OS - Dekho Na - 25/08/2011

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Hello Ladies
Am on a writng spree it seems...LOL..So along with updating my First FF here to even writing a new one, I now have a new OS fr all of you.
Here are the links ot my Previous OS Thread, if anyone would love to read those...there are two before this one...LOL
https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1443781
Here are my Two FF links
FF-Changing Colours of Life
FF- The Man of My Dreamshttps://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1443781****************************************************************
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Dekho Na

It was late and Shantanu hadn't reached home yet. She was worried at it seemed it was going to rain. She loved rain. Sigh she still remembered the first time she saw rain in Mumbai and Shantanu's reaction to it'remembering this she laughed out loud'So much had changed since then. She had changed, Shantanu had changed and their life had changed too for the better, but she missed sleeping with him, hugging him, talking to him or just holding him or being held by him. She missed Bai, Ada, Bhabi and Akshay bha too. Sigh it was so difficult to see or even talk to Shantanu without Gangu Bai , Pappi, Khushi, Simran or Adi noticing.

She had gone to the mandir today with Gangu bai that reminded her of the time she used to go to the mandir with Dadi, she missed dadi too.

She couldn't sleep so was on the terrace, it was quiet late and everyone else was abed sleeping. She was restless and couldn't sleep.

She was enjoying the cool breeze that smelled of rain, when it started to drizzle'.and then rain heavily. She spread her hands out and enjoyed the rain pouring down on her, it was like it was washing away all her trouble, her worries and sadness.

Shantanu was late as usual, it had become a norm these days. He came when all were asleep. He didn't mind that at all, what he hated was not being able to talk to Khanak, share his day with her, his worries, his happiness, etc., his not being able to hug her, hold her tight, see her smile, laugh, just having her close by. Thank God he reached in time before it started to rain heavily. He shook of the few droplets on his hair and something made him look up and the sight he saw left him in a trance.

yeh saajish hain boondon ki koi khwaahish hain chup chup si
yeh saajish hain boondon ki koi khwaahish hain chup chup si
dekho na dekho na
dekho na dekho na

Khanak was awake and on the terrace and enjoying the rain. He immediately made his way up and stood at the entranced of the terrace admiring her enjoying the rain, she looked like a plant soaking it all up. She looked damn beautiful in the light blue saree. The colour and the scene made him nostalgic, taking him back in time when she wore a similar colour saree and was enjoying the rain first time in Mumbai, their first ever adventure trip if it can be called that'he chuckled. Khanak was engrossed in enjoying the rain that she did not even hear his chuckle or sense him.

He quietly moved right behind her and engulfed her completely in his arms.


hawa kuchh haule haule zubaan se kya kuchh bole
kyon duuri hain ab darmayaan
dekho na dekho na
dekho na dekho na

Khanak felt like he was nearby, but thought to herself it was her wishful thinking as she was missing him too much, when suddenly she felt his arms around her. She exhaled and leaned completely into him and savoured this moment.

Shantanu turned her, so that he could see her face. She let him turn her and couldn't stop staring at him staring at her. She saw him staring at her lips and closed her eyes ready for his kiss.



phir na hawayen hogi itani besharam
phir na dag mag dag mag honge yeh kadam
haa saawan yeh seedha nahi khufia bada
kuchh toh baraste hue keh raha
samjho na samjho na
samjho na samjho na

The kiss was of two lovers who were thirsty for year. It was as much as giving as taking. Their hands wandered all over each other, claiming, learning each other all over again and not wanting to let go.

They both trailed kisses all over each other's face, nose, cheeks, eyes, ears , lips and below, leaving no place untouched that could be reached .

He trailed kisses all over her face, her eyes, nose, her, ears, down her neck to the neckline of her blouse and back again to claim her lips.

