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Posted: 13 years ago
part 46
nice part...
who is that man?
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 47
wow that was Maan, oh man so much security but justified, the media approached just in mins...
Geet is so new to this...
i love the way Maan calls Geet baccha...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 48

As Maan and Geet entered the KM, Arjun gave them a puzzled look, he after having his lunch was flipping through channels, while Anvesha and DM retired for a nap, when he noticed a reporter saying Maan's name and he watched it, he was surprised that Maan who has only been divorced few months back was remarried and has a daughter, though he was not able to see the mother daughter, but he had noticed their clothes, and now in front of him, Maan was carrying a baby and Geet was with him in same clothes, he squinted his eyes and again looked at the still running news.

Both Maan and Geet were speechless, just then Lata came and took Angel from Maan and went to the nursery where Aryan was sleeping. Geet placed the crib near the table and went to Arjun

G: Dada

A: Geet what is all this?

G was quite uncomfortable and looked here and there

A: Maan, will you tell me?

M: Arjun, actually, what all that is running is just a gimmick

A: who is that child?

M: she is Angel, my daughter

A: Geet

G: actually, Dada, Angel is my daughter; Maan just gave her his name

M was hurt, yes he was not her real father, and Geet could clearly see the pain in his eyes

G: but he is more than her father, he was always there for her, from the day I knew that I was pregnant he was there with me, Dada, he is my Savior

A: will any one of you explain me, I am not able to understand, and as I know both of you, I know nothing can be wrong in all this

Both Geet and Maan were not able to speak, none had the courage to tell the truth to Arjun, he was becoming restless, he pestered again to know the truth, just then DM came and hearing them decided to interfere

DM: Arjun beta, come here I will tell you the complete truth

A: Savitri ji

DM: come beta, they wont be able to tell as they are directly involved in the whole scenario, but I can tell you, trust me I will not keep any thing away from you, it is your right to know as NT is your sister and Geet is like your sister

A: what does NT has to do with all this

DM: join me in my study I will tell you every thing

Maan and Geet paced restlessly in the hall, both cursed that gadbad tv, when Maan went from left to right Geet went from right to left, they paced along the length of the hall, once or twice they even collided into each other, when they collided for the third time

M: what is this Geet? Why are you pacing here and there? Can't you just sit?

G: o oh, you are also pacing, why don't you go and sit, instead of lecturing me

M: look Geet I am hell worried not irritate me further

G: as if I am having fun here, my Dada is their in the study and you

M: what me?

G: you, umha, forget it, it is my mistake that

M: no, it is my mistake; I should not have agreed to go to that stupid restaurant
G: no, it was my mistake I should never have given ears to your Dhamki, and called for lunch

M: my Dhamki, and who was behaving like stupid about Sameera's matter

G: yes I did not like that you told her about me

M: and what makes you think I told her

G: you yourself said

M: yes, I said but, I did not tell you what I told her, you just assumed

G: ok, and then tell me

M: I will not

G: then what I think is right, you discussed

M: Geet, don't test my patience

G: your patience, and what about mine,

M: your patience lol, what a joke, you have been behaving irrationally since that day, and you are saying that I am being difficult

G: I am irrational, then you are a jerk

M: you called me a jerk, take back your words

G: I wont, you are a jerk, what will you do

M: same, you are a stupid girl, and you don't have any brains

They went on and on, quite forgetting why they were fighting but they argued on every thing from Angel to security guards to college to whatever came to their minds

DM and Arjun stood there on steps listening to their stupid argument, DM smiling and Arjun confused' Anvesha also joined in with shocked look on her face.

Ar: Savitri Ji what is this?

DM: this is love, that they don't realize they have for each other

An: do they often fight

DM: I think this is the second time

Ar: but Geet is so polite I have never heard her raise her voice

DM: then you have not seen her with Maan

An: Pardon

DM: since the day she had come here, she commands him, and he meekly follows her and completes her every wish

Ar&An: what?

DM: yes, now you know why I decided that?

Ar: yes now I agree with you

hope you liked it😃 I mean their arguement


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Edited by smj1977.shruti - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update...
cant believe that they r fighting again...
well pyaar mein aise choti fight toh banthi hain...
so dm tells arjun...i was wondering how geet or maan wud b able to tell the things nt as done...
cant wait for the next...
pl cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
omg!sachhiii
luv s in d air!
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update
both are fighting awesome. scene very cute
DM told Arjun all truth.
love in air wow
loved 2 core
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely update, love the scene where maaneet arguing for nothing it was so cute.
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update...maan and geet are fighting like kids LOL😆...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Ohh...love certainly is in the air for Maan n Geet...only waiting for them to realize its existence around them...between them...loved their bickering thoroughly...n good to see Arjun also accepting their relation like Daadima...though they themselves are unaware till now...n also as the truth came out in front of Arjun too finally...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part

loved it
loved maaneet fighting
this two r like kid


well fight mein hi love hain

so dm told everything to arjun and now arjun and annie will help her
continue soon

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