MG SS: Ek Duje Ke Vaaste : UPD Pg 19

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Posted: 14 years ago
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EK DUJE KE VAASTE



I love you, Maan and will always love you forever. My heart beats for you and will do so forever. Every single breath of mine is for you. My life is for you and only you.
No one can change it , she paused a bit, not even you. I am ready to sacrifice my happiness.. her voice cracked.. my love for the sake of your happiness. Saying this Geet turned around to face a moist eyed Maan, who was thrilled listening this and at the same time sad and helpless. He stood looking at her with admiration, love and respect , that he couldn't avoid tears flowing down from his eyes.

I am proud of you Geet, More than being proud, the respect I had for you has rose above many folds. I cant say how happy..his voice cracked, with a lump in his throat he continued, happy I am..
Thanks Geet for understanding and respecting me and my feelings. Saying this he turned facing his back towards Geet, He couldnt control his tears.

Maan..shhh... she came forward and made him turn facing her, cupped his face, wiped his tears.. No Maan, I respect you more, its not an easy task to ask your love to marry someone else, for others happiness.I am proud of you and our love. And now Maan, you have to be strong. See..I am strong,
she said it in a confident tone wiping her tears and forming a weak smile, but she couldnt hide the real emotions running inside her from Maan, her Maan.

With one piercing look of his, she broke down completely. Maan too fell on his knees besides Geet.



Cupping her face, he said, In a way its good, cry as much you want , Geet, with a lump in his throat, he continued..
I wont stop you and infact even myself. We need to erase out all the things attached to us. Cry Geet ..Cry. Saying this he hugged Geet tightly,and she reciprocated.

Two love birds, hugging each other, tears rolling down their cheeks, like there is no end. But there was an end to their love story. This was probably their last hug , to be precise their last meeting,

Before Geet's marriage.





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Sacrificing your happiness for the happiness of the one you love, is by far, the truest type of love.

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Posted: 14 years ago
#2
wow sangs
congo on the new SS
di awesome SS
love it
but nooo we want maaneet together
please at the end they should be together😳
love the first part
continue soon
thank Youu

Edited by maangeetcrazy - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Am second? Sob sob. Chal koi nahi. Am glad Jazz is not first *evil smirk* muhahahaha. Challo coming to the ss. What was that? I was all smiling and grinning when i saw new ss. U know how much i love Maan in rhythm of Love. I thot challo one more light hearted yipee!! And then bang!! This is so emotional. I am a sucker for happy endings so if you by any chance make it a sad ending i am gonna read it when i am very very strong or else i wud get wipes before reading. I'll read nevertheless n haan congoz!!
Edited by --Shika-- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Congratz on the new SS
Awww luvd the confession but maaneet separate😲
wanna read the first part
Cont soon Xx...
Thx 4 the Pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Sad one...

But you know what ... I actually love sad emotional stories.. I am a sucker for them.. 😆
Loved it babes.. but I hope the ending is happy.. cos I hate sad endings... *Kesha wonders at her contradictions of thoughts.. isnt she a whacko* 😆😆

waise.. kya baat hain.. ek aur story.. kuch toh gadbad zarur hain... 😉

Update soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Congrats On The New FF
Lovely Start
Cont Soon
Thanks 4 The PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
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congrats !!!!!!!! 4 d new ss ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

interesting concept ...

continue soon ...

par dono ko alag mat karna ... plzzz ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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congrats on new ss!!
loved it
continue soon
plz add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Congrats for the new ff dear.

Grt start...emotional part...

Updt soon.

Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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concept is interesting..
cont soon
thanks 4 pm

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