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Chapter 1: Conclusion of current track into marriage
Cont from..

(Suddenly, they hear the sounds of wolves howling uuuhhh)
Abhay: *gets alert and looks all around*
Piya: *gets scared and clings to abhay*
Abhay: *holds her tight*

Part 6
*shinning eyes of wolves appear in front of them – There must be atleast 10 of them*
Piya: *holds abhay's jacket tightly*
Abhay: *makes a hiss sound (of vampire).. getting all ready to fight the wolves*
Piya: *looks at abhay amusedly/shockedly*
(...But before Abhay appears in his full vampire form. Two people with black coats appear in front of Abhiya and drive the wolves away. Piya could only see their backside but we could see them from front – It was Chand and Haseena.)
Piya: Abhay *she wants to say alot but her words are stuck up due to panic/fright*
(..The two weird people – Chand n Haseena disappear after driving away the wolves)
Abhay: This place is dangerous for you.. I have to get you out of here now..
Piya: Whats going on abhay...?? *hides herself in abhay's jacket as it was a scary view*
Abhay: just come with me *he takes Piya home*

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@Outside: Dobriyal House
Piya: what was all that abhay? Wo dho log? Aur wo bhadiye? Wo unn dho log se kaise darr gaye?
Abhay: how would I know? shhh piya... bhool jao.. just think tumne ek bura sapna dekha ho
Piya: No abhay.. wo sapna nai tha.. it was really scary and weird
Abhay: Piya, go inside aur suno, bahar math nikalna.. OK? And inform me agar tum ghar se bahar nikal rahe ho
Piya: But abhay...
Abhay: just do what I say... No questions No arguements..!! Good Night.. now go
Piya: *she wants to ask 100 of questions but controls herself* Good Night.. *she goes inside*
Abhay: *waits till Piya goes inside the house thens goes home*

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@Forest
*The wolves stop Abhay mid way, all ready to attack him... and Abhay ready to kill them all*

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@Dobriyal House: Piya's Room
Piya: *takes a shower and comes out. While wipping her hair.. she recollects the day she spend with abhay and smiles to herself and then recollects what happened in the forest – the wolves, the 2 weird people and abhay making that sound* what was that? *she is wondering and talking to herself*
Panchi: What's what Piya? *Her cell rings and its 'neel calling'* uff this guy... Piya pls yeh phone utao aur ushe keh dho main ghar pe nahi ho *dumps the phone on Piya*
Piya: *picks the phone* Hello Neel.. Panchi ghar pe nahi hai... call later *goes to cut*
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
~Phone Convo~
Neel: *on phone:-* Mujhe tumse hi baat karne thi Piya
Piya: Mujse? I don't want to talk to you.. bye good night *goes to cut the phone*
Neel: Its about abhay
Piya: *doesnt cut the phone* abhay?
Neel: haan, maine ushe abhi abhi forest area ke taraf jaate dekha aur waha kahin wild animals hai... Dont you think its dangerous for him?
Piya: What? Par usne mujhe kaha the ke wo ghar jaa raha hai...
Neel: Poor abhay.. patha nahi wo zinda bach ke ah payenga ya nahi
Piya: NEEL!!! *yells at him for saying that and cuts the phone* Oh no Abhay *holds her head*
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Panchi: what happen, piya?? Why are you panicing?
Piya: Panchi.. wo..abhay.. he..is..in..danger *says in a panic state* I have to goo... *rushes out of the house and goes to the forest area*

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@Forest
(There are four hired wolves who start attacking abhay but he starts killing them one by one.
On the other side Piya has reached the forest and almost the place where the wolves and abhay are fighting.
Abhay kills 3 of them.. and just 1 more wolf to go.. The wolf attacks abhay and scratches him on his face but Abhay gets hold of the wolf and kills it.. all blood flashes on abhay's face.. He looks really dangerous.
Abhay turns and to his shock he finds Piya standing front of him.
Piya is just starring at abhay – the vampire. She is dumbstruck seeing this face of abhay.
Abhay gets lost of words too..
Piya collapses/faints.)
Abhay: Piyaaa *goes and helds her in his arms* Piya get..up.. *shakes her face* piyaaa *he gets tensed... and takes her to his house*

