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Posted: 13 years ago
part 51

Geet went and changed into her night dress and came in to take Angel, she lifted the baby in her arms and Maan bend to kiss her Angel good night, as Maan lifted his face from Angel's cheek Geet took the opportunity and with thudding heart kissed Maan on his cheek.

He gave her a shocked look, she bit her tongue and instantly said "Good night Papa, I mean its from Angel" and turned without waiting for an answer and walked to her room, she was stepping slowly trying to walk as if nothing happened where as in her heart she just wanted to run away, once near the door of her room she glanced back and found him still standing as she left with his mouth opened in a small O and his palm resting on his cheek where she touched, she hurriedly entered her room and close the door with a thud, her heart was racing so fast that it could win the F1 race, she smiled and placed Angel on her usual sleeping place and went to the other side to sleep, she could feel the roughness of his subtle on her lips, it was a surprisingly happy feeling, she licked her lips as if wanting to taste him, she blushed and covered her face with her hands, her self talk 'Geet you are a jhalli, why on earth did you kiss him, OMG you kissed him, what will he think of you now, nothing stupid I told him na that it was from Angel's side, no but you should not have done this, but I never planned for it, what you never planned for it, I mean it was just that when he leaned down to kiss Angel I just could not hold back, you are a real jhalli its ok that Sameera said that he feels for you but he did not say all this it is just her assumption, its ok now what has happened has happened I don't have to make clearifications you go let me cherish his touch, Geet I am telling you tu Kamali ho gai hain'

On the other hand, as soon as she kissed, he was shocked, did she really placed her soft tender lips on his rough unshaven cheek, no Maan you just assumed it, but when she said "Good night Papa, I mean its from Angel" I was sure that it was not an assumption, she really kissed her, but she showed no emotions may be she really did it from Angel's side, but for whatever reason she did it, it felt very nice, as she walked back to her room I just stared at her covering my cheek where she touched me, it was burning, she was so soft, her lips so tender, as I walked back to the outhouse and changed I did not feel like washing my face, her feel was so refreshing, if I were not that shocked I would have grabbed her and sealed those soft petals that gave me so much joy, may be I am thinking too much, may be she does not feel anything for me but the fact that I love her can not change, I so much wanted to return her favor, but will it be right.

Both finally slept thinking about each other, next day both were feeling bad for washing their faces, but they have to take bath properly before the morning Puja, he came in and as usual saw her arranging things for the Puja, Angel was still sleeping I the crib placed nearby, everything was same still he felt that she looked different but he shrugged the feeling as his heart felt desire.

She was also feeling a little conscious he was as usual immaculately dresses but she felt that he was looking at her; she was blushing and scolding herself now and then for acting like a zombie. The atmosphere lightened when DM joined them else they would have gone on and on with their self thoughts.

After Puja as he gave her the Aarti she felt current run through her spine when her hand accidentally touched his, not that it never happened, it was almost a daily ritual still it felt different today, he was also sitting in the same boat, when he placed Prasaad in her palm she again felt the undercurrent, he on the other hand thought only two days ago when he was hiding her from the cameras he was hugging her she was so close to him as if plastered to his body, but he did not feel the electrifying effect that ran through him now by the mere gesture when his hand was inches away from hers.

At the breakfast also both felt very uncomfortable, every time their hands touched while serving themselves they pulled back, DM was noticing this and found it a little awkward

DM: what happened to both of you?

M&G: nothing (together)

DM: no, something is definitely wrong

M: no DM every thing is fine, you can ask her

G: yes DM everything is fine

DM: no, I am sure you both again fought

Both choked

DM: dekha, I am correct, I am absorbing since morning both of you are avoiding each other, now why did you two fought?

M: DM, there is no such thing, I must leave now am getting late

G: DM I should also leave

Maan went near Angel and gave her a usual good bye kiss and looked at Geet, who just looked everywhere but him, after he left Geet also left.

DM: dekha Nakul, they definitely fought again, see how they are avoiding each other, today he did not even ask her to take care or did not even say good bye.

N: you are right madam

DM: if they move on at this speed, my dream of making Geet my Bahu will never come true.


hope you liked it😃 I mean their self talks 😆

i so much wanted Maan to kiss her back ... but he has to be shocked first so half heatedly I settled for this

what do you think would have happened if he would have grabbed her😲... 1) Angel would have woken up...🥱 as she was in between them... the she would have a)cried😭... b)closed her eyes again feeling embarrassed😳 by the way her papa was grabbing her maa c) would have shouted lage raho papa ab mujhe ek bhai chahiye👏... or 2) assumong Angel is a fast sleeper, Maan would have placed her in the crib and scooped her Maa in his arms and fulfilled his appetite depending on how much he was hungry☺️🤢


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Edited by smj1977.shruti - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update so both feeling different wonder what one kiss have done to them
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update...
just loved it...it was nice that you dint show him returning the favour...
but still... shit he missed it...😉
well i think he would manage to kiss back with her still carrying angel... without making angel cry...
he saw her while giving usuall godbye kiss to angel... was he expecting the repeat telecast...😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved it, hope to see them together soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wonderful update...they were so conscious of each other that DM also saw through them...I hope they decide to talk about their feelings soon n confess...n your assumptions are hilarious Shruti...loved them😆😆😛
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Posted: 13 years ago

hey Shruti the like tab is not working count my vote also for both part 49 and 51

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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update...
i wud say cute one...
their feelings after that kiss...well i wud say kind of goes with the reality...
next day both avoiding each other...
dm dont worry ur grandson is on his way to make geet ur bahu...
pl cont soon shruthi
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Posted: 13 years ago
great update dear!!
hmmm. . . who will confess first their feelings for each other??
i think it will be maan. as geet is not realy aware now, how much she loves him. she has feelings for him, but she havent realised now, how deep they are.
continue soon dear!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
That was lovely. The icing on the cake was when Maan looked at Geet after he kissed Angel good bye.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update, so aag dono taraf lagna suru hogaya dm aab aap tension chodo aur aramse baitkar mazaa lo.

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