MN * YOU & ME - It's MAGIC. Part 18 - Pg 88. - Page 28

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Posted: 14 years ago
its just too romantic n cute n sweet

loved it
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Its beautiful so beautiful and romantic 😳
I really have no words to explain my Feelings
Kinzu once again u made us speech less
Thanks for Pm
cont soon

Edited by DhanakZ - 14 years ago
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Lovely update Kinza. It was very romantic 😳
Looking forward to the next part 😊
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Thank u so much people .. 😳 ☺️ .. by the way i am glad some of you noticed things i tried to convey underlined, 😳
and btw from here starts the real story, the main motive behind my story. I don't believe i wrote 8 parts for build up .. 🤔
😆
Chapter # 9.

Sunrays didn't shine much, as the morning was welcomed with a cloudy sky and wet roads, with water still dripping down the leaves of the trees. It had been raining whole night and someone was ecstatic to see the morning view,

"I knew it will rain", gunjan opened the window and was delighted to see the weather just perfect. She closed her eyes to inhale the fresh fragrance of wet soil when a well known pair of strong arms enveloped her from behind, "good morning ", he said in his usual sleepy voice and smiling gunjan opened her eyes, "good morning, and kindly get over sleep and see the beautiful weather", she turned in his arms and patted his cheeks lightly while he lazily opened his eyes to see the beautiful view out of window, "oh!, it rained last night"?, he questioned, turning eyes back to gunjan as according to him, she was still more beautiful than any other sight in this world!

"yes it did!, some where near midnight, and very heavy rains!, I am so happy!", her face was glowing and samrat was left in awe of her excitement, somewhere hinting the reasons to.

"and may I ask the reason behind this special glow?", he asked, uselessly adjusting strands of her hair, "oho!, ap bhi na! .. it was nupur's wedding, and it rained, I mean nothing could get perfect for her, I am sure she must be very happy!!"

**

"wow!, such happiness for a weather", mayank asked amazed as nupur was excitedly telling him about her fondness for rains.

Mayank and nupur didn't sleep after they woke up due to the sound of rain. Surrendering themselves to each other completely once again, they were now talking about everything and anything about themselves, overcoming the shyness and apprehensions to a lot of extent.

They could feel it was morning, but both of them were still in bed, cuddled to each other and just talking,

"rain is not a weather for me, I consider it as a companion, I have seen all of my dreams in rains", she replied smiling and mayank who was playing with her fingers, kissed them for almost a thousandth time again, "no other companions except for me do you understand Mrs Sharma", he glared at her and she frowned, "but that is not fair, rain is ..

And before she could utter something more, her lips were captured in sweet and soft kiss, and at this she really lost the count of the kisses they shared since the last night, but well who was interested in maths! ' she just kissed back!.

"you are jealous of a weather", nupur said shyly and he blew air on her cheeks "yes I am!, any problems?", he glared at her and she shook her head obediently.

"good!", with this he again bent on her neck, "you don't have a favorite weather?", she asked, with a high breath of course, "all weathers are my favorites, all of them are beautiful in their own way, summers, winters, spring, autumn, rains, all of them!", he smiled, raising his head and this time nupur frowned, "how can you like summers?, it's so hot!", she was amazed and mayank chuckled, "now this is no logic, so how can u like rains?, so many people get displaced and homeless?", he threw back the question and nupur opened her eyes more wide, "you are taking the argument to the wrong side", she shifted herself to a sitting position and mayank suppressed his smile over the way she was glaring and huffing and at the same time, trying to adjust the strap pf her dress

"it is not about the sufferings, even people suffer due to summers and ..

She was slipped back in the covers and nupur's mouth was left open as mayank rolled over her, "relax baby!, you frown too much!", he kissed her softly and nupur kissed back smiling,

"okay, now can we just get up, it's already morning", she said shyly, although her heart completely opposing her words.

"are you sure", he snuggled some more with a sharp intake of breath she murmured a "yes".

