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Nafisa asked me if i was inspired to do a another os so here goes dear friend


Aham is pacing up and down at the school waiting for Gopi to finish her exam, he has worked extremely hard with her she was the perfect student, when he spoke she listened if she had questions she was nervous speaking to him, she blushed beetroot red he noticed. He would peak at her whilst he was also working. she spoke softly, he also spoke to her in a gentle way. Aham smiled remembering all this.
On day 5 Gopi got it she was putting words together by herself, she was writing and reading, Aham was surprised n shocked he lifted her up into his arms and turned her around gopi was smiling, kokila came to the door with Ahams tea n saw she smiled and walked away, just as she saw rashi coming down the hall way, Rashi what are you doing? you are suppose to be cooking in the kitchen n as usual you are running away, rashi looks at her nahi kaki ji, kokila replies job theif (kamchor) get downstairs, rashi runs past her sulking n into the kitchen. kokila comes down smiling finally something positive with aham n gopi but she had to be careful n not show her delight as any wiff of her approving will get rashi to do her kalakaris again.
Gopi finishes the exam n comes out of the room, Aham smiles at her she blushes n smiles back, the headmaster tells aham they will call him after they have marked the exam. Aham leaves with gopi, they get to the car n aham opens the car door which surprised Gopi, Aham asks her if she is hungry she tells yes a little bit, he calls home n kokila answers the phone, Aham asks if lunch is ready, kokila tells him that rashi the kamchor is yet to start, Aham says to kokila mom is it ok for me n Gopi to go n get lunch at a restaurant, she replies yes its fine n puts the phone down. Hetal asks kokila what happened so kokila tells her that aham asked if lunch is ready she tells hetal by the time rashi has cooked it will be dinner. Hetal looks at rashi who is looking down n thinking to herself that gopi n aham gone to eat at a restaurant and she has to cook at mm for kargari n mil.
At the restaurant Aham asks gopi to order the food she tells him to order as she was not confident enough, he smiles ok what would u like matar paneer, gobi alu n dalh she reples matar paneer, Aham tells them 2 plse n roti. Aham is just about to ask gopi about the exam, someone shouts his name AHAM omg Aham he looks up n see Rahual his school friend, Aham gets up n hugs him i thought you were abroad Rahual when did you get back ? Yesterday n what did i hear you are married, so how is anita? Aham looks at him shocked Gopi looks down n is sad, Aham looks at Gopi, Rahul this is my wife Gopi Aham modi, Gopi looks at him n smiles, oh sorry yaar i didnt know Hi i am rahual sharma, he puts out his hand to shake it, Gopi puts her hands together jai shri krishna, Rahual embarrassed puts his hands together n replies back. So how long have you two been married, Aham looks at him about a year our anniversary should be comin up, Gopi which day did we get married gopi tells him he looks at her are you sure we have its going to be two years in a few months, Aham smiles i have been so busy i forgot, Gopi smiles so does rahual. Rahual tells him that they should get togehter n have a boys night out Aham tells him yes we will n Rahual leaves.
Aham asks Gopi if she remembered the day they got married then why did she not remind him, so Gopi tells him you have always said that you married me to keep maji happy because i was her choice not yours i did not what to remind you that you had married me, Aham looks down in shame. The food arrives n aham n gopi eat n leave the restaurant.
At mm Gopi n aham walk in, kokila is delighted to see them but does not show it, she taunts them about learning n now eating out of the house as well. Aham looks at mom can i have some green tea, Gopi vahu go n get green tea for Aham, ji mahji gopi goes to the kitchen, Hetal n Marni are there how did the exams go Gopi, Kaki i think it went well Gopi smiles n makes tea for Aham. Going back to her room rashi is coming down the stairs gopi maharani enough of your nonsense, Aham comes out of the room n sees her, you will start your work i am not cooking or doing your job you are the naukrani of the kitchen behave like one, you are trying to compete with me n that is not going to happen aham jiju is never going to accept you as a wife even when you are educated he will divorce you he is just making you capable of landing on your own two feet. Gopi has tears in her eyes, Aham hearing this shouts Rashi, Gopi gets startled n drops the tea. Rashi mouth is wide open, Hetal n kokila comes Aham starts to shout at Rashi who do you think you are? you forget how you got into this house, even i think that it was you who played dirty tricks on sonam, Gopi was chosen for me because my mom found her she rejected you because she knew you were a schemeing good for nothing. He turns to kokila n hetal who are listening n tells them everything, kokila tells hetal the reason aham has not been getting on with Gopi is due to your vahu rashi she tells her everything hetal is alarmed. kokila even tells that she persuaded aham to take over gopis teaching n learning because she wanted to catch rashis she told him about the ghost everything the kalkaris n what happen at kinjals in laws house with the electricity going everything. Hetal is shocked so is
Gopi, Aham looks at Gopi holds her hand n tells her if you want me n mom you will never listen to rashi again instead you will be telling her what to do not the other way round otherwise you can leave n forget me n mom. Aham asks her is that Gopi do you understand what i am saying to you, ji Aham ji. I will never listen to rashi again she looks at her you cant be my sister , Aham starts to walk off with Gopi holding his hand.
Back into the room Aham locks the door n tells her mom chose her for him n she made the perfect choice, just then the phone rings its the headmaster Mr modi your wife passed the test 100% mark you were right, also she will not continue in her first class she will go one grade up maybe u can continue working with your wife n hopefully we can get the job done faster Aham says yes n puts the phone down. He goes over to gopi puts his hands on her face n says mom was right you are the perfect choice for me you got 100% in your test, he kisses her on the lips...

Thats it enjoy 😉


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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow, love it great os 😃
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Nice OS .Loved every word of it.👏
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Great OS! If only it came true!
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A superb OS Suk. I held onto every word.

It has the potential to turn out similar to the reel one.
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Awesome OS. loved the whole write-up.
keep going👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
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how i wish it happens in the serial...this is really nice one shot...
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a fantastic os it's fabulous
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Posted: 14 years ago
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if only that came true and quickly !!!! where would the drama the thing that makes saathiya different then the other serial is that the leading husband does not like his wife
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Posted: 14 years ago
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superb. can we see this in sns in the coming 3 years

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