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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: CutieTeju

Oh so two weeks.. Maan this is limit. Sirf do din hi dene chahiye the.😈 Wo Geet hai kab shendi lagayegi kya pata?😉😛

shetan woh hai yah fir tu? 😆😆
lets see what happens
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: preethia

loved the update...

will u b mixing up past and present or we will c her present for now...
wud like to know how they met and they got married...
pl cont soon


NO this time I will focus on one track and will wrap up the past in few updates😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi,
Nice update, pl add me to your pm list.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Its really very scary to be in a situation like this. Trapped!!

Wonder what drove Maan to do this to Geet.
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Posted: 13 years ago
yay ur updating again! :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice Part...
will wati for next...
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Posted: 13 years ago
gr8 start!
maan is such a devil!
cntinue soon!
thnx 4 the pm!:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
wowww loved the shaitan maan
n poor geet doesnt know anything happening around her
n precap is awesome
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey guys,

Finally back with another update...I will try to update during the weekend...but there are no promises...please do like/comment...

😈Shetan Ka Ghar😈
Chapter 2

Maan slammed the door shut and went to his room..."Two weeks...that should be enough for her to get over this...Its all her fault that she had to be this stubborn..." He sits on the sofa puts his feet up on the table..."I can't wait Geet..for this two weeks to be over but then again..two weeks seems way too long for me to wait...but its okay you are in my house now and I am your shetan...and shetan never follows any rules not even his own..." He smirks... " Giving you the deadline doesn't mean that I won't touch you..after all you are mine and I only I have the rights on you..I am the only that one that will be allowed to touch you whether you like it or not..." He smirks..."I just have to wait..to make you fully mine..." He laughs and goes to pour himself a drink, thinking about the first time he saw her...