"I don't find any honesty in your answer", he winked and nupur giggled, "whatever, but we need to get up, I hope you remember we have a reception", she opened her eyes wide

"oh no!, another function", he sighed and hid his face in her neck, while this time flowing in the impulse, she gently stroked his hair, "I mean after marriage the coupe should be left alone na!, ye kiya hai .. you hardly give them time to talk!!", he huffed and this time nupur giggled, "we have been talking the whole night", she said sweetly and mayank raised his head, "are you sure it was just talking?", he whispered in her ear and yet again making her nerves go on fire as he started to trace her bones,

"main thek keh rahi hon, it is seriously late, koi na koi a jaye ga abhi , and it will look so awkward .. please", she pleaded, in a breath less voice, in between her sighs and mayank finally moved away,

"hmmm, maybe you right!, but you go get ready first, tab tak I'll get some sleep, tum ne tu mujhe soney nahi diya sari raat!", he made a sad face, suppressing his smile and nupur's mouth was left open the way he took the blanket over as if so fed up.

Giggling and blushing she got down the bed, to dress up.

Dressing herself in a magenta sari, she entered the room, fiddling with her wet her to found him asleep.

She walked towards him smiling, and gazed at his innocent sleeping sight, she ruffled his hair and his eyes caught a small reddish mark on his neck, and blushing over the most possible source, she rubbed her finger over it and leaning down carefully, she planted a soft kiss over the mark and immediately moved away, fearing he might not wake up.

Re-calling last night once again, she remembered that it had indeed rained, so she rushed to the window and threw it open, as fresh cold air greeted her and started playing with her wet hair. She went in a trance and closed her eyes, but then she heard a groan, "nupur close the windows", he said in an sleepy irritated voice and nupur immediately turned to find that he had placed a cushion over the ear and his face showed all sorts of irritation,

"it's beautiful view", she said, giggling at his cute expressions.

"so what?, I just hear the traffic noise, close it nupur!, I am sleeping!", he said angrily and turned to the other side and gasping, nupur quickly closed the windows, "sorry", she murmured in a low voice but he showed no response.

She kept on gazing him for a few moments and then feeling strange she came out of the room. She felt weird and most of all she felt her eyes pockets getting wet.

"What the hell nupur?!!, she scolded herself, blinking eyes to make sure the wetness she was feeling in her eyes was fake. It was nothing, he just asked to close the windows and so what?/ .. but his tone!! .. PLEASE HUN!!, he was sleeping and got disturbed THAT IS IT!, try to remember how you behave when you are disturbed in your sleep?, She took a deep breath to calm things, it was simply nothing to shed tears on!!, but still the fact was that she WAS shedding tears, one did roll down her cheek and she wiped it off quickly, this is no way nupur! , for no reason ..

"I was rude, sorry", just then she felt that same feel of last night, as he hugged her from back and whispered in her ear.

As her mind encoded the meaning of his words, one more tear rolled down and before she could wipe it off he made her turn in his arms, "so sorry", he pouted, kissing on the tear and nupur looked up in his eyes, to find the same sincerity of last night.

"I should have behaved,, I mean who shouts on a day old bride"?, he made a sad face and nupur lowered her eyes, "sorry my bad, a one night old bride", he whispered naughtily and inspite of herself nupur broke in a smile.

"yes!, please keep smiling!, meri baton ko dil pe lene ki zarorat nahi hai, I just get angry and then behave like a jerk, sorry!", he said again and nupur smiled looking at him, "it's okay, koi baat nahi, and you were not rude, I just cry on every on every little thing", she said in a low voice and mayank pulled her close, "just like I get angry on every little thing ", he said in a jolly tone, thinking hopefully she will smile fully, but she didn't.

He was genuinely sorry and he knew what effect his shout had on her, and now seeing that hurt expression in her face made him feel so guilty!, better behavior was expected out of you Sharma *hmph* .

Hey come on nupur , I am ..

And his plead was interrupted by the door bell and nupur gasped, "I think aunty hon gi, please ap ja k change kar lo", she said quickly, , "hmm", he said and nupur quickly turned away and only took a step when she was pulled back and she collided with his chest

She looked at him dumbfounded, as he quickly headed close to her mouth and before she could even protest, her lips were captured in a kiss.

It was a soft kiss and when mayank pulled back after a few moments, he saw her eyes closed and that subtle smile with his ever favorite expression on her face ' blush.

