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Posted: 14 years ago
#81
awesome...

poor maan n poor savitri...they really dont know what is going on...n what do they have to do...one is thinking of how ziddi she is..n the other is thinking of marriage...šŸ˜†

both dev n sam ran...😲...well i guess they knew...the storm is coming to reside in their house so better to run...run for their life...🤣

poor maan...doesnt eve n know what just happened,,,,,🤣

continue soon...

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#82
Funny and cute
cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#83
awesome ... superb ... loved part 4 ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#84
super job
love it
cont soonnn
ty 4 pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85
last act of dev n samrat was so funny... hope it ll get clear n d nxt updt why dey acted lk dat...šŸ‘šŸ¼
geet doing d internshp undr mann... dats gonna be tremendous funnn...šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86
awesome updates
continue soon plzzz
cnt wait for more maneet moments
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Posted: 13 years ago
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šŸ‘ Fabulously Funny😃 [Whatever I say is the ultimate truth three]šŸ‘šŸ¼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Waiting...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey guys...😊 thanks a lottt 4 d comments...šŸ˜‰ n a special thanks to my di Sayaneegupta n Speechless...šŸ˜† thnks 4 pushing me 2 write the next part... well here s d next part... njoy... šŸ‘šŸ¼n dnt 4gt 2 cmnt...šŸ˜‰

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Part 5: Maan na Maan



Geet was going to Khurana's as Ridhima is going to stay there for three days. It was saying goodbye session. Pari, Gunjan and Geet were standing at the dining room with teary eyes as if she is going forever and couldn't see them again.😭

Geet: Bye Gunjan, bye Pari. If I don't return from that Danav's house please don't forget me.

Gunjan: Geet di plz dnt talk like this. Dev and Samrat will be there.

Pari: NO. they are not at house now. They informed me.

Gunjan: Samrat told me too. I forgot.

She sobbed.😭

Pari: Dnt b scared Geet di you are a brave girl. N Maan Bhai s nt dat bad.

Geet: Pari u r so nave. U dnt knw d true face f his. He s a danav in disguise.😈

Geet's dad: Ok galz. Geet is going there for 3 days. Nt for 30 years. N Geet, Maan is not a vampire hez nt going to suck ur blood. Now Geet lets go.

He picked up Geet's bag and started to walk.

Pari n Gunjan: Byee Geet di.

Geet: Bye galz. I'm not going to forget u.😭

She followed her dad.

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At Khurana Mansion

Maan was really happy. After almost 5-6 years he is going to meet Armaan.

Some one entered the house. it was Geet with her luggages.

Maan [annoyed]: What are you doing here?😔

Geet: Arre? Aapka to yadaash chala gayaa. Bhul gayye Armaan and Ridhima are coming here. They requested me to stay here with them. Otherwise why would I come to a selfish giant's house? Bolo bolo? Why I would come?

Armaan told Maan that Ridhima and Geet are cousin and very good friends. Ridhima want her to stay with them. Maan totally forgot it.

Maan: Hm. Armaan told me. but plz don't try to change my dcor.😳

Geet: No I won't. I know different people different choice.

Thank god d gal has some common sense. Maan thought.

Geet: Hmm. Like my choice is good, no no my choice is the best and urs d worst.

Maan was totally shocked and dumbstruck. He couldn't understand what to answer.šŸ˜•

Finally he managed to say.

Maan: Geet at least once act like ur own age.

She gave a large smile.😃

Geet: Oh ha.. I forgot to say' main aapka mahmaan hoon na' aur'. Aur mahmaan to bhagbaan hote hai. Hai na? to meri seva karne ki responsibility aapki hain.

Maan rolled his eyes.

Maan: Maan na maan main tera mahmaan.

Geet: Ha Maan' na maan' mera kya lenadena hain isse? Main toh mahmaan hoon aapka.. hain na Maan?šŸ˜†

She said and walked towards the guest room.

Maan murmured the same sentence "Maan na maan main tera mahmaan. Uff!!! Dis gal s totally crazy."

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Geet came downstairs in a simple blue salwaar with blue dupatta. Maan was sitting on a sofa and reading a business magazine.


She started to search the magazine rack.

