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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
updating in 10mins .. but this gonna be short one !! hope you guys ll like it
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Posted: 13 years ago

PART -6

AT CHENNAI

Vaibhav : panditji here is the horoscope .

Chitra came and sat by vaibhav .

Panditji was making some long calculations . after some time : I already told na vaibhav the time was not good for geet ? that's why so much of hazzle .

Vaibhav had a forlone expression : is there any pariharam for that ? ((guys I don't know the English word for "pariharam" .it means that if we have some bad signs in our horoscope , the astrologer ll give us list things to do like going for temple or distributing cloths and foods to the needy .))

Panditji : change of place ll do good . it ll make her understand things and importance of people in her life . this is a important phase in her life. If she comes across without any obstacles , she ll live like a princess throughout her life .

Chitra : now she had gone to delhi for some meeting .

Panditji thought for a minute and said : why don't you shift to delhi ??

Vaibhav : but I have the major business here .

Panditji : for the sake of her well being you have to do this . as for as what you had told things to me , I feel that you have to stay with geet and be her support . I don't think Chennai ll be suitable for her anymore.

Vaibhav : I need some time for thinking over it .

Panditji : okay ..take as long as u need . but come up with a favourable decision .i ll take the leave now .

After panditji left , vaibhav sat there thinking .

Chitra : vaibhav , what do you think ?

Vaibhav : ll it be alright if we shift to delhi again ?

Chitra : all I want is the happiness of my daughter .its true that she needs a change of place now .. why don't we shift to our home there ..

Vaibhav smiled : okay I ll make the arrangements .

Chitra : hmm..

AT DELHI

KHURANA MANSION

Dadi was laughing her life out joined by anni , arjun .

Maan was silently observing them from this study room .

Dadi : bus beta , I cant laugh more than this .

Annie was laughing : dadi you don't know wat else we did in the college .

Dadi : annie you bring geet one day here .

Annie : I don't think I ll get to meet her again .

Dadi : why ?

Annie : she is leaving to chennai tomorrow dadi .

Dadi smiled : I had seen her once .

Annie was shocked : dadi you saw geet ??but how ? I mean I haven't even introduced her before to you . only once bhai had met her in Chennai ..

Dadi : I saw her in office before two days.

Annie : huh ?

Dadi : she was sitting alone in the garden ..

Annie smiled : she loves flowers dadi . I remember she used to have a large collection of roses in Chennai .

Arjun : okay okay enough of "geet charita". Am so hungry . did you see the time ? its 8 . am so hungry .

With that everyone left for the dinner and soon maan followed them .

Next day early morning

Chennai

Vaibhav , chitra and sai were busy packing the things .

Sai yawning : appa wats the need to shift that too in this early morning 4'o clock ??

Vaibhav : don't you want to surprise your sister today ?

Chitra : hey don't waste ur time by useless talk . hurry up flight @ 5:15 .

Vaibhav in a flirtery tone : yes my dear wife !!! anything for you .

Chitra blushed slightly : vaibhav behave !!

Sai giggled seeing their parents lovely dovey mements . : ahem ahem !! if u don't mind am here my dear parents !!!

Delhi

7'0 clock

Geet woke up with the constant knocking at her door . she rubbed her eyes and opened the door . she blinked her eyes and rubbed . she closed the door immediately.

Vaibhav , chitra and sai who were waiting to surprise her were shocked with her behavior .

Vaibhav : what happened to her ?

Sai laughed : appa I think she would have thought it's a dream .

Chitra : knock it again .

After some time geet opened the door and tried to close again but vaibhav stopped her .

Vaibhav : geet ?? what happened ? why are you not letting us inside ?

Geet :are you real ??

Sai : no in ur dreams .

Chitra :ada loosu . we r here for real .

Geet hugged her mom : ayo !! I thought I was dreaming .

Sai : oh you walk in ur dream also ??

Geet gave a killer look to her : appa , wat r u doing here ?? I mean I am to come to Chennai today and suddenly without informing '

Chitra :we are shifting to delhi geet .

Geet was shocked : WHAT ???HOW ??? WHEN ????

Vaibhav : easy geet easy ..

Geet : appa whats the need ??

Vaibhav : no geet . just for a change .

Geet : per you are having the business at Chennai only na ??

Vaibhav : I had made arrangements to shift everything here .

Geet : I cant understand you ..

Chitra : okay okay now go and freshen up geet . we ll have our breakfast together .

Geet : hmmm .. I ll be there in 3o min .

With that she left to her room still not out of the shock ''

After having their breakfast , they thought of visiting the nearby mandir ..geet and sai sat in the car and kept fighting and irritating each other to the core ...geet gave a agonised look to her ..

AT mandir

Pandit saw them and smiled at geet : arey beti !! kaisey hai tu ?

Geet : me bilkul teek hu panditji .

Vaibhav and chitra were confused .

Panditji : arey yeh kon hai ?

Geet : jee wo mere papa , mama and behen hai . appa I visited this temple on the day I reached delhi and became friend with him .

Vaibhav smiled and greeted him .

Punditji : jee aap kaise hai ?? geet beti ne kaha ki aapka halat teek nahi hai .

Vaibhav : jee am fine now ..

They workshipped god and sat there in the steps for some time ..geet and sai were doing phearas round the temple ..after some time they were about to leave until vaibhav and chitra noticed some one familiar '.

Their happiness knew no bounds ..

They immediately rushed towards that person leaving the confused geet and sai behind '..


okay frnds guess who that person is !!!!

sorry for the short update ..

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PREVIOUS : PART 5

NEXT : PART 7

Edited by mrk-1 - 13 years ago
abina03 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice part
but too short
that person ???????may be Dadi???????
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsome update
i think the person is Dadi and they know her from many years i think
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: abina03

Nice part

but too short
that person ???????may be Dadi???????


i ll make it long next time 😊.. caught up with studies ..so no time to update
keep guesssing

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