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So I wrote this thing ages ago! :P When the promo of Piya exposing Abhay came out! This is how I would have wanted her to get her memory back but.. ya.. :P Oh well! Read on :)

Remember When - AbhIya

"So you are going to kill her too?" She spat at him.
"What the hell are you on about Piya? Have you lost your mind?" He scrunched his nose in confusion.
Her heart skipped a beat as she saw that look on his face, but she remembered that he was a murderer. Getting back in the right state of mind, she seethed, "Quit it Abhay. I know you killed Dipanita aunty! So please, don't fake your innocence in front of me. I know your truth Abhay, and it will be out in the open soon." With that said, she turned on her heels and walked towards her car. She wondered why she never listened to her sisters who always told her that he was dangerous, that he was not the right guy to be with. How could she have fallen in love with him?
Shaking her head, she continued walking. All of a sudden, she was swept of her feet and was being... wait, what the hell? She was flying? She shut her eyes tight as the air whipped her curls and ruthlessly hit her face. She opened her eyes again and felt dizzy. The last thing she remembered was wondering who was making her run at the speed of light and then she passed away.
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"How could you do this to her? Are you out of your mind Maithli? I can't believe you..." His voice trailed as he looked over his shoulders to see her slowly regain consciousness. "Why did you have to give her that life back?"
Maithli stood there with a knowing look on her face. "I have a reason Abhay, and-"
"Abhay..." She murmured and in a fraction of a second, he was next to her, by her side.
"Piya? Are you okay Piya?"
Clutching onto her head, she sat up with the help of Abhay. She squinted to see him staring at her, worry etched on his face. "Abhay... I... I don't feel good." She whispered. The head-ache was worse than any pain she had ever experienced. She shut her eyes tight, frowning, hoping the pain would go away. As if the pain wasn't killing her already, a series of sharp pain shot down the back of her head, spine and her hands. She screamed and his arms immediately flung around her, holding her into a tight embrace, as if to protect her. As much as he wanted to, he couldn't remove this pain from her body. It was something he just couldn't stop. What was done was done, now he'd have to face the consequences.
She tried to open her eyes, but shut them back again as images of the past flooded her mind. She saw herself walking down the road asking for the directions to the college. That was the point when she couldn't remember anything after it, but this time, everything came flooding back. She saw herself walking in the jungle and then a gust of wind blew her hair. She turned to see someone zoom past her. He was in a black vest. She stood there in the college grounds with Misha and Tracker next to her. He stepped out of his black car with his shades on and arrogantly walked past everyone, not even sparring her a glance. They both were in the drama room. She stood on the balcony, playing the role of Juliet while he played Romeo. She felt dizzy, her body swayed and she fell in his arms. She stood transfixed on her spot as she saw her boyfriend Kabir almost being punched in the face by him. He looked into her eyes as she softly shook her head, begging him not to punch Kabir. He was knocked out by Kabir and she screamed "Abhay!" She stood in the snow staring at his face in the moon lit sky. He walked up to her and kissed her. She was dreaming.
All the memories flashed in her mind, her past came back to her and suddenly, the throbbing headache disappeared. She smiled through her tears and closed eyes as she remembered those precious memories with him. Maya's words suddenly made sense. "You both were the most happening couple in college." Of course they were, they had been together, always by each other's side through the thick and the thin.
He saw her smiling and he read her thoughts. She knew he was a vampire, the creature of the dark, yet she chose to smile through those memories. Was their love really that strong?
She saw herself standing in the snow in the jungle in a black and red Victorian gown, crying hysterically as he hugged her and then she fainted. "Abhay!"Her eyes flung opened as she screamed his name and hugged him tight, as if to never let go.
"I am here Piya. I am here." He softly patted her head, trying to reassure her that he'd never leave her.
"Don't ever leave me." She whispered and she felt him nod.
"I am not going to. I promise."
"I love you Abhay."
"I love you too." He forgot about the pain he may cause her, he forgot about Maithli standing there, he forgot that he had to fight the Khuranas aka the werewolves. The clouds gave way to the moon to shine on them, as if to shower it's blessings on them. And all he did was hold on to her and remembered when...
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Like it or not? Do let me know 😳 Comments mean a lot! :D

Also, if you do have the time to, then please do comment on my OS Gallery :)

Lots of Love
Jyotika
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Very well written. Really like the title. :)
I hope like your OS Piya gets her memory back soon. Cant wait for such a scene to happen where Piya just runs into Abhays arms and holds onto her like its there last...😍
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thank you 😳

Originally posted by: Ameres

Very well written. Really like the title. :)

I hope like your OS Piya gets her memory back soon. Cant wait for such a scene to happen where Piya just runs into Abhays arms and holds onto her like its there last...😍


Thank you so much 😳 Good to know you liked the title :) Means a lot :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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really awesome 👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow
awesome
that was really great
plz continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Jyotika..the OS was beautiful..just beautiful beyond word..👏 keep up the good work hun..and of course do write more and soon!😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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This O.S. is really beautiful sweets. Aww, truly touching piece of art work. U should write more often.🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thank you 😳

Originally posted by: CleviveDsouza

wow

awesome
that was really great
plz continue soon


Thank you 😳 Good to know you liked it :D Sorry, I am not continuing this :( Sorry!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..SheWolf..

Jyotika..the OS was beautiful..just beautiful beyond word..👏 keep up the good work hun..and of course do write more and soon!😳


Thank you so much :) Glad you liked it. Your comment means a lot :) About writing more, I have completely lost touch with PKYEK.. So ya.. besides my sister updating me about what is happening, I have no clue :P So ya.. don't get to watch much.. so won't be able to write much either. Sorry :(

Originally posted by: syria2014

This O.S. is really beautiful sweets. Aww, truly touching piece of art work. U should write more often.🤗


Thank you Syria 🤗 Means a hell lot to me :) I do write a lot.. but I just don't write on Abhiya! 😆 Supernatural world is a bit of a hard thing to write on! So ya! :P

Originally posted by: missglam


Superb os
loved it
brilliantly written


Thank youu 😳 Glad you liked it :) Thanks again :D
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wonderful!! pls pm me wen u upd8!!

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