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Posted: 13 years ago
#61
love new side of maan
congrats new FF
super concept
i would love to read
waiting for update
thank yu so much
all the best simi
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Posted: 13 years ago
#62
waiting ...how much time it will take?
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Posted: 13 years ago
#63
Very interesting concept. continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#64
Hey guys,

First I would like to say WOW...I NEVER thought I would recieve this many good comments and reviews😳😳

Sorry I cannot reply back to everyone as I am at work 😆😆 so enjoy this update 😆😆

😈SHETAN KA GHAR😈
Chapter 1

Geet woke up suddenly and sat on the bed, it was 4 in the morning. She hoped all of this was a nightmare but she soon came into realization when she realized where she is at. The food was still untouched and she still wore her wedding dress. She looked to her side and was relived to not find him next to her or in the room. She quietly got off the bed and walked toward the door. She peeked outside the door and was happy to find it quiet and dark. She closed the door and walked to the dressing table. She took out her bangles and all the jewelry one by one. She beds down to take out her anklet and looks at herself in the mirror. She notices her mangalsutre and touches it. She takes it out and places it on the table.

"I will not stay here anymore. I don't consider this marriage. What is a marriage to him is a joke to me." (She quietly went toward the door and slightly opened it. She peeked her head out of the door making sure no one was there. She picks up her lehnga and makes her way down the stairs making sure not to make any possible noises. She kept looking front and back for any sign of him. She looks back in fear when she heard some noises. "Geet you are just imagining things..no one is here..He is probably sleeping somewhere..."

She looks at the door, her hands tremble as she reaches for door. As she was about to open the door someone holds her hand. Maan stands there holding a lighter in his hand in front of Geet. He smirks and brings her hand that was on the door knob toward his lips. She snatches her hand before he could even kiss it and moves back a little putting both of her hands behind her. Maan steps toward her with anger. She kept moving back and now scared to see him looking at her with a deathly glare. She hits something hard and realizes she is cornered.

"where are you going?"

"I want to go home.."

Maan turns off the lighter scaring Geet. She stood against the wall as if her life depended on it. She jumps a little when he slams his hands on either side of Geet against the wall in anger. Even though it was dark she could feel his anger in the room. She felt him coming closer and closer until there was no room between them. She stood there stiff as he felt his body weight against her. He makes her face him..

"You are home..." (The lights in the living room go on...)

"No..this is not my home...this is your home..."

"Our home...now that you are married..what is mine is yours and whatever is yours..." (He eyes her lips and looks at her chest...he smirks) "is mine..." (she turns her face the other side)

"I don't want anything of yours.."

"Really? I want everything of yours..." (He kisses her neck...she wanted to move but couldn't...)

"please leave me...I want to go..."

Maan moves back in anger after hearing her. Geet moved sideways away from him. Maan holds her by her arm and pushes her towards him...

"I told you before and I will tell you again for the LAST time..I will NEVER leave you or let you go..." (He looks down at her and then looks back up at her with anger...) "Where is your mangalsuture?" (she screams in pain as Maan digs his nails in her arm...tears escape from her eyes...)

"woh..main..." (He pins her one arm behind her back and with his other hand behind her back pushes her toward him...)

"Don't try to unleash a monster in me Geet...I don't think you will be able to handle it...I am trying very hard to be nice and give you some time..." He looks at her with anger as she tries to move out of his grip..."Stop moving...or else it will hurt you even more..." She stops and looks at him..."Tell me what problems you have..." He pushes her more to get her attention..."if NOT then I have my ways..." He lets go of her arm but before she could move away from her..he holds both her arms again and kisses her lips...he was holding in a way so that she couldn't move even if she tried...He moves down to her neck..."I see you have made it very easy for me by taking off your jewelry..." He bits her shoulder followed by a kiss. Geet suppressed her scream and closed her eyes tightly waiting for him to finish off. "ARE you going to tell me or I could take it you like this..." He moves her blouse a little from her shoulder...

"Woh..." (Maan stops and looks at her...waiting for her to continue...) I...uhh...don't know you and I don't consider this marriage..."

He lets go of her arms and steps back...he smirks at her..."bas? Or is there more?"

Geet was very confused now..one minute he was angry and the next he was nice...she didn't know which side should she trust of him...and nodes her head no...He picks her up surprising Geet...She wriggles in his arms like a fish out of water. He holds her even tighter giving her a beware warning from his eyes...

"Now let me answer to whatever you stated..." (He sits on the sofa with Geet on his lap holding her securely...He trails her face with his long fingers making her shiver...) "you have your whole life to get to know me and as for this marriage the truth will still remain the same weather you believe it or not.." (He traces her lips with his thumb adding a little pressure on them as he moves his thumb causing Geet to hiss in pain as he touches her bruise from last night kiss..) "just understand one thing Geet...I won't tell you that I will wait for you till you are ready..if you think I will do that just because I didn't do anything last night then you are highly mistaken...I give you two weeks to get over this" (She looks at him with tears..he wipes them away) "As for these tears they won't work on me.." (He brings her closer again with anger...) "One more thing...DON'T you EVER bring up the topic of going away or even think about leaving...even if you succeed in leaving this house I will find you..(He stands up while still holding her...) Let me give you tour of YOUR home..."

He stops at their room after giving her the tour..nothing registered inside her brain..everything seemed so surreal to her...she was looking at the house that held no meaning to her. He turned her life upside down ever since he came into her life. She wanted everything the way it used to be and how it used to be. She wanted her friends and family back not then hell that he calls home. This is not her home...

"my parents..." (He looks at her as he drops her on the bed and goes toward the door. Geet watches him hoping that he takes her to meet her parents. She wanted to see them to know if they are ok. She wondered what they know anything about her or what they are going through right now. She wanted to reach out her hand to say something but was scared of his response. She has seen so many different shades of him already and she didn't know what else she would have to see. He was very unpredictable and that scared her. She was scared that if she asks any wrong questions he would snap at her again but she has to find a way to escape from this hell house and from this shetan that made her life hell...)

"remember Geet two weeks and don't do anything stupid or else I won't hesitate to make you fully mine right then and there..." (He slams the door shut...Geet lies on the bed crying...thinking about her past...)

Precap: "Are you going to eat or you want me to feed you?" He smirks at her...

P.S. I know it was short but like my all other fan fics...I will try to make it longer as time passes and as the story progresses😳
Edited by mrs.msk - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#65
Maan really IS a shaitan😆

I wonder what happened between these 2 in the past that led to these unusual circumstances today😕

Pweety pweety pweez update soon (like maybe tonight?😳)

I'm liking this story...its very original.😉
Edited by XXaquafireXX - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#66
AWESOME!
LOVED IT SO MUCH
cont son!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#67
maan bana shaitaan...haha...he seems different...two weeks only...wha t if still geet doesnt agree...continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#68
awwsome, loved it again... plsss continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#69
awesome
loved maan d baddie shaitan!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#70
great update!..

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