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This is happening during the end of fight of the Vampires and Warewolves. After Abhay and Alina become friends. This is my first attempt so forgive me.

On a edge of a mountain stood a lone figure in a long dress her wild curls flying in air. She was named Pia, because her mom use to tell her that she was special. At this moment she was feeling nothing. In a whole year her life changed, the real Pia was gone. The one stood there was someone else making.

She felt defeated by the battle of her mind and heart. As her mind and heart continue to battle.

Mind: Forget Abhay he does not care, if he did he would have not left you alone.
Heart: No, thats not true he does love me, maybe there was a reason why he is doing all this.
Mind: Really, I dont believe it.
Heart: I will never stop believing that he does not love me.
Mind: Stop torturing yourself over him, look at Jay he loves you and gives you a reason to smile.
Heart: I know but I cant stop Loving Abhay.
Mind: Abhay, Abhay he does not deserve your love and devotion after all he did, dating your sisters, now Alina. Just to keep you away from him, he did all this.
Mind: All he has ever done is hurt you again and again and you still want to go to him.
Heart: I know, but I dont want to believe that the love I saw in his eyes for me is not real.

While Pia continued to fight with herself...

Abhay was in his house with his parents Chand, Haseena and Alina. Discussing how to avoid further bloodshed, risk of exposure of their races and finish the centuries old feud once and for all. After a long time Abhay was feeling something uneasy, not about his world but about his mate, he saw in his vision that Pia is falling from the mountain. He got up all of a sudden screaming "NO PIA". The other three were shocked to see Abhay . Without another word he ran from there.

On the mountain edge Pia started to scream by her self Stop it I cant take this anymore. I have everything, parents, sisters, money and fame, then why do I feel so hollow, why I feel there is something missing. Why my heart only desires one thing that she cannot have thats Abhay. Why my heart is still holding this hope that someday he will come back to her. Hold her and never let her go by saying 'I Love You Pia". Why my heart does not understand this is not going to happen.

As Abhay reaches the spot where Pia is, when he sees her he felt relieved that she is okay. She is fine, but he starts to wonder what is she doing here all alone. Seeing her here, he could not resist but call her name Pia.

If you guys like my FF I will continue. Please do comment.

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sunflower52 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I know I am not a good writer like others. If you like the post press the like button
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey it was gud 👏👏 you have actually shown how piya is feeling inside and abhiya connection do cont i loved it and wats ur name
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Awesome. . Loved it
beautiful start
poor pia , confused b/w her mind & heart !
Continue soon
plz. . Do pm me
tc
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: pallavisarkar

hey it was gud 👏👏 you have actually shown how piya is feeling inside and abhiya connection do cont i loved it and wats ur name


My name is Salma and whats yours?
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Originally posted by: missglam


Awesome. . Loved it
beautiful start
poor pia , confused b/w her mind & heart !
Continue soon
plz. . Do pm me
tc


Thanks I will.
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hey very nice start dear
do continue soon
would love to read more
n add me in ur pm list
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u have described pia's emotional turmoil very well. please continue this.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesome start! I really like how you described Piya's inner battle between her mind and heart! I'm eagerly waiting for the next update! Please continue soon 😛 Oh and please add me to your PM list. Thanks!
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hey dr .'beautiful start..plz add me 2 ur pm list!

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