"hmmm, now you look like my bride", he inhaled her fragrance and nupur opened her eyes smiling, "please, we have someone on the door", she managed to say coherently inspite of her nerves going on fire and stealing another kiss, mayank went inside the room.

**

"you better stop behaving as if you are made of glass!", nupur huffed and rushed to the main door.

**

He was digging the dresser for clothes, and smiled on the recent event, "she needs to be handled with care, she is pure glass!"

Chapter 10 - Page 47


Edited by Fantasia. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
SOOO...cuuute.,,,,,,,,loved them both😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
res!! :D

*edited*

Sunrays didn't shine much, as the morning was welcomed with a cloudy sky and wet roads, with water still dripping down the leaves of the trees. It had been raining whole night and someone was ecstatic to see the morning view,- Totally imaginable! Beautiful use of words and perfectly described! 👏👏

Aww Sajan are sho cute! They share a great loving bond! ❤️

Gunjan jaisi dost sab ko mile...kitna sochti hain Nupur ke bade mein! Aww! 😊

Mayank and nupur didn't sleep after they woke up due to the sound of rain. Surrendering themselves to each other completely once again, they were now talking about everything and anything about themselves, overcoming the shyness and apprehensions to a lot of extent. - surrended themselves to each other once again ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ *sigh* Oh so finally the must awaited conversation arrives where we can know about them more, specially Mayank!

"rain is not a weather for me, I consider it as a companion, I have seen all of my dreams in rains", - Even I feel the same as Nupur! In loneliness and pain, rain is the true companion! I so agree on that! 😳

"no other companions except for me do you understand Mrs Sharma", - Ahem ahem! Mr. Sharma toh abhi se jealous hone lage! Waah! 😆

And before she could utter something more, her lips were captured in sweet and soft kiss, and at this she really lost the count of the kisses they shared since the last night, but well who was interested in maths! ' she just kissed back!.- *gasp* yeh log thakte nahi hain kya? i hope they never gets tired! aur waise bhi, thakan ki kise chinta hain when ... *blush* aur maths ko bhi kisi chinta nahi hai ☺️☺️☺️☺️ *cheeks boiling* 😆

"you are jealous of a weather", nupur said shyly and he blew air on her cheeks "yes I am!, any problems?", he glared at her and she shook her head obediently. - Hehe nupur asked finally and omg! Such a genuine confession! i like it! 😃

"good!", with this he again bent on her neck, "you don't have a favorite weather?", she asked, with a high breath of course, "all weathers are my favorites, all of them are beautiful in their own way, summers, winters, spring, autumn, rains, all of them!", he smiled, raising his head and this time nupur frowned, "how can you like summers?, it's so hot!", she was amazed and mayank chuckled, "now this is no logic, so how can u like rains?, so many people get displaced and homeless?", he threw back the question and nupur opened her eyes more wide, "you are taking the argument to the wrong side", she shifted herself to a sitting position and mayank suppressed his smile over the way she was glaring and huffing and at the same time, trying to adjust the strap pf her dress - Their first argument! *sad puppy face* but these arguments will lead them to an eternal magic of love! ☺️ ☺️☺️

"it is not about the sufferings, even people suffer due to summers and ..

She was slipped back in the covers and nupur's mouth was left open as mayank rolled over her, "relax baby!, you frown too much!", he kissed her softly and nupur kissed back smiling,- Mayank Sharma seems extra-romantic!☺️☺️ Good for Nups! 😉

"I don't find any honesty in your answer", he winked and nupur giggled, - Aww i love this mischievous and naughty Mayank! ☺️

"I mean after marriage the coupe should be left alone na!, ye kiya hai .. you hardly give them time to talk!!", he huffed - Bechara Mayank! 🤣

and this time nupur giggled, "we have been talking the whole night", she said sweetly and mayank raised his head, "are you sure it was just talking?", he whispered in her ear and yet again making her nerves go on fire as he started to trace her bones,- OMG! Everything is extreme in Mayank...romance and even naughtiness for sure! ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️

She walked towards him smiling, and gazed at his innocent sleeping sight, she ruffled his hair and his eyes caught a small reddish mark on his neck, and blushing over the most possible source, she rubbed her finger over it and leaning down carefully, she planted a soft kiss over the mark and immediately moved away, fearing he might not wake up. - *sigh* that reddish mark...i can visualize that *blush*...aww Nupur kissed on that..how romantic..😳...☺️☺️