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@Raichand House
*Chand and Haseena were sitting by the fire and sharring a drink, when abhay enters with piya in his arms and takes her to his room. Chand and Haseena look at each other with a questioning expression and follow abhay. Abhay explains what happen in the jungle to his parents.*
Chand: So you mean Piya ne tumhe unn bhadiyo ka khun karte hue dekha?
Haseena: Now piya will expose us to the world.. *says in a panic*
Abhay: Relax Mom... aisa kuch nahi hoga... main piya ko sambhal longa
Haseena: yea abhay... you better do that *goes out of the room, chand follows*

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@After half hour: Abhay's Room
Abhay: *is sitting beside Piya on the bed.. holding her*
Piya: *wakes up and looks at abhay – she recollects his dangerous face and gets scared and jumps off the bed* dooorr... door..raho..mujhse... don't touch me...
Abhay: *gets shocked but somewhere he did expect this reaction from her* Piya? What are you saying? I am abhay
Piya: No.. you are something else *makes a disguisted face* Maine dekha tumhe... forest mein tum unn bhadiyo ka khun karte hue... as if you were a...monster !!
Abhay: *these words from Piya really pierces abhay's heart but thats somewhat the truth* Yes Piya... I am a monster... jo jungle janwaro ka khun pe jeeta hai *for a moment he confesses the truth to piya as he cant hide it* I am a monster!!
Piya: *breaks into tears*
Abhay: *smiles and laughs*
Piya: *wonders*
Abhay: Oh c'mon piya.. tum bhi yeh kaise baatien karr rahe ho... yeh monster, vampires etc don't exist in todays day.. Its all a part of your imagination.. Tum mere liye bahut tensed thi aur tumne pura din kuch nahi khaya.. weakness ke wajhe se your mind is just playing games with you *he feels really bad to lie to piya.. but he has to*
Piya: I saw it... blood was all over your face...aur abhi bhi hai
Abhay: unn wolves ne mujpe attack kiya... and thats why I am bleeding
Piya: *goes near abhay and sees the scrath on his face... and the blood was ozzing out of the scratch – her love and concern for abhay makes her trust abhay's words than what she saw with her eyes* OMG Abhay *blows into his wound and kisses it*
Abhay: *looks at piya's concern for him, at her innocent trust on him, tears fill his eyes.. Thoughts in his mind: "Mujhe maaf karr dena piya.. iss jhut ke liye"*
(Arnab and Madhu enter)
Madhu: piya... kya hua?? You are allright? Abhay said tum behosh ho gaye..aur
Piya: Mom *smiles* Im fit and fine OK..
Arnab: yeh sab kaise hua?? Tum itne raat ko forest mein akele ghumne gaye thi? *yells at her*
Piya: Papa, actually neel ka phone aaya tha and he said abhay is in danger tho maine kuch nahi soocha aur..
Abhay: aur ah gayi mujhe bachane!! *looks sternly at her* Tumne ek bar bhi apne jaan ke bare mein nahi soocha?
Piya: You are my life abhay...!! *says earnestly*
Abhay: *piya's every word of love makes him guiltier of hiding his true identity from her*
Piya: Aur papa, you know waha pe ek bahut weird baat hui *narrates the story of those two weird people driving away the wolves* agar wo dho log aur abhay nahi hota tho aaj tho hum unn wolves ka dinner bann chuke the
*Chand and Haseena look at each other and then stare at abhay*
Arnab: *looks at the raichands with doubtful eyes*
Abhay: *senses the doubts in Arnab's eyes and shifts the topic* Aap yaha thak aaye hai then lets have dinner
Chand: Yea Pls Mr Dobriyal.. We would be glad if you would join us for dinner
Madhu: Sure, why not
Haseena: Please.. *heads the dobriyals to the dinning table.. but Abhay is yet in his room*
Abhay: *cures the wound on his face with a touch*
Piya: *comes back to the room to take abhay* Abhay.. tum dinner nai karonge?
Abhay: Yea.. Im coming..
Piya: *looks at abhay's cheeks and the wound/scratch has disappeared. She gets confused and shocked but doesn't question abhay this time. Thoughts in her mind: "yeh sab kya ho raha hai? What am i seeing? Kya yeh mere nazro ka dhokha hai ya abhay mujhe koi dhokha de raha hai? NO Piya... how can you doubt abhay..? Just stop.. yeh sab soochna bandh karr dho" she stops questioning and reasoning*
Abhay: *snaps his finger front of Piya* Kya sooch rahe ho? ke tumhe iss monster se pyaar kaise ho gaya?
Piya: *looks at him amusedly then smiles* Nahi.. I was thinking how lucky am I to find my angel *smiles and pecks him on his cheeks*
Abhay: *smiles with a sad eyes*
Piya: (Thoughts in her mind: "Tum mujse kuch chupa rahe ho? kya chupa rahe ho, abhay? Iss barr main tumse kuch nahi poochongi.. Main chahte ho ke tum mujhe batao")
Abhay: (Thoughts in his mind: "kaise batao piya? Kya tum sachai sunn paogi ?'')
Piya : (thoughts in her mind : '' tum kehke tho dekho abhay.. kya tumhe mere pyaar pe itna bhi barosa nahi hai?'')
Abhay: (thoughts in his mind: "tum pe barosa hai piya par khud pe barosa nahi.. apne gelona saach pe barosa nahi'')
(Haseena comes to call them for dinner. They snap out of their mind-to-mind talk and go for dinner.)

