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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: capricornFA

sorry for late reply😆

first of congratulations 2 me for d first reply on ff🤣 n u knw shivi im so lucky dat first ever in my life im on no.1 on comentin on someone ff which is of urs 🤗

so on day before yesterday on urs high demand im unresin d post😆

well i had seen many scenes in serials, films etc even read many times in words showin feelin of love's pain but ur words has so much strength dat one one's feel d same ach just hittin ur heart directly👏 👏

poor nupur has same feelin now and dat is d feelin dat one has 2 cope up individualy,its a feelin dat someone is directly piercin a dagger into heart(though medically its a sympathetic reflex activity🤣)


this d main problm wid d girls dat dey take boys little concern and affection into luv and think dat he is intersted in her

though i knw mayank havent done it intentionally😳,waitin for d part wen mayank will fall for her 😳but for now feelin bad for nupur


luv u sweetheart 🤗for providin us 2 read such a wonderful piece of skill🤗




yay u commented first🥳
unresv toh tenu karna hi tha😉😆

@blue: i m glad i could achieve that😊

thanks fari...love ya🤗

Originally posted by: aysha1989

I'm feeling bad for Nupur... 😭 I just could feel her pain...
You write so well! Thank you so much for the update!



awww...thnks :)
tune yaha res maara tha😆

Originally posted by: aysha_mayur

Awww Shivi I really felt bad for Nupur...I could understand her pain

and Mayank has no idea about Mupur's pain...and I sense some confrontation or big fight is approaching
Update maar jaldi...and happy happy update now😳



aww shu🤗...well keep reading further😳

thnk:)


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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Fantasia.

ohhh!! .. this is painful!
it hurts when u expect someone to act the way u assume, forgetting that he never promised to act that way!
DAMNIT it's just pain and tears

continue soon jiger! ❤️



sure fantu🤗

Originally posted by: AmyArTiMayUr

One sided love...it totally sucks!!!

But it also makes one stronger after they get over it...of course here it wont have to be one-sided for long (i hope)...Nupur's pain is so evident...hope she doesnt have to suffer for much longer...

Waiting for the next update...dont make me wait long :)



yeah one sided love sucks😆...thanks amy😳

Originally posted by: sumonetolub

i can completely identify with nupur here...its painful but time always heals everything...wonderful update 😊



thnx:)

Originally posted by: Payal-15

Shivi it was as expected...painful n heart wrenching😔


its so bad when u get attached to a person so much and then u get to know that its just you and it feels like a fool...how cautious Nupur was and how easily she got swayed by his charm and words...uhhh...its bad to see her crying over a developing love when its the most beautiful thing u come across



aww pallu🤗...it does hurts a bit!



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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: stargurl34

omg i finally caught up, sry i was gone for a while ! OMG my heart completely goes out to nupur, she needs to be strong and stop chasing after mayank. I hope he realizes that Belle is not the one for him. I would love to see how he pines for nupur and wins her back. Poor girl, i almost felt my heart clench for a second when I read that mayank was kissing Belle. Continue soon girl ! and as always, I still maintain, ur writing is phenomenal !



thnks kiran:)

Originally posted by: mayurlove

Nice update

Bt I m feeling bad for Nupur.😭
Thnx for pm😊



thnks:)

Originally posted by: dj_adnanss

beautiful style of writing.but do make mayank realize his love for nupur pleaseee. 😔



aww hira🤗...surely u'l read it relaxed now after getting my hint;)

Originally posted by: palz_ArTi4ever

its high time mayank should learn to distinguish between attraction n love...he should realize that what he mistakes as love is mere attraction n obsession only, nothing more that that, n should come back to nupur b4 its too late..on the contrary, its high time nupur should start maintaining distance 4m mayank, bcos nothing can b greater than self respect n dignity, not even love..and she shouldn't give away her feelings...not atleast infront of the heartless people who wont even care to pay attention to her numbness..she has run enough behind him,now its time he should start hving the feeling that something amiss, n value her presence in his life...continue soon shivi...😊u r a wonderful writer..



thanks pallabi😳
hmm..lets see how it unfolds:)


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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: kirti123

feeling bad for nupur

continue soon😊



thnks:)

Originally posted by: -SupriyaluvsMN-

🥺😭
so its one sided love...
i feel so bad 4 nups!!!!😭
cont soon!
thnx 4 d pm!🤗



aww supriya🤗..well lets see:)

Originally posted by: Annu_Arti_Mayur

Its so heart wrenching...🥺
Awww...shiviii...ye kya kr diya yaar...poor nupur..😭
i m really feeling her pain...
dammnnn...this is the problem with girls...they expect much lot from boys...n end up being hurt...apnay ap se assume kr leti hain...that may be he like her or luvs her...n i so hate this...!!

all i would say is continue soon dear...u r writing it brilliantly sweetyy...⭐️👏
God Bless❤️🤗
Annu..😊

😊



thank u anu di..LY too🤗
yup that's d prob with girls..lol😆

Originally posted by: mayur_eternal

I just feel like strangling Mayank..
His actions werent intentional but it had already created ruckus in Nupur's heart..and I hate his gf😡
Hope Nupur copes up with it



thnkx:)

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: You-Know-Who

Its the girl's fault.

Mayank didnt tell her that he was interested in her. Mayank didnt even hint at having any feelings for her. Then why does she misbehave if he doesnt feel the same way?