After work Maan went to his gym while his gym at home is being renovated. He looked around and found everyone busy with their own thing...he puts his bag inside the locker and heads toward the squash alley as he neared the squash alley...he heard music...he stopped and listened for the source..he saw a women dressed in suit dancing to classical music...he couldn't see her face since her back was toward him but he was intrigued by her..the way she moved and danced to the beat...he quickly hid behind the door as she turned around...Maan couldn't breath as he saw her face..."wow...she is beautiful...hmm not bad Maan...you finally found a girl that deserves your attention..." he checks her out from top to bottom...he smirks..."I wonder how it will feel to touch her..." He smiles and was about to open the door but he stopped. He watched her as she stopped dancing...she goes to the corner of the room to grab a towel..he watched her each sweat drop as it rolled down her neck...he saw himself licking and kissing all the places where the sweat is touching...He was actually getting excited seeing her for the very first time...a girl didn't even had to wear a mini dress to catch his attention...he listened to her carefully talk to someone on the phone as it rang...he looked at her lips as she smiled...he wanted to lick those lips..and explore her mouth...his mouth was getting dry..he wanted to kiss her so badly...he hides as he sees her coming out humming a tune. He purposely bumps into her to feel her skin..."sorry..." she says..Maan smirks and watches her leave the squash alley..."We will meet again..." He opens his phone and makes a few phone calls and closes it after few minutes...
Geet just lies in the room crying thinking about her parents...she wanted to go home...this will never be her home..but more then her home she was worried about the deadline he gave her...two weeks..."what will he do if I don't accept him? I will never accept him as my husband..never..." She sits up in fear as she hears the door open...she sees her shetan standing there with a smirk like last night...but behind him was someone else standing there with a tray...he signals him to put the tray on the table and leave..he quickly does so with fear...she hugs her knees as Maan closes the door and looks at her with a smirk...he sits on the bed and looks at her as silent tears come down her cheek...he gets up and goes to the dressing table and picks up her mangalsutre...
Maan: I see you still haven't wore this (he holds it in front of her..she turns her face sideways...Maan gets angry and holds her by her hair..slowly pulling her up to face him...) You cannot deny the truth Geet...the more you TRY to fight with me the more you will be digging a hole in the ground for yourself. Think about it. (He lets her go as she falls on the bed on her back with her knees up...he holds her knees and pulls it down..he gets on top of her as she yelps in shock and fear..he pins both of her hands on the side...he holds both of her hands with one hand while with the other hand fondles with her...he slowly traces the outline of her curves and hears her hold her breath...he pushes her one knee up and slowly touches her ankles while bringing her lehnga up as he moves...)
Geet: Please...
Maan: Each time you make a mistake this is how you will pay, I will move a little higher next time..with or without your permission...(He holds her hair and pushes her head toward him...he ties the mangalsutre and kisses her with roughness...) Now you got 13 days to get over this...(he lets go of her and gets up to go over the tray...) Get up and eat...(he sits on the sofa..waiting for her to come...he sighs and picks her up...) You know I don't need mind canceling my gym if I get to carry you all day long...(He smirks at her...he places her on the sofa and pushes the tray in front of her)...eat...(Geet just stares at the food in front of her..she didn't want to eat...especially not in this house...) Geet don't try my patience..I will not treat you like a baby...(She gets scared and holds the food plate in her hand and looks at it...) Are you going to eat or you want me to feed you?
She looks at him as he looks at her with a serious and determined face...she quietly takes rice and curry and holds it in her hand...Maan holds her hand as she was about to put it in her mouth...
Geet: I...I am eating...
Maan: On second thought...why don't we feed each other...(He lets go of her hand and leans toward her...he looks at her..with shaky hands she brings the spoon toward his mouth..he smiles as she feed him...) hmmm by the way...I like italian for dinner and nothing heavy...(He feeds her...it was very hard for her to eat..she was holding back her tears...she couldn't cry if she wanted to...she just sits there and listens to him...she takes out another spoon toward him...as she was about to make him eat the food..she drops the food on his shirt...he looks at her with anger..)
Geet: Sss sssorrryy..
Maan: Since you dropped it you clean it...(he leans back on the sofa with his arms behind his neck...Geet puts the tray on the table and sits on the floor next to him..she holds the napkin in her hand and slowly brings it toward his chest...she starts cleaning the food from his shirt..she was about to stand up when Maan stopped her...) I need new shirt...its in that closet..
He points it toward the closet..Geet nodes her head and goes to the closet..she picks up any random shirt and brings it to him...she quietly did what he said not wanting to get him mad...she didn't want him to reduce her days..she needed them to think of a way to leave this place...he looks at the shrit and stands up in front of her..she moves back a little...
Maan: You have to change my shirt...(She shakes her head no...He pulls her by her waist...) Do you want me to decrese the days? (She looks at him and slowly starts unbuttoning his shirt...each time she unbuttoned his shirt..Maan fingers would move slowly up toward her back...she stops..Maan looks down at her...) What happened? (He smirks...she shakes her head no..and starts unbottoning the rest of her shirt...she moves toward his back and takes out his shirt from the back...she then holds the shirt in front of him...) I said you have to change my shirt...so part of that means that you have to put this shirt on me...(he bends down kissing her neck...she pulls out of the kiss and holds his one arm as she slides the sleeve into it...after she puts the shirt on him..she buttons it up...she was about to move away when Maan pulls her again...) Let me give you a prize for your help...(he turns her around so that her back was against his and closes her eyes with his hands...Geet panics...)Ssshhh (he whispers in her ears..he makes her walk...ahead and stops after few steps...and opens her eyes...she looks in front of her and sees a closet full of clothes...) They are all yours...as much as I like I can't have you walking around in our wedding clothes...I will personally dress you up after 13 days when we finally...(He leaves the sentence unfinished and opens her blouse dorri..Geet stands against the door..so that her back is covered...Maan puts his hands around her trapping her...) Change your clothes..I don't want anyone to see you without your duppata except for me...(He gives her a peck on the lips and was about to walk away)
Geet: rukhiye...(Maan stops and looks at her...she looks down..) Woh...mere parents...
Maan: Seems like you are very eager to meet your parents..(He looks at her as he leans against the closet door...) Don't worry they think you are on some trip...we will give them a surprise of our marriage later...(Geet looks at him confused..trip?) I didn't want my interuptions when we were getting married...so I had someone tell them you are going away for couple of weeks...Now they might be be mad when they see you coming back married..hell they might even disown you..but don't worry (he holds her hands) I will be with you and you will have this home to stay in...but (She looks at him...) when you get to see them will depend on you...
Geet: matlab
Maan: Matlab ki my dearest wife...if you do anything at all then I might not even let you meet them forever...and I will make them think that you are gone ..(he pulls her close) forever...you cannot leave from this house...(he lets go of her as she falls on the floor...)

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Edited by mrs.msk - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG Awesoem update Love MSK
hehe PoorGeet litter feel bad for Gee but not that much cuz i Love Enil PPL :P


this is true Awesome Part <3
so con cant wait for read more :)
Edited by -sofiya- - 13 years ago

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