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@Dinner Table
(All are sitting – Piya and Abhay besides each other. Madhu and Haseena beside each other. Chand and arnab face-2-face. The servant serves the dinner. Dobriyals start to eat while Raichands are not having nor serving themselves anything)
Arnab: Mr Raichand, aap kuch nahi lenge?
Chand: Ah! No.. haseena and I have early dinner..so we are done with dinner..
Arnab: Oh! And Abhay, tum kuch nahi kaogi?
Piya: Haan Abhay, tumne bhi pure din mere liye fast rakha.. come on now have something *fills rice in a spoon and goes to feed abhay*
Abhay: No Piya! Main raat mein light diet food khata ho
Haseena: Yea right.. Abhay health ke bare mein bahut conscious hai.. The cook is preparing abhay's diet meal for him
Piya: Ok.. *smies hesistantly*
Arnab: Bahut saal pahele, maine inn junglo mein kuch ajeeb dekha tha
(Chand, Haseena and Abhay pass glances at each other.. wondering why has Arnab started this topic out of the blue)
Chand: Ajeeb?
Arnab: kuch daravne se jeev(creatures) jo bilkul AAPKE *stresses on that word* aur humare tarha dekhte the *he has many doubts in his mind and he has purposely brought this topic to see the reaction of raichands*
Chand: You mean dracullaz or vampires..?
Arnab: yea... kya apne bhi dekha hai?
Madhu: Uffho Arnab, tumne phir apne scary stories chalo karr diye
Haseena: Stories... right!! Yeh sab kise-kahaaniyo ke alava aur kuch nahi
Arnab: I hope ke yeh kise-kahaniyo ke alava aur kuch nahi
Abhay: *chooses to stay out of this tense convo*
Piya: *holds Abhay's hand down the table*
Abhay: *doesnt re-act as he is concentrating on the convo b/w his parents and dobriyals*
Piya: *wonders to herself: "Abhay ! Kuch tho chupa rahe ho mujse.. Pls batao mujhe kya baat hai!"*
Madhu: Ab humien chalna chaheye.. It was a lovely dinner
Arnab: tho milte hai kal sangeet par!
Chand: Yea.. The Sangeet... see you there
Piya: *looks at abhay but he doesn't look back at her...as he is tensed/guilty/etc. She feels bad and leaves with her parents.*
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End this part here... Hope you liked it
Do tell me how was it
Will cont soon
Luv
Ritu

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