Seriously girls hope for too much and then they feel heart broken. 👎🏼

Nicely written though. Flowed smooth throughout. :)



that's my personal view point too
thanks:)

Originally posted by: love.mayurarti

Wonderful update

Not happy 2c her sad..felt bad fr her
Cont soon



thnkx:)

Originally posted by: -Faria-

awww shivi- it was heart wrenching update
ahhh it was only one sided love-sighhh
felt bad for nups
shivi - u r just brilliant hun
loved ur writing so much..
update next part soon



thnx faria:)

Originally posted by: Nikita-Sharma

Omg...this was so pain ful..I mean seriously with every line/ thought Nupur felt...I could feel her pain too! Poor gal...but m sure Mayank wasnt pretending ti b gud n all..hes actually gud...lets see how u take the story ahead!

Anyways u r too gud! seriously..love this ff!! do cont soon ...thanks fr the pm :D



thnkx:)

thnkx:)


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Posted: 14 years ago
Part 13

"Nupur."

I turned around. There was no one in sight except the lone cat in the corner. But I had heard a familiar voice calling my name. I shrugged and went back to press the button for the elevator to come down. Who the hell was holding it for so long? Need to complain to the apartment secretary.

"Hey Nupur."

The roaring engine of his bling red SUV stopped. He came out twirling the keys in his fingers. I tried to get my dropped jaw back to its original position. Too late , I failed to see the signs of the day with the elevator stuck up. It couldn't get worse with him being here.

"Hey. Did you forget your way back?"

"I very well remember your place. Was just passing by so thought to catch up with ya."

"You shouldn't have bothered at all. What wrong can happen to me?"

"You aren't picking my calls for the last three days!"

"I was busy in work."

"A text would have taken…hmmm…..less than 30 seconds out of your busy schedule."

"You have seen me now. Satisfied?"

"Why are you taking my words in the wrong sense? I felt as if you are ignoring me."

"If you have already jumped to conclusions I don't see the need for debate."

"I am not being judgmental. What's up with you girl? You don't seem okay."

"I am doing fine."

"You look sick. Take care of yourself."

"There is nothing wrong with me!"

"If something is bothering you I am here. If you feel you can share."

"Are you done?"

"Last thing what's wrong with you today?"

"Nothing!! No wait. Actually everything is wrong with me. My mood, this place, the timing – all are wrong. I am puzzled to see a right guy wasting his precious moments of life amidst all wrongs."

"I was asking in general. Can't see the reason what I did to piss you off."

"How can you Mr. Right? It's me who's always wrong."

"I really think you need rest."

"Just stop bothering me. Okay?"

"I thought we were friends now. What I did to deserve this?"

"You can't do anything wrong, Mr. Right. It's me at fault."

"I can't believe it! ...No you can't run away like this."

"Let go off the stop button you idiot!"

He had pressed the button to stop the elevator which was finally after eons on its way down.

"I was waiting for the elevator since the past 10 minutes!"

"Waiting 5 more minutes isn't going to bring in a catastrophe. Tell me what wrong have I done!"

"Don't ya understand English? Let me say it slow. I am FINE. You can't do anything WRONG. Just stop poking your damn nose into others business. And let go off the button!"

"You know something. You are right. I was wrong to think you are my friend."

He inched closer. Instinctively I stepped back. He removed his fingers from the button which was holding the lift to ransom in a huff and walked away.

……………………………………………………………………………………………….

I entered inside my room banging the door en route. I picked up my cell. 11 missed calls. I had already seen them. I flung it on the dresser out of my sight. The mirror cracked. I groaned.

I do not have the supermodel body that men lust after. Good the stupid mirror cracked. Tired I slacked into my chair.

"What you have done with the room? It's not the same anymore."

"Liu you are back! Well that's nothing. I just missed my target. So did you get him?"

"Nupur I searched the entire downtown market at Chinks. Sebastian is out of town for few days."

"Oh no. Are you sure pining all to him is a good idea? We are uncertain of his return."

"I was told he'll be back in the most two-three days. Nupur he's an expert in all this hacking stuff. Plus we don't want to get caught in legal tangle. He can take care of all the hassles."

"I m tired of unable to control things the way I want. What if he comes late or backtracks? It's just so hard to see that moron Morgan back in the hospital. I hate his look. I need to do something ASAP."

"Dear have some patience. You were holding up so beautifully."

"I am sick of being nice to people if they don't reciprocate."

"Just a few days more. Surely you can wait. Anyways you are ill or what? Your face is so pale and you have got saggy eyes. These days you are so quiet in the hospital too."

"Good lord NO. I am totally fine. I think I could have handled this better on my own."

"Oh..I didn't know my help was not needed here. Sorry to bother you then."

"Liu…I didn't mean that…I am…."

She picked up her bag and walked away through the door.

"….sorry…….."

Right walk away from me! Everyone just leave me alone. I am destined to be a loner. I don't need anyone. I opened my laptop to search some good hackers but I was lost. Nothing made real sense to me. It was no use.

I snuggled deep into my pillow. I tried crying myself to sleep. But sleep evaded my company too leaving me all alone to stare at the blank ceiling above.


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Posted: 14 years ago
her dis reaction was suspected...i knew dat dis will totally change her behaviour...cz any severe grief totally changes d personality of a person...but i knw nupur she is so strong dat she will definitely cope wid it😳

luv u shivi🤗 🤗...again amazin update😳

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Posted: 14 years ago

Shivi i can feel how Nupz is going in a sad zone feeling all alone when nothing is under her control...

n Mayank tried to get her friendship back...but Nupz is helpless too
Edited by Payal-15 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
That Nupur is someone I know very well - me! 🤣

Nice update!
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update...Nupur is in lot of pain..hmmm..so MN friendship is gone too..:(...waiting to read ahead..!
do continue soon:)

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