MAYUR FF:LOVE AND FAITH (Epilogue on Pg No: 57) - Page 12

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Posted: 13 years ago
very nice update
I m liking Nupur's jealousy and Mayank's attitude.
A VERY HAPPy EID mubaik🤗
Thnx for the pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
I wont kill u Gul but I'm very happy after reading this update..
Nupur is getting a dose of her own medicine..and its crystal clear that she loves Mayank..but she'll take time to realize and admit it..
Update soon😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
pehli baat ID Mubarak ⭐️
dusri baat ID ke din ID chod kar update kiya great👏
teesri baat update was rocking asusual⭐️⭐️
final aur important baat Id ko celebrate karo yaar saal main ek baar aata hain update baad main bhi kar sakte hain😆 aur mujhe pm karna mat bulna main tumhare alawa aur kisi ke bhi ffs jyada nahin padti agar bhul gayi toh mujjhe bhi tumhein pm karna majburan bhulna padega😉 waise pehli baar teri ff cell se padi par comment nahin kar paayi aaj kar rahi hun
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Posted: 13 years ago

Asalam alikum guys hope u all are fine.

I am really guys for late update But I was busy in Eid na

Thank U so much for lovely response on previous part

I am really glad to see such grate response.

Finally here is the Update

Sorry For all mistakes

😉

PART 8

She was standing at her place just like a statute .Suhani came and Put her hand on Nupur's Shoulder.

Suhani: Nupur Kya hoa?

Nupur turn to face her and start crying.

Suhani hugged her and patted her back to calm her down.

Suhani (confusingly): hay Nupur Plz yar stop crying and tell me what happened?

Nupur(between sobs): He hate me suhani He hate me so much.

Suhani(confusingly): Kon Nupur?

Nupur: mayank.

Suhani: Nupur Tum pagal ho agi ho kya.acha dekho meri taraf Just look at me yar.

Nupur Saw in her eyes.

Suhani: ab Mujha batao kya hoa ha?

During sobs Nupur told her about Mayank's out burst.

Suhani: O my God Nupur ma soch rahi thi ka na jana kya hogaya ha.Tum bhi na bilkul pagal ho yar agar ap kisi ka bhi kam ma ja kar bial wajha interfare karo ga to ofcourse yar wo gusa to hoga na.

Nupur (make puppy face): To yar ma na kya kia ma to bus usay us sheena sa dor rakhna chati ho.

Suhani: Ku rakhna chati ho dor tum?

Nupur: wow o is lia ka mujha pata ha ka wo achi larki nahi ha.

Suhani: to tuma is as kya fark parat ah ka wwo kisi achi larki ak sath raha ya buri ka sath?

Nupur: asa kasa fikar na karo akhir wo mera.

Suhani: ha kjya ha wo tumhara.

Nupur(hesitantly): Dost ha or kya.

Suhani(sarcastically): acha sirf dost,For God sake Nupuur ab to accept kar lothat U love Him yar. Har wakt tmha us ki fikar karti ho ,agar wo hurt ho to dard tumha mehsos hota ha, kisi or larki ko us ka sath dekhti ho to tumha jalan hoti ha.Idiot ye pyar nahi ha to or kya ha.

Nupur(shockingly): Tum na pagal ho gai ho or ha ma hostil ja rahi ho kal milta ha.

She goes from there.

AT Hostile

Nupur was lying on the bed and thinking about suhanie's words.

Nupur (in mind): Akhir suhani ko ho kya gaya ha wo asa sab kuch ku keh rahi .Kya ma sach ma Mayank sa.nahi nhai Nupur to bhi Suhani ki tarha pagal ho gai ha kya.Wo to tum usa sheena sa bachana chati thi bus is lia asa hao par shayad ma na kuch zayada hi galat kia tha kal.I think Mjha Mayank ko sorry bolna chaye.Ha Nupur bus kal sorry bol dena phir sab thek ho jay ga.

After taking this decision She slept

Next Day At Excel

Nupur was searching for Mayank but didn't found him any where.

Nupur: O ho ab yr mayank kha chala gaya ha.

Suddenly She saw some boys standing there.

Nupur: array ha ye larka to Mayank ki class hi ka ha in hi sa poch lati ho.

Nupur goes towards those Boys.

Nupur: Hi, will u plz do me a favor.

Boy (in flirty tone): Yes dear we are always ready to favor the girls.

Nupur(hesitantly): will U plz tell me where is Mayank.

Boy: We don't know where is Mayank so what dear we are here for U na.

