Jannat ~ Heaven in Hell~ MG FF part 15 updated

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Sreya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: Netz
How can a human being can be sooo cruel... how can they????😲
ur story is a perfect refection of terrorism to its hardest core...
cruelty n love balances dis stry too well...👏
Updt soon...

thnks 4 d colorful cmnt..😆

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Sreya

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: arushi_05
hey sreya
awesome part omg preeti & aman dead
& asim khans hand didnt even trrebled in killing them
& the blast , really i woud be so pethatic senireo
really the terrosim is the worst thing in world
& i cant belive how can a personkill others & stil will slep in peace
really u r an awesome writter & ur imaganition is really great
thanx for the pm
lovee arushi

thank alottt Arushi...🤗 love ur cmnt... 😳😉

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Sreya

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Posted: 13 years ago

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hey galz... thnks 4 ur supports... 😊I wanted to reply every1 but i am allowed to be in front of my PC only for lmtd hrs.😭 So either i can reply you or post an update.I believe u prefer the 2nd 1.👍🏼

i'm posting d next part... dnt 4gt to cmnt...

Here is the 5th part of Jannat ... hope u like it... and let me remind u the terrorism I have depicted here is totally a work of fiction... no real issue or incident is connected with it

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part: 5

Aasim Khan threw a glass jar on the floor and shouted at the highest pitch of his voice.

Aasim: isske piche zaroor uss major ka haat hain.. uss ke paas meri bahen hai

Chief: Aasim'..

Aasim: main usse maar dalunga

He picked up a revolver from the table and walked towards the door.

Chief: Aasim.. ruko...

Chief blocked his way.

Aasim: rasta chodiye

Chief: yeh major ne nahin kiya..

aapko kaise pata? Aasim said with doubt.

Chief: abhi yeh janna zaroori nahi hai mujhe kaise pata chala' janna zaroori hain ki isske peeche kaun hai?

He thought for a moment

Chief: main pata lagata hoon. Aur tum major ko kuch nahi karoge' ab jao..

Aasim Khan left with anger.

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Maan was restless. He couldn't think anything. He couldn't understand how it happened. Preeti died two-three days ago. Now Geet is missing. He and Apurva were going to the shop from where she was kidnapped.

Only one thing he could think was who could kidnap her. Is it the people of Aasim Khan? May be they kidnapped her cause they had seen her with him. Or it's the other group. May be they have kidnapped her to take revenge from Aasim Khan. Ha couldn't think any more.

They reached the bazaar. All were crowded in their shop. Geet's mother was there crying out of her heart. Other ladies were consoling her. All were silent. An expression of pain was on everyone's face.

Maan entered the shop. He looked at the place. Everything was at its own place. There was statue of his face in one corner of the shop. He remembered the night he had spent with her here. He crunched his palm. No, he can't let happen anything to her.

They started to interrogate

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"We had sure news. We informed about the plan of Aasim Khan on right time. But we couldn't stop it to happen. The bus was not late. They changed the targeted place." All men were standing around his table glancing downwards. "It means we have got a double spy among us." He started to spin a revolver on the table.

"lekin hum me se koi aisa nahin kar sakta." A man spoke in timid voice.

"hum me se hi koi hain. Aur mujhe pata hai wo insaan kaun hai."

He stopped to spin the revolver. "mujhe pata hai wo kaun ho sakta hai' samne ao." He stopped for a moment.

"latho ke bhoot bato se nahin maante." He pointed the revolver towards a man and shoot without hesitation.

The man fell on the floor. Dead!

"yeh aapne kya kiya?" man who was standing next to the dead man asked with confusion.

"yeh hi tha wo. Kuch dero me Aasim Khan ko uss ladki ke baade me batane jaa raha tha." He replied with stone cold voice.

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Two days went in interrogation. But none could say anything. Some of them said she was standing in front of the shop. A car came dragged her inside and vanished from the sight within a few seconds.

It was a starry night. Maan was sitting on his jip unmoved. 'Geet where are you?' He said in a broken voice. His vision was going hazy with oozing up tears. He get startled in the vibration of his mobile. It was Apurva.

Maan: what?

Apurva: we have found the girl. Some one left her in front of her house.

Maan didn't waste a moment and started his jip.

Maan: I'm on my way to her home.

He cut the phone.

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People gathered in front of her house. All were relieved to see her unhurt. Maan reached her home. All of the people started to leave slowly seeing him. He entered her room. She was sitting on the bed with her mother. Seeing him Geet's mother went outside of the room.

Maan: Geet..

He went towards her and hugged her.

Maan: Geet tum thik to ho na? tumhe wo log kuch kiya to nahin..

His concern, anxiety could be understand by his voice.

Geet: main thik hoon..

Maan released her from his embrace. He cupped her beautiful face in his hands.

Maan: wo log tumhe kuch kiya to nahi na?

