~* KRIYA FF Letting You go? ~* Part 2 on Page 9 - Page 6

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Posted: 14 years ago
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It was awesomešŸ‘.Please continue it and Thanks for the pm
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very nice i do not knw abt the show but by reading ff i luv it
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It,s awsomne priya darling mindblwoing love the beginning and loved the way he was gum in her thoughts enjoyed reading each and every part loved it plz continue will b waiting for next and thanks for the pm sorry my like button not working it ,s sayting there is any error bt loved it after all it,s my kriya and u wrote it brilliantly
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Moved from Pratigya forum to FF forum upon request :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanks everyone for your lovely comment will update tonight 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sorry for delay and this Update is dedicated to Mitu di for her wonderful VM's 😳





Takur Niwas

Everyone was having their breakfast except Krishna who was getting ready for office while Amma and kesar was serving them then Krishna silently leaves from there without seeing them but when Komal saw him leaving and she stops him.

"Baba have your Breakfast please"

"No Komal I have to a important meeting and i don't eat in this home or have any relationship with them except Dadi and Kesar Bahuji" Krishna said venomously while everyone bow their head in shame.

"What about me?" Komal cutely pouted at her brother then he gave her genuinely after long time said "Do I need to say?" then hugged her and alone tear flowed.

"Please for my sake I have breakfast with me and I will be leaving tomorrow you don't want to spend time with me?" Komal asked tearfully while her family members were confused they thought she came for a week.

"Okay but only for you" he said and hugged his sister while everyone was shocked and stunned because after that faithful day he broked all ties with his family and he doesn't speak with them unless it is business oriented.

Both of them came to dining table and everyone was happy to see their Baba having breakfast after long time then Amma said Kesar and Piyasiya to make his favorite Kheer then Krishna interrupted her venomously by saying " I am only eating breakfast only for my sister sake but don't think I had forgiven you or anyone else for everything " Amma couldn't control her tears and left from there to kitchen while others ignored Amma and started their food.

"Komal I thought you are leaving after a week " her father asked her Saajan Singh asked her

" Oh that actually Pratigya is coming tomorrow night from her college and I want to spend time with her also you can't imagine how much eagerly i am waiting for going to MY home Bauji " Komal said happily while other were stunned and shock as if floor slip under them and no one was happy with it except Kesar and Dadi while Krishna was still in shock and mixed feelings rushed through his veins happiness, sad, jealousy, agony and tiny bit of hope but ignored everything.

" What!! When did she leave Allahad and you never said us " her dad asked furiously before they could say anything to Komal her phone was ringing and it was Arushi then she was about to get up to answer the call but her father indicated to attend the call here only then she on'ed her speaker

"Hello"

"Bhabhi Bhabhi Bhabhi Bhabhi"

"What Happened Arushi is everything alright?"

"Bhabhi when are you coming home ?"

"Why Aru ?"

"Nothing Guess What"

"You know I am really bad at guessing" Komal pouted while Arushi giggled

"Bhabhi Rolli Didi came home and we are having party tonight and --" before Arushi could say anything Adarsh pulled phone from her said "Don't come home soon we are fine without you and enjoying" Komal angrily huffed then said " I am coming home tonight whether you like it or not it's my home too " Adarsh ,Rolli and Arushi laughed at her childishness and they said "We miss you and come soon also they are coming to see her tonight "

"I am breakfast now I will call you later" she cut her call and looked at everyone who was staring at her curiously and her father gritting his teeth then asked her " will you care to answer my question "

Komal coolly replied " oh yes bhauji it happen being 3 months ago and why should I say or discuss MY family matter with you all and it's her dream which she achieved finally and we are proud of her " her parents were not pleased with answer while Krishna left from there to his room and rest of breakfast no one spoke.

Krishna came to his room then took his office bag, wallet and laptop then lock the door and when he reached door his father called him

"Baba"

"yes Bhauji"

"don't forget about that deal and court case also date is near to your wedding"

Krishna looked stunned and shocked but quickly composed himself and nodded his head then he left home while Dadi and Komal looked at him disgustingly then Komal said " I am leaving now I have to go home and start preparing for Pratigya arrival also someone is coming to see her tonight."

"but beta " when Amma tried to interrupt her Komal said frankly " I am not going to listen to your nonsense also my family is waiting for for me " she left.

Krishna was driving his car and looking handsome asusual though he was son of great politician and businessman but he was not like his father and brother who disrespect and abuse women and being youngest family member he got everything he want even before ask his father or brother and they loved him to core.

When he was in college every girl had crush on him including teachers and guys idolized him for his bravery and attitude also money but he had only two friends they were Chandu and Tuna who were with through thick and thin of his life and her. He clearly remember when he saw her first time when he was fighting with Angad and his friends who was chasing a girl then he went and pulled Angad collar who was stunned to Krishna there and he punched him really hard on his nose then he started beating his pulp and when he was about to punch him once more then he pulled the girl who was standing in crowd for his aid and girl shouted when he pulled and that was a moment she came in to his life then everything changed and she was his angel who changed his whole existence.

He pulled that girl to towards him and wrap his arms around his waist then kick Angad and pulled his gun and point towards him then she fainted on him and he Krishna Singh Thakur who was never thought to be afraid in his was merely afraid for a girl who was lying in his arms and he could never forgive himself if something happens to her and he was feeling helplessness then her friends came near him took her and he felt like someone was taking his soul from him and his body shook with unfolded emotions which was new to him.

When he saw them taking way from him he don't know whether what kind of feeling he felt when he saw her whether it was love or lust or simply mere crush but all he I know is He wanted her and he can't stop feeling this emotion.

" I Love You "

His deep thought were disturb when he heard some honking loudly then he saw that green signal was issued then he started driving and said

"I Love You ----- Ganga"


Part 1 Completed

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Edited by yoga23priya - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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gANGA???? Here too???? Krishna n Ganga???? what abt Pratigya???? Continue soon dear.. luved it...šŸ‘šŸ¼
Edited by babithaj - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ganga?!?!... Nooo... Krish is for prats only. Interesting update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanks for updating but ganga how it possible you are kidding us its not ganga its pratigya
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey Priya nice FFšŸ‘šŸ¼...both d chaps were nice b m perplexed wid d 2nd one...ganga😲😲😲😲...plz update soon i relly want to knw wen n hw KriYa meet...n if possible plz update regularly if ur free😃

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