Nupur: Dekho Mr don't dare to flirt me.

Boy came near to her and captured her hand.

Boy: Mera jo dil chay wo karo ga kya kar lo gi tum

Nupur(scared): Plz leave my hand.

Boy: We don't hold any girl hand to leave her.

Suddenly they heard an angry voice and Nupur got relaxed to see Mayank in front of her.

Mayank(fuming with anger): Tumha samajh nahi ati ke wo kya keh rahi ha.

Boy: oy Demagh kharab na karo or yaha sa gayab ho jao foran.

Mayank: Hath choro us ka.

Boy: K kya teri girl friend lagti ha.

Mayank give him tight punch and boy fell on ground.

Mayank grabbed Nupur's hand and angrily said to boy.

Mayank: agar ayanda is ka as pas bhi nazar ay na to wo hasher karo ag ka kisi ko mo dekhan ka laik bhi nahi rho ga.

Then he takes Nupur with him from there.

Nupur was cont steering him.

Nupur(in mind): Ye kitna acha ha na or ma na is ko kitna hurt kia tha agar aj ye nahi hota to phir na jana kya hota.ma na humesha is ko galat samjha mujha is ko thanku to bolna chaiye.

Nupur stopped and said to Mayank.

Nupur: Thank U Mayank.

Mayank(angrily):Thank U Tum ma zara sa bhi sense ha ka bhi thori dar pehla kya ho sakta tha janti ho.

Nupur (astonished): per Mayank ma na kya kia?

Mayank: wao kya bat ha ap ki ap na kya kia .Kya zarorat thi tumha un larko ka pas jana ki .sab ko pata ha ka wo kitna kharab larka ha or tum .Agar ma nahi pohachta to na jana kya ho jata.

Nupur: Mujah kya pata ka wo aksa larka ha or wasa bhi tum mujh kahi mil nahi raha tha to ma na socha ka un sa poch lo.

Mayank: Mil hi to nahi raha tha na thora sabar kar lati mar to nahi gaya tha.

Nupur: Mayankkk.

Mayank: Bus or kan khol ka sun lo agar ayanda kisi anjan larka sa bat karna ki koshish kin a to acha nahi hoga.

He goes from there.

Nupur (irritatly): Sadu ,akdu kahi ka .ma to usa sorry bolna ai thi or wo ulta mujh pa gusa kar ak chala gaya .Ab us sa sorry bolti ha meri joti .balka ab to ma us sa bat hi nahi karo gi.Na karo gi bat na hoga jhagra..Ha bus yehi thek ha .Bus Nupur ji problem solve to ab thandi sans bhar or so ja.

She slept.

Days start passing in the same manner .Mayank and Nupur both start avoiding each other. But with passing time Nupur felt something missing in her life. She felt so upset. She becomes so silent .Her friends' start noticing it.

One day in canteen the whole group was cheat ring with each other but Nupur was as usual engrossed in her thoughts.

Benji: Suhani yar ye ajkal Nupur ko konsa ghum lag gaya ha itni khamosh ku hogai ha.

Dia: han yar pehla to her topic pa bat karna ka lia her wakt ready rehti thi or ab bilkul khamosh Tumha kuch pata ha kya.

Suhani: Ha shayad mujha pata ha.

Benji: To janab-e-Alia huma batana ka lia kisi shub moharat ka intezar kar rahi ha ap.

Suhani: Batao go batao gi .Pehla zara usa khud to Pata chalna do.

Dia: matlab?

Suhani: patience my child patience.

Suhani goes to Nupur and asked her.

Suhani: hay Nupur Kya hoa itni chup ku ho?

Nupur: Kuch nahi yar bus asa hi.

Suhani: acha bus asa hi to kuch nahi hota .sach sach batao usa miss kar rahi ho na.

Nupur (in her thoughts): Han .

Suhani (excitedly): ye laga sixer .Dekha ma keh rahi thin a ka tum usa pyar karti ho .Lekin tum ha ka manti hi nahi.

Nupur(came out of her thoughts): Kya keh rahi ho tum .Phir sa tumha dora par gaya na.

Suhani: Ji nahi sach keh rahi ho or jab tum usa itna pyar karti ho us ko itna miss karti ho to us sa itna jhagarti ku ho.

Nupur: Let me correct u first .Ma us sa pyar nahi karti or larti ma nahi wo mujh sa larta ha .Or abhi bhi mo sujah ka betha ha.

Suhani : Dekho Nupur tum….

There conversation stops by the girl.

Girl: hay Nupur Tumha Miss Aha dance room ma bola rahi ha.