Both couldn't get enough of each other, they were so desperate to feel, touch, share and love.

hawa kuchh haule haule zubaan se kya kuchh bole
kyon duuri hain ab darmayaan
dekho na dekho na
dekho na dekho na

Khanak came back to her senses when hse felt Shantanus hand fumbling with her blouse hooks, trying to open them and said "Shantanu koi dekh lega"

Shantanu "Dekh ne do"

"Shantanu'" Khanak uttered but was effectively shut up by Shantanu's mouth covering hers.

He loved doing that to her'the best way to make his wife stop talking and he loved ho she went all soft and slack in his arms.

Shantanu suddenly carried her in his arms and took in her to the wall that was sheltered from the rain due to the roof slope and also from prying eyes if any, and was well jhidden too, if any one decided to come up .

He put her down and pushed her against the wall and started kissing her again, while leaning completely into her leaving no space between them at all, and with the havoc Shantanu was creating with his kisses and touch the wall was a great support in keeping her standing, otherwise she would have definitely melted in to a puddle, right there and then.

His hands wandered from her waist to right under her blouse edge again, and this tiem his fingers were nimble and fumbled less with the hooks to open them and his hands at last found what it wanted. Khanak too wanted to touch his naked skin and pulled out his shirt so that she could touch him, feel him. Shantanu was surprised by her actions but let her have free rein of him, as he enjoyed her touching him and seeing her take the incentive was a gift.




jugnu jaise chahat dekho jale mujhe
meethi si mushkil hain koi kya kare
hmm hothon ki arzi aaise thukraaon na
saanson ki marzi ko jhuthlaaon na
chhuu lo na chhu lo na
chhuu lo na chhu lo

Two of them loved each other till the rain stopped and the noice stopped of the rain beating down on them and only their heavy breathing was audible, till they both were left satiated with love and happiness.

They stayed in each other's arms for a long moment, just sitting there under the small shelter, getting their fill of each other in each other's arms, talking about all they wanted to say to each other all these days. With the first ray of sun and the birds chirping, Shantanu and Khanak, went down quietly, hugged each other and quietly went to their separate rooms, with a smile in their hearts.


hawa kuchh haule haule zubaan se kya kuchh bole
na duuri hain ab darmayaan
dekho na dekho na...
dekho na hmm hmm hmm
hmm hmm hmm dekho

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This OS is dedicated to Saira ...the song was her choice to be scene on a Rain Sequence we hoped would be picturised on them thus this OS was Born.

Comments good or bad are most welcome

Edited by kubare - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Krishna di🤗 Hot (In caps) ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️ beautiful and sighs u fulfilled my wish of seeing a rain sequence on that song on them...thaaank u di🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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sigh. Its raining here and i miss shanak. Awesome krish.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Its raining here tooo !!!!
I misss ShanaK .. Yasharan in Rain !!!!!
I miss my sister tooo . Hmmpph ..But she doesnt care abt it :(
Sigh Krishnaa Deee .. Sigh ... I am blushing ...
WoW .. Dekho Naaa .. Dikhaooo Naa ..
Sigh !!!
I want to see Yasharan onscreeen .. baaahhh :'(
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Its beautiful and sensual Krish!!!!I so can imagine everything you wrote right to their expressions lol.Awesome!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hai krishna,
nice OS..
i have to read ur FFs..
hope with ur writing spree u continue writing n wont stop it abruptly like u did earlier..
the way u brought out their emotions were so good..
i just loved it..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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krishnaaa that was HAWTTT hayeee deaddd reading it my dear shanak rain romance was justtt tooo hottt to handle sighsss both melting in with the rains 😍complelty shanaklious i wish i sould have see this on the showww .they would have burnt the screen with their hotnnes phewww krishna plzzz keep writing such stuff for people like us who are shanak deprived
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Posted: 14 years ago
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oh my sisi. I miss you too. We ll have sissy talk today. What say
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: priya_cool_123

oh my sisi. I miss you too. We ll have sissy talk today. What say

Yippeee ... Ofcourse YES... I will call you at night :D :D :D

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