Maan: What are you trying to find? I don't have Disney magazine.šŸ˜†

Geet: Haha not so funny. Do you think I'm a kid? Huh? I'm a lady of 23 years.

Oh GOD! She thinks she is a matured lady. Maan took a deep breath.

Geet: I know a boring guy like u read only yawningly boring business magazine which makes all normal people sleepy. That's why I had left a fashions magazine here.

She randomly searched the books of the rack. Maan started to read the magazine. But couldn't concentrate on it as she was making a lots of noise.

Geet: Kaha gaya? Kaha rakhi thi use?

She turned at Maan

Geet: Do u have any pet cow who had eaten my fashion magazine?šŸ˜•

Maan never heared anything like this from anyone. He wondered god had made a gal like this. Isse to museum pe rakhna chahiye.šŸ˜†

Geet finally found her magazine. It was on upper rack.

Geet: Uff! Finally I have found you. You are there hiding from me naughty gal.😳

Maancould not stop smiling to see she is talking with her magazine. But the rack was out of her reach. She stands on a tool to get that.

Maan could not move his eyes from her. She is so beautiful. She looks like a doll made of glass. Maan walked towards her to help her.

Geet: Got it.

Geet finally get the magazine. But she slipped. She falls from the tool. Thankfully Maan was near her to prevent her from falling on her back. She closed her eyes with fear.

Maan caught her and close his eyes in relief.

Geet opened her eyes slowly and realized Maan had held her in his arms securely. They looked into each other eyes. They were totally lost into each other.


At the moment massage received in their mobiles. They came to sense.

Maan put her down.

Maan [angrily]: At least keep your eyes open.

Maan walked towards the sofa to see the sms.

Geet [murmuring]: I was going to say thank you. But u r so rude. Khadus budha.šŸ‘ŽšŸ¼

Geetsat on a sofa and read the sms.

The massages were from Armaan and Ridhima to say their flight is late so they will be late.

Geetsat on the opposite sofa of Maan's. They both concentrated on their magazines.

Maan: Nakul'. I want Pasta as soon as possible.

Geet spoke just a few second later.

Geet: Nakul mujhe alu ka paratha chahiye.

Maan: Alu to ghar pe hai hi nahi. To paratha kaise khaoge?šŸ˜‰

Geet looked at Maan angrily then turned her angry gaze at Nakul.

Nakul: I'm going to market Geet madam. Aapka alu ka paratha ho jayega.

Maan sighed thinking servants of his house listen to geet more than him.

Geet [to Nakul]: Aur ha agar yeh [turning at Maan] alu churale to mujhe inform karna thik hain.šŸ˜†

A wired expression came on Maan's face.

Yeh ladki mujhe pagal kar degi. Uff! Maan took a breath. He concentrated on the magazine.

Geet was reading her magazine rather say she was acting like she is reading the magazine. Secretly she was looking at Maan.


Beautiful eyes' such a straight nose'.. what a jaw.. wow!!! The shape of his hands are really awesome'. Salmaan jaisa muscle'.Tom Cruze jaisa smile [but his smile is too rare] And his long slender fingers'. Those are really awesomw'. But he is arrogant, nossy, bossy'. And he reads business magazine'. Ewww.. chi chi' how boring'.

She was lost in her own thought at the moment Armaan and Ridhima entered.


"Geet!!!" Ridhima shouted.😃

Geet: Ridhima😃

She ran towards her and hugged her tightly.šŸ¤—

Geet: Thank god Ridz tu agyei.. nahin to mujhe iss beast se bahot darr lag raha tha.😲

Armaan started to laugh'.šŸ˜†

Armaan: wah! U have changed your name to beast. Kab ki?

Maan: Leave that'

Armaan: where r others?

Maan: they went to Uzbekistan or Kyrgyzstan in a very short notice. Now get fresh.

Armaan: Hmm. After that we all will share our own story. Thik hain?šŸ˜›

Ridhima left with Geet and Armaan followed Maan.

Edited by princess_mimi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey guys i hv sketchd d pix a few days ago... i knw its nt dat gud... but plzzz tell me wat do u thnk... can u recognize dem???
Edited by princess_mimi - 13 years ago

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