~~New Mayur OS-Rhythm of love-page 14~

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hello Friends- my sweet, cute friend valley i mean valliah wrote an Mayur OS for me. she has gifted me this OS as EIDI...😃.. i just loved this OS.. it was very cute... i requested her to post it on forum bu she dint agree ..but finally she gave me permission to post it on forum😃


Guys i hope u all like it and will encourage her to write more by pressing like butto
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Mayur OS

Love to Fight


Mayankkk she yelled at highest pitch possible from her bedroom, n he felt as if its his last day on earth alive.

Mayank:- kya hua nupur tum aise kyun chilla rahi ho''padosi kya sochenge.

Nupur:- gave her trademark glare n mouthed, kyun chilla rahi hu yeh tum puch rahe ho ha, aur padosi kya sochenge uski fikar hai mujh par kya beet rahi hai uski fikar nahi.

Mayank:- aise kyun keh rahi ho akhir hua kya hai nupur.

Nupur:- tum to na aise bhole banne ki koshish na hi karo I know tumne yeh jan bujh kar kiya hai,aur ab innocent banne ki koshish kar rahe ho.

Mayank:- giving the weirdest look possible answered back. Arre lekin mujhe sach mein nahi pata ab batao gi ya aise hi time pass karogi.

Nupur:- kya kaha tumne TIME PASS, ab main time pass hogayi hu n with this she was on verge to cry.

Mayank :- feeling guilty to see her like this sat beside her n side hugged her, he knew she was having her mood swings these days as it was her 6 months pregnancy, nupur mera who matlab nahi tha.

Nupur :- to kya matlab tha n turns her face away.

Mayank:- uff nupur kya tum bhi arre baba mera sirf itna matlab tha ke aise chillana tumhare aur baby dono ke health ke liye accha nahi hai bas I was concerned thats it.

Nupur :- yeh I WAS concerned ka kya matlab hua kya ab nahi ho, aur padosi ki itna chinta kyun waha kya koi miss India rehne aayi hai, said with bit irritation.

Mayank :- loved the way she pouted like a child n smiled to see her cute pout.

Nupur :- ab aise smile kyun kar rahe ho, miss India ki baat sunte hi smile aur mere liye bas sadu look hmppp.

Mayank :- chuckled n pecked her cheek, my smiles r only reserved for u my dear wifey.

Nupur :- sirf mere liye aur baby ?

Mayank :- uff nupur main kuch bhi kar lun tumhare complaints reh hi jate hai na.

Nupur :- dekha dekha phir se. sadu kahin ke.

Mayank :- Nupurrr'..accha choro yeh batao tum chillayi kyun thi?

Nupur :- arre ha main to bhul hi gayi, n with this the fumed in anger, glaring her sadu hubby she took her fav magazine from bedside table.

Mayank :- kya hua kuch kahogi?

Nupur :- yeh kya hai, with a u r soo dead look.

Mayank :- nupur kya tum bhi, yeh puchne ke liye mujhe bulaya u know I was busy'..but he was cut short in mid of sentence, with maine pucha yeh kya hai?

sweetheart yeh game hum baad mein khele abhi I need to'..but again he was stopped by jo pucha uska jawab do. nupur dear I think u have lost it'..bukhar to nahi'.tumhe nahi pata yeh kya hai''ofcourse Mayapari tumhari good for nothing magazine hai.

Nupur :- n this was the limit''nupur just burst out instantly'..kya kaha tumne'..meri mayapari ka mazak udaya'..aur main sirf magazine nahi dekha rahi iss par jo tumne kar nama kiya hai na who dekha rahi thi.

Mayank :- what nama ?

Nupur :- mayankkk..

Mayank :- okk okk baba sorry bolo.

Nupur :- tumne yeh kiya na, she showed him the stain which was of tea on it.

Mayank:- oh yeh accha'ha who actually ek call agaya tha so I just kept my cup hurriedly maybe chai gir gayi'.so'.tum isliye chilla rahi thi'..GOD nupur.

Nupur :- ji nahi tumne jaan bujh kar kiya'.i know n with this the fighter nupur was back in action.

Mayank :- nupur please main aisa kyun karunga bhala.

Nupur :- coz ur jealous. With more glares.

Mayank:- arre par main yeh good for not'..n she glared to which he paused, okk but y will I be jealous r u mad.

Nupur :- coz iske cover page par mera pehla pyar hai, with blush.

