think i would like see something like what you say..something that will show they have more in common than a temper..and find themselves surprised at that...

The temper i get it..he is hiding true feelings...for this guy had softened to her..after the guest house incident and then she had thrown all those on his face when he had asked concernedly tum theek ho..with a bhaad mein jaaye aap aur aapki naukri..

second time she had done it was..when on teej he had picked her up and given her water for she had fainted and she had accused him unnecessarily with aapne hamara vrat tor diya..

so yeah him wanting to only yell back at insulting him time and again is justified when he had done things for her..he would probably do only for his sis...

so yeah more is required in this regard too...

she needs to realise and he needs to get more physical in showing her how much she affects him..in trying to stay away from her he ends up being very very close to her..
5.This is what drew me to Iss Pyaar in the first place.I wanted Drama not a comedy of errors ..and by that I mean that which borders on buffonry..
Let me remind you all..


For me too...it had humour...a sense of humor..with drama and intrigue...shrouding a romantic story...

but sometimes i feel they lose their way...

i guess with people like us..we can always give feedback and see if they are reading this!!


[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=B_Isn3j5Shs[/YOUTUBE]
This had everything..Humour..angst..and chemical attraction..
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p968IHcN-3Y[/YOUTUBE]
the way she talks to him with the mirror in her hand..and then he shuts her up..
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XQuYQSzRdQE[/YOUTUBE]
again the humor is there on the look on ASR's face..and she is simple.and naive..when she tells him she recorded everything on her phone..haha
Please CV's you can do it..turn Iss pyaar around..I do love the show..don't get me wrong but I want things to move ..
Sorry for such a negative post but I just could not take it..




I want to see this story go a whole lot forward...

there needs to be scintillating...romance...with loads of drama and a push and pull which keeps them apart and yet together


my now i have made a long long post..

sorry Zain..

i enjoyed the epi...but i do have my own points which you made me think about so thanks...!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: current

Hey..No I never assume anything so you are safe...

hahha I was beginning to feel like a leper in here..because the forum is inundated with praise of the afore mentioned..
I hope GH does change his tactic because me thinks this story with so much potential is beginnig to slide dangerously on a sticky slope..I want humor...who says I don't ..but sadly as my posts reflect..the more understated..the better..the more in your face..the more I get turned off..hell I could have watched comedy central..
So since I am new to this man's psyche..it seems that there is to be no deliverance ...Yaar give me hope..I don't to despair...because I keep watching and kinda hoping for things to turn around..and I think I still will becauseI really like ARHI but the day it seems to be in my diary irrepairable..I guess it would be adieu..

but yup the remedy is an additional help to him.. in his not-so much of a speciality scenes maybe.. will help everyone me thinks..
would you care to elaborate..sorry I am slow..which remedy..is it the formula he uses .or is there something idon't know..
and if you can face it ..
the dream sequence..
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5XinIjL5W8Y&feature=channel_video_title[/YOUTUBE]
from 5 19 onwards..
and thanks for replying..


I will watch the epi.. when I find some boredom.. right now just lazing too tired from the week's worth.. LOL..

well GHs USP is the feel good factor.. so while he doesnt believe in over dramatizing (good thing) sometimes he under does the gravity.. making it look superficial.. in the past.. the show I am referring to.. had one phase of intense story-telling.. and that was done by another screenplay writer.. so thts what I mean by the show cld do better with a complementing screenplay writer who cld cover up where he lacks.. and well his humor is OTT.. cant help, his idea of an effusive girl always borders on juvenile behavior.. effervescence and intelligence have been mutually exclusive mostly in his work.. thts why m sayin m not surprised.. you gave me a vid.. I'l post one too.. here too the dream seq was out there.. or may be in his view it is meant to be out there.. Khushi is meant to have OTT humor which reflects innocence and her psyche.. I wish I cld find THE dream seq I was talking abt.. but this shld give u the drift..

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=t2n-ZrYOKD0

me too roots for the underplayed intelligent comedy.. no wonder I swear by the cheeky one-liners of rishta.com and sarabhai.. but well u have to learn not to expect it from GH.. LOL he is more out there with his idea of comedy.. I defo hope he has progressed from those days.. for the welfare of this show and for the sake of all your attachment to it.. but apologize thts the most encouragement I can provide for it..

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Posted: 13 years ago
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hahaha loll jokka bless ya calmed down poor u i was okay wiv today scene to b onist shayam was makin me laugh wiv his tantrums lmao
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Gosh this show is turning into a freak show 🤣 or wait it is already one.😆

I can only say now.. is to watch the show without accepting any story... coz there isn't one lol.It is like me watching 90210 without any story or logic but atleast there are sexy scenes to keep me interested.😛.This show doesn't even have that much.😔.If they are adverstising a love story the least they could do is keep showing some sexy scenes instead of attempting to show us that they have a story.😆

And Shyam ..well if I wanted to see a Phycho I would watch the actual movie.🤣.I dont consider a phycho a villian coz the person has a mental illness..you cant do anything about it rofl.Why does the story need a villan/phycho/leech anyways?It is not like Arnav and Khushi's troubles are any less with or without him.🤣 .And dont get me strarted on his day and night camps.lol.It would have made more sense if he was the hollow man and his presence could not be detected .Abhaas is a good actor but the character does not intrigue me anymore.Actually I dont understand what any of the characters are doing anymore in this show.

Comedy..woh comedy tha kya?.It was like Scary Movie..desi version.😲

2/10 for the episode .Complete nonsense.👎🏼

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