Nupur was enjoying the weather but Mayank shouted on her...😔...but then he apologized to her...that's good but he needs to adjust too..he needs to take care of nups happiness...after all,that's what a marriage is required...n now i can understand the meaning of what mayank's mom said to nupur..hope he understands the real meaning of this sacred bond soon...🤔

Loved when they were thinking about their behaviours towards each other...so finally Mr. Sharma understood that Nupur is delicate like glass...hope he keeps that in mind...😳...and the way Mayank apologized was SUPER CUTE...😳..anyone would forgive him after that...😛..OMG...the last cozy scene...i'm daydreaming now...☺️☺️☺️☺️


So these were my feelings reading ur update...apu,when our conditions are like this..i mean blushing so many times then pata nahin tumhara kya haal hota hoga...😆...i can understand hun..😉...and when the update does a lot of effects on the readers yet do u need to hear that it was JUST MAGICAL and PURE BLISS to read...well,it really was...BEAUTIFUL piece of work...SERENE...😍

Waiting for the next update...😊

Love,

Bidushy❤️


P.S.- Hope u r satisfied with my comment...😊

Edited by Bidz_cutegal - 14 years ago
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Fantuuu...Lovely update...it was really romantic😳😳

and now I m getting to know the real story!!...Nupur is just too emotional...she takes things very seriously and to her heart very soon...and Mayank is a kind of guy who sometimes overlooks the pain and dissapointement someone is feeling...like his mom said to Nupur"You would have to remind him that he is overlooking the pain"
now they would have to understand each other...and conquer those issues in their relation
Interesting!!...😉😉
Looking forward to the next part😳😳
Edited by aysha_mayur - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
damn i couldnt find my own res! :p

anyways coming directly to the update i stil cant see whts wrng with mayank!! 😕 as in why everyone thinks he is insensitive when he is making al the efforts in teh world to make up with Nupur!

the morning Gunjan-Sam scene was pretty cute!! lols!! i will remember that!!!!! 😳 and wish it rains on *that*day too!! 😉

as for teh Mayur scenes, they were heavenly!!!!! beyond beautiful!!!!! 😍
not to forget so damn romantic!!!!!!!! 😳

ok now yet again i cant do teh analysios of this part as i so wish to do bcz that would mean, ahem ahem , a blushing kinzu!!!😆

so what i m doing is i m giving the general opinion of teh part!!

firstly as i said it was beautiful!!! teh whole part was so heavenly!!! the romance that was in teh air, the *not so simply and extremely romantic* NUpur, the passionate Mayank!! it was all so beautiful!!! <3

as for the rain part, well i guess it was pretty natural!! Maaynk character is not that sensitive and so it takes him osme time to understadn sensitive people like Nupr!!! but thn again Nupr loves him teh way he is! this Mayank is her dream maaynk so is guess they will go along well!!!!! 😉

infact , when after being a little rude, he came back to her, that was teh cutest scene of all!! adn he knew how to make up for his rudeness too!!! so i personally m in love with teh couple!! :D


you better stop behaving as if you are made of glass!", nupur huffed and rushed to the main door.

**

He was digging the dresser for clothes, and smiled on the recent event, "she needs to be handled with care, she is pure glass!"




these lines were the jist i know! they said it all!! the differences between the couple and also their wish to overcome those differences!!!!!

beautiful part kinzuuu!!!!!!! loved it soo much!!!!!!1 ❤️


p.s. umi! my flaunting of my first post in comenting wasnt a good idea!!!! 😆
Edited by mulan. - 14 years ago
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dekha? dekha? maine kaha tha ke mayank is an insensitve fellow. yeh kya bat hui ke pehle daanto aur phir sorry kaho... *hmph*

mujhe yeh mayank bilkul pasand nahi hai...
loved the sajan part ...and yes, the romance between mayur also... lekin phir bhi this fellow needs to be a little more sensitive... 😊
thanks a lot for the PM... *both of us loved it* 😃
Edited by rapunzel_angel - 14 years ago
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awesome update!!!
really loved it❤️
continue soon

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