Geet: nahin. Koi mujhe chua tah nahi.

Maan: kya hua tha.. mujhe sab kuch batao.. sab kuch'

Geet explained everything to him'

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Geet was sitting inside her shop thinking about Preeti and how did it happen. Suddenly a car came and dragged her inside. She does not know where they had taken her. They blind folded her and drag her in a room. They tied her hands and legs and put her their for a very long time.

After a long time may be a whole day She heard a voice.

"main jo puch raha hoon uska sach sach jawab do."

Geet: aap log kya chahate hai mujhse? Maine kya kiya? Mujhe chod dijiye.

The Man: chod denge. Bas hume sabkuch sach batado.

Geet: aap meri aankho ki upar se ye patti hata di jiye. Main waise bhi dekh nahi sakti.

But he didn't show any intention to believe her. He chuckled and then holds her hand making her wince in pain.

The man: mujhse hoshiari karne ki kousis mat karo. Nahi to anjaam bohot bura '

He was interrupted by another man from behind spoke.

"ye sach kahe rahi hain. Kuch dino pahele ek blust me'.."

After a few seconds he removed her blind fold.

The man: ab mai jo puch raha hoon uska jawab do. Apne bhai ke vare me batao.

Geet: Aasim bhai ke vare me?

The man: hmm. Jiske naam se yaha ke har ek'

Geet [shouted]: nahin. Wo mere bhai nahin hai. Aapko koi galtfamli hui.. aap to usse jaante tak nahi hai'

The man: acha? Chalo I trust you. Yeh batao Major Maan Singh Khurana ke saath tumhara kya rista hain?

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Geet stopped and gulped her saliva.

Maan: aur tumne kya bataya? Haan Geet? Bolona tumne kya jawab diya?

He was going restless to know the answer.

Geet: maine kaha, (she paused for a moment)..maine kahan mai unse muhabbat karti hoon..

Maan looked at her he wasn't able to say anything. Finally he managed to say

Maan: acha? Aur tumhe darr nahin laga?

Geet: darr? Yahape to sabhi darr darr ke jite hai. Agar dil ki baat kehne se bhi darne lage to jiyenge kab?

Maan couldn't think a girl like her could be this strong. Even after being an Army officer he was afraid to voice his feelings. From the first day he was attracted towards this girl. Attraction changes into like, liking into some deeper feelings but he wasn't clear enough to his mind to give it a name. But this valley girl has announced it even in front of an unknown danger. It clears his mind. Yes no doubt he loves her. He loves her, want her need her.

He couldn't resist himself. He pulled her chin towards his face slowly and looked at her crystal clear eyes. His eyes moved towards her lips.

He pressed his lips on hers.

Geet's body shivered with unknown feelings. She clutched his left shoulder tightly. He sucked her lips, licked her lips with immense passion. She didn't stop her. She tried to kiss him back, though she was completely amateur in this. Maan's tongue inside her mouth guided her well. They were totally lost into each other.

They pulled back from each other after a long time breathing heavily. He ran his fingers in her hair gently and kissed all over her face like crazy.

Maan: I love you Geet. I love you. Main tumse bohot pyar karta hoon.

He went on repeating the same lines while showering kisses on her face. He pulled her towards him once again and entangled his tongue with hers. They locked their lips in a never ending kiss. Slowly kiss grew more and more intense and passionate.

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It was almost 1am. The atmosphere was as silent as it could be. A man entered Geet's house. He looked all over the house with great affection. Slowly he went to Geet's room. She was sleeping peacefully.

He didn't want to disturb her so he turned back to left the room.

Geet woke up by a sound of footsteps.

Geet: Aasim bhai kya aap ho?

He stopped hearing her voice. He wanted to answer her so desperately. No. but he couldn't. He couldn't let her know that he is here. Pain lumped in his throats.

Geet: mujhe pata hai.. aap yah ap hi ho.

She stopped and took a deep breath.

Geet: main aapko dekh nahi sakti par main janti hoon aap yaha hai aur mujhe sun rahe hain'.. Ap itne din kaha the?Aapko pata hai ab Preeti aur Aman'

She couldn't finish. Her voice broke. A drop of tear rolled down from her eyes.

She waited for a few minutes. But none replied to her. She cried for a few minutes, her cry became sob and then it faded away. She waited for an answer but it didn't come. She sighed thinking it must be her fault. She went back to sleep.

Aasim Khan couldn't stop himself from crying. For him his sisters lost his eyes. He killed Preeti and Aman. Preeti whom he loved just like his own sister and Aman who was like his own brother. He had killed them. He hated himself for that. He wanted this to end. He remembered once they used to be a happy big family. He, his sister, their mother, Preeti, Aman and' and Nazneen.

Nazneen' he murmured the name. No he couldn't be weak. Whatever he is doing is for his own land and for his own people. He wiped his tears and left the house silently.