Nupur: Ok ma arahai ho.

After few minutes nupur reached at dance classroom and also found Mayank there. Both shared a small eye look.

Miss Aha: Chalo acha hoa Nupur tum bhi agai. Mujah Tum dono sa kuch bat karni ha.

Mayur: Yes mam.

Miss aha: Dekho next week Humari Uni ma ek dance competition ho raha ha.oR ma Chati ho ak Tum Dono Humara department Ko represent karo.

Mayur: What hum dono sath kasa.

Miss Aha: Dekho Tum dono humara Depart ka best dancers ho Is lia Tum Dono .

Mayank: But

Miss aha: No if No but. This Is Final Ok Now Go From here and start practicing now.

Mayur came out of the room.

Mayank: Ma or tumhara sath dance oh No.

Nupur: to Mujha bhi tumhara sath dance karna ka koi shock nahi ha.

Mayank: Oho madam ji .Larkia mera aga pecha ghomti ha ka sirf ek dafa ma un sa bat bhi kar lo.

Nupur: Tum zara ek dafa un larkio ka mental stability test bhi kara lena tha.

Mayank: Dekho tum!

Nupur: Dekho ga to ab tum .

Mayank(take a deep breath): I think huma ab larna band kara lena chaye Ku ka Kuch bhi Ho jay dance to huma sath hi karna ha.

Nupur: ha wo to ha.

Mayank: to chala practice ka lia.

Nupur: chalo

Finally they start practicing.

Mayank place his one hand on Nupur's waste and she felt shiver run through her spine .Then they start moving according to music. Both were staring in each other eyes.

They felt different kind of emotions arising in there heart .Suddenly they felt that every thing in disappear from surrounding only leaving these disparate souls.

This beautiful moment is stopped By Nupur's loud scream.

She was sitting on Floor holding her foot.

Mayank(with concern): What happened Nupur.

Nupur: ah ah Myank mera par ma moch agai ha.

Mayank: Oh God Nupur tuuum koi kam dhang sa nahi kar sakti.

Nupur: Ha ha Mjha to shok ha na khud ko taklef dena ka Ah.

Mayank: acha acha relax upper uth ka betho ma dekhta ho.

She try to stand but fall again.

Nupur: Ah nahi utha ja raha mujh sa bohat pain ho raha ha.

Mayank immediately picked her in his arm.

Nupur: Yeh kya kar raha ho tum.

Mayank: Shut up.

He stalled her on chair and brought ointment for her and applied it on her feet.

Nupur was staring him continuously

PRECAPE:

Nupur: I Love Him I really Love him Gunjan.

Gunjan(shocked): What! Tum na mujha kabhi bataya nahi ka tum Samrat sa pyar karti ho.

I know I know guys after reading Precape u all wanna beat me

But I only wanna say one thing just wait and watch

Waiting for Your's Response

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WITH LOVE
GUL😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
pyar hua ikrar kab hoga 😉...yeh mayur bhi na ek kadam aage aate hai aur next moment 2 kadam peeche😆...i like the way mayank protects her always she too is being possessive but is yet to realize, confused soul...aur aapke precap se lagraha hai she is gonna realize her feelings probably in next update n im not gonna beat u as i know she feels for mayu n gunjan confuses it with sammy😎...but no worries our jhansi ki rani will clear her confusion ...fantastic update do come up with next super soon Gul...!
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update...👏👏👏
loved it lodsss...😊
uff ye dono hamesha ladte hi rahenge bt yehi to unki speciality hain...😉
n i love dem for dis...😆
uff ye Gunjan itni confused rehti hain na ke kya batau...😆😆
Nupur baat kar rahi thi Mayank ke barein mein aur woh samjhi samrat..pagal ladki
waiting eagerly for MayUr confession...😍
plzzz update soon...
love ya...🤗
Edited by 18anila1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago


hmmm our angle love our sadu mayank...lekin use aptai nehi chal raha hai
BY GOS mayu was so protective - he saved nups frm those bad boys and also scolded her..lol lol... ye wakei sadu hai...haye the precap was very interesting. i know nups was tlking abt mayu but ginjan misunderstood her. she thot nups was talking abt maynk ...lol lol

plz dont take too much time to update thisFF.
update soon dear...

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Posted: 13 years ago
what is this precape😲
waise nice update
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice one gul...its so good😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thank god Nupur understood that she has fallen in love with Mayank... Whats with Gunjan she is always thinking about Samrat...
Thank you so much for the update and pls update the next chapter soon.

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