My Only Mistake I'm A Female(MG) THREAD#3

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anjani-pagli

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Posted: 13 years ago

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awsome story i read full in one go!!.. and clicked on "like" for all updates😆🤗😍

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Shruti Jain

@smj1977.shruti

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Posted: 13 years ago

#482

my new SS ----SUNSHINE---- do read its the modification of DHOOP kinaare click here

part 52

DM: dekha Nakul, they definitely fought again, see how they are avoiding each other, today he did not even ask her to take care or did not even say good bye.

N: you are right madam

DM: if they move on at this speed, my dream of making Geet my Bahu will never come true.

As days turned to weeks and weeks to months DM was hell worried weith their attitude, both avoided each other, even they have silently divided their time with Angel.

Both rarely talked to each other, no to be precise they did not at all talk to each other after that night, even their evening tea sessions went with them pretending to be busy while sitting in front of each other.

It was month of Kanagat, and today was the shraad of his grandfather and mother, it was a coincidence that both of them died on the same tithi (lunar calender date), he was up in the morning and was waiting for the pandit to come, she was sitting there watching his calm face, he was waiting for teh old man with the most humble gesture and when the preist came he silently followed his instructions and did the shraad, after serving the preist lunch he retired to the outhouse and took the rest of the day off.

After that day Geet found that he was lost in his thoughts, she did not disturb him as if she would ever do that, though if she would have intrupted him he would have welcomed her.

Today was the Maha navami aarti and he was up well before his usual time, he bathed and went to the Mnasion to prepare for teh Puja and found that Geet already had completed all the required things, he was impressed and while performing the Puja he prayed for her happiness, and so did she for his well being and prosperity and happiness.

At night he came in the Mansion for his usual checking up DM and as he left DM's room he found Geet standing at the terrace opposite to the staircase, he went to watch her and looked at her; she was admiring the three quarter moon and was smiling at some thought, he noted her smile and with out being aware said

M: you look beautiful when you smile

she jerked back in surprise and blushed on seeing him staring at her

G: aap, when did you come? I did not notice you

M: I just was checking in DM and saw you standing here

G: um

M: what were you thinkiug?

G: nothing, I was just admiring the moon, only days back it was so small and in few days it will grow to its fullest and then it will again decrease

M: it's just like life, but wonderfull thingis nothing lasts for ever, it increases to decrease and decreases to increase

G: yes, very true what is the final truth is that what it is today

M: it's with every thing, even with life

G: Maan, will you eevr forget the bitter experiences you had with Sameera

M: I will not, but as time is going they are loosing there impact on my life, I have better things to remember, like her freindship, I will like o remember as my freind rather then my wife

G: good that she has something positive in her, Dev has nothing good, he has only given me bitterness

M: no you are wrong, he has given you the best happiness in your life, Angel

G: I would have liked if Angel would have had a good father

M: um, will you ever forget that Dev is her real father

G: no, Maan Dev is not her real father, he is her biological father, her real father is Maan Singh Khurana

M: thank you

G: I just hope you would have been her biological father too

he went near her and pulled her, she looked at him in surprise, he cupped her face and said

M: Geet can I return your favor with full intrest

she blushed and covered her faec with her palms

he slightly removed her palms and lifted her chin

hope you liked it😃 I mean their self talks 😆

i so much wanted Maan to kiss her back ... but he has to be shocked first so half heatedly I settled for this may in next update

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part 53 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/48787939

Edited by smj1977.shruti - 13 years ago

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ritzy09

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Posted: 13 years ago

#483

yeah...update...Oh I was missing you Shruti...welcome back...ab dher saare update de do humein...please ek aur...atleast Maan ka kiss and a little bit of confession please...daadi ki tarah hum bhi taras gaye hain in dono ki speed dekh kar