Mayank:- who was oblivious till now took a near view n giggled, for which he earned a u-better-don't look'..he suppressed his gigs n pretend to be serious but was failed miserably.maine sach mein nahi dekha with innocent face.

Nupur :- tumhe to humesha se prob hai na mere RAJ se'yes it had a SRK pic from DDLJ on its cover.

Mayank :- nupurrr ab sorry na sach mein n yeh bhi koi ladne wali baat hai.

Nupur :- tou'.kya aarti utaru'.u know I LOVE HIM isiliye u did this purposely'. N now it was mayank's turn to frown.

Mayank :- nupur please ha yeh LIKE to I did manage but u ONLY LOVE ME.

Nupur :- accha aur jo tum apne pehle pyaar aur meri souten ko lekar pura din busy hote ho uska kya.

Mayank :- nupur kaun sa pehla pyaar aur kaun si souten tum kya keh rahi ho'with a complete confused look.

Nupur :- tumhari BOOKS''.with a mock smile.

Mayank :- uff nupur ab mere books bech mein kaha se agaye'.with stern look.

Nupur :- jaise mera RAJ aaya'..n now this was mayank's turn to give glares'.yeh mera raj mera raj kya laga rakha hai.

Nupur:- mera nahi to kya tumhara aur mujhe yeh jalne ki boo kyun arahi hai.

Mayank:- nupurrr''but suddenly reality dawn upon him as she gestured him towards kitchen n it striked him that he was preparing pancakes'..he rushed to kitchen to be welcomed by a smoky kitchen with coal black pan. Yes only pan remained no cake.

Nupur :- mayank kya hua she yelled again'.sab thik hai'.to which got an instant reply haha u must be kidding nupur'..tumhare hote kuch thik ho sakta hai kya''n it continued'''


to be cont...

valley i hope u'll cont this OS.pilishhh

---------Index-----
Mayur OS1-Love to Fight-part 1-page1
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/miley-jab-hum-tum/1772776/new-mayur-os-rhythm-of-love-page-14

Mayur OS1-Love to Fight-part 2(complete)-page 7
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/miley-jab-hum-tum/1772776/new-mayur-os-rhythm-of-love-page-14?pn=7

Mayur OS2-And They (DIS)agree-page 10

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/46519690

Mayur OS3-Rhythm of Love-page 14

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/46692479





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drfizaahmed thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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OMG
thnku so much faru ..for shring this with us
VALI>>>>>>>>welcum to our club👏
its was so cute n lovely...i was smiling n loving it
specially "yeah like tak thik hai but u love only me"
i just loved it...
aur yeah faru ki eidi thi n now continue ti n woh meri eidi😃
superb...so cute...sa mayurish...👏👏
Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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OMG!!!
valliyah...it was a beautiful os.
very nice.
love mayur fight...lolz it was too entertaining...so mayurish.
loved it.
i like their dialogue...awesome.
"ye like tak thik hai but you love only me"...loved it.
very nice... loved it.
bechara pancake...mayur k ladai me wo shaheed ho gya...lolz
awesome os Valliyah.
ab ye Fari ka EIDI tha...par main EIDI nhi maang sakti...to mujhe Ganesh Chaturthi ka gift chiye..
plz jaldi karna...huh!!!

ps : Valliyah...welcome to our club. n write lots of os...lets the world knw ur talent.

Fari : thank u so much for posted it.


love u both 🤗



Edited by SujaLuvsMayur - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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vally- where r u??
plzzz cont dis OS...






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Posted: 14 years ago
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yaar kya tum log bhi 😳...!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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pls psl vali cont sooon


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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

pls psl vali cont sooon



vallyyy lz do cont it- pilishhh

dekho fiza bhi keh rahi hai
plzzz maan jao- u know it was sweet and cute... u should cont it hun
apni talent ko bahar ane do...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: valliyah

yaar kya tum log bhi 😳...!

yaar kiay tum bhi na...
itna acha likh ker blush...chalo next part strt kero
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hehe...Fizu tum bhi...n dekho to bechari Fari ka gift but woh khud LIKE nahi kar sakti...funny 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: valliyah

hehe...Fizu tum bhi...n dekho to bechari Fari ka gift but woh khud LIKE nahi kar sakti...funny 😆




😆

u know i was searching like button- pher maine notice kya r a ye tou maine he post